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Reviews for Universal Chaos

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on September 23, 2015
    so beautiful, Love it
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  • From ANON - Jester on June 23, 2014
    So cool. This worlds Harry is awesome, but I really think that could be annoying, someone who always
    thinks he is doing the right thing and downgrading your option even though he does not intend to.
    But anyway that flaw is nothing compared to what the other world Harry did and I am glad that he finally
    got help at the end.
    And I love the ending scene!
    In enjoyed this story a lot. Thank you
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  • From callistianstar on August 23, 2009
    Fantastic. And really really romantic and interesting in a way. I really like the place you chose to start off the story, right after the books where Harry would have a choice to live his life and find help and one where he wouldn't. I adore concepts like this. Not sure if you've heard of it, but I loved Sliding Doors, but this more indepth look and detailed theory of how other universes might exists is really fun. Wonderful job. It feels a bit sad at the end. While I'm glad they've decided to weather through all of this, the idea that they can't actually follow each other through the universes, that Harry or Draco might turn into someone intolerable down the road, or at least someone different is slightly depressing. Awesome job.
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  • From vampirekisses on July 24, 2009
    Great story that made me think a lot in a very good way.
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  • From ANON - dana_aeryn on July 21, 2009
    Liked this story a lot, especially Draco. Loved how eloquently he decribed why he would never love his world's Harry.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 21, 2009
    I was hoping we would see Harry return to his universe's Draco malfoy and have a nice awkward interaction. I guess I'm just a little cruel/curious?
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 20, 2009
    Outstanding job. Thank you for taking the time to share this wonderful story that you have written, it has been a pleasure to read. Till next time........and I do wish for a next time.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 20, 2009
    Oh I'm soooo sooooo going to miss this! One day you'll have to revisit this story world!
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  • From Enamoril on July 20, 2009
    You should make a side story of 'When Draco Met Draco' x3
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 20, 2009
    Dumbledore once said, "It is our choices that define us", and we make those every moment of our lives in order to move forward, or hesitate and wither away in fear. All three of them made a decision that has now formed a new realm of possibilities into existance. I'm glad that Harry and Draco have managed to stay in touch, but all that theorizing could become a bit of a headache to anyone, except perhaps Hermione, who would no doubt find it all quite fascinating. Harry's new occupation is a step in the right direction as he enjoys the results of his efforts while keeping himself centered as well. I'm glad it turned as well as can be expected and look forward to reading some of your other work as time allows, so with that said please continue to let the muse or plotbunny lead you on!;)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 19, 2009
    about #12 and perhaps the end...

    Well, that was a good conclusion between the three of them and a type of closure for
    the two Harrys.

    Personally, I'm glad you had the 'other' Harry contact Hermione, because
    she maybe a know-it-all, but she has a heart of gold and her Harry's interest
    in mind.

    Once Harry goes back, since obviously he has learned something from this
    experience, I get the feeling he WON'T be able to communicate with Draco.
    It'll be evil of you, but it would be good drama. :-)

    Even so, the 'other' Draco would, at least, be thankful he DID meet
    Harry, was helped by him and turn out to be a better man in the end.
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 17, 2009
    Good to see Potter looking better, even if he still wants Draco. To see the result of Potter's decision to seek professional help give birth to a new universe of choices was awesome indeed, and very impressive in how you detailed it too. This was a sight for only Harry and Potter, as Draco has no wish to change his decision concerning either man. Now I wait to see what you do next as you near the end of this creation of your ever fertile imagination-so go for it! xD!!! And please continue-ya!!!
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  • From ANON - Sandy on July 16, 2009
    If there is a new universe with a second Harry, will the 2nd Harry also go back to Harry's universe?
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 16, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 13!!!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 16, 2009
    Thank you for updating. I must say, I loved the picture painted of the new universes' birth, it was beautiful; excellent use of imagery! Please update once more when convenient for you.
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