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Reviews for Universal Chaos

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - polka dot on July 16, 2009
    That chapter made my head hurt.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 13, 2009
    about #11...

    *hears chamber of gun being cocked...and then a gunshot*

    Shoot, through the heart
    and you're to blame...
    You give love a bad name!

    O_0

    Daaaamn!!! That was cold-bloodedness at its finest. Put it in a bottle
    and watch it age! :-)

    But, it was necessary..hope the poh' child doesn't hang himself after that. :-/

    But, the other Harry can only blame himself, he started this mess and now he
    has to clean the S--- up.
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 13, 2009
    So it's here at last, a true confrontation between the three of them. The truth hurts, even when it comes from those you love, perhaps more from them than anyonelse. Still its managed to clear the air of any doubts or false hopes once and for all. Draco has regained his sense of worth and purpose in life, which includes who he wants in his life as well. Potter is not an option in any capacity. Harry must now realize what he and Draco can have together without any reservations on his part in order to keep what they've begun since they first met. Bravo and kudos to you for showing that life is not all sugary sweetness without some salt too. One can not enjoy one without the other. Anywho please continue to thrive and write on.;) TTFN
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 12, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 12!!!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 12, 2009
    *awaits Ron and Hermionie's arrival* Thank you for posting once more.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 12, 2009
    Ouch Draco was a total jerk and I'm surprised Harry got help after that instead of just curling into a ball and apparating home. Good for him.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 09, 2009
    Excellent job. I eagerly await the appearance of this Universe's Ron and Hermione. How are they doing? Professions? Personal relationship? Personality/life choice changes?
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 09, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 11!!! What will Draco do?
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  • From ANON - Kane on July 08, 2009
    I'm glad Harry is finally seeing the other Harry's pain, but the other Harry is in serious need of help. He probably also needs a change of environment for a while and a purpose, before he can think of pursuing Draco. And Draco should feel flattered that someone would go to such an attempt to apologise to him, its actions that matters not words. I feel as if when ever Draco and the other Harry met all they did was talk and not communicate, but by bring Harry into their universe he was trying to communicate how sorry he was, even though on some level he is still being selfish.
    This lovers triangle is sorta fun ;) - I look forward to how it progresses and turn out.
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 08, 2009
    This version of Harry seems more like the Draco of Harry's own universe, petty and childish. What a fool, when his tactics don't work he shifts the blame on to other people. Denial is not working here, and yes he does need to go to the mind healers, but not with Draco. I like the way Draco intends to keep in touch with Harry by visiting him in his universe, especially as there is a friendship there, and a budding trust worth preserving. This just gets better all the time, so please continue with more.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 08, 2009
    I'm so happy I think the other harry is going to get help and maybe Ron and Hermione will come back to him.
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on July 07, 2009
    im interested to see how u work this out in the end....will it be a happy ending or will it be a sad one....? the thing is...the draco in nice harrys universe is maybe going through the samething? because it seems that when harry thought about going to the mindhealers was about the time that mr and mrs malfoy would have killed themselves? mm...maybe....idk just a guess on my part...update soon!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on July 05, 2009
    Maybe Draco could go with Harry to his universe, leave behind the little that's left of his life. If there aren't any dimensional consequences to having more than one of the same person there, would that be a possibility? I'm very much wondering how this story is going to end, because at this point a 'Happy' Ending seems like it would be difficult.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 05, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 10!!! I'm terrified for them both!!!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 05, 2009
    Harry has alot of thinking to do, as he is now being diligently pursued by Draco. Clearly the man knows what he wants, even if Harry is more certain that it will somehow all end up badly. Harry has learned to be thoughtful of others feelings, but selflessly forgotten his own in the process. Nevertheless I gotta love a determinded Draco, who now has a focused goal in mind, and is Slytherin enough to carry it out. Looking forward to your next chapter if only to see where you go with this tale, so please continue-kay? ;)!!!
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