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From ANON - SP777 on July 04, 2009
about #8...

This comment just popped up in my head..what soap opera were you watching when
you came up with this messed up triangle???

I mean, Harry is messing around with someone else's potential lover [that is
if THAT Harry can get it together] and that 'someone else' is...him.

Seriously, when you think about it, isn't that messed up???

..and I KNOW he's going to be fighting 'himself' over this...good grief.
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From ANON - polka dot on July 04, 2009
That was fast. I didn't think harry would give in so quickly. I guess he's no saint after all.
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From ANON - MewMew2 on July 04, 2009
Excellent job! Thank you for updating this wonderful story once more, it's good to see Harry realize that long term satisfaction does no stem from short term torment and unhappiness. I eagerly look forward to the next installment.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 03, 2009
about #8...

You know I think I'll call this the 'Sigh & Shake your Head' chapter, because
I actually did that.

It started out beautifully, then you took us to Jackass' house.
Jackass-in-the-box, yep that will be the 'other' Harry's name, because he
refuses to leave that comfort zone.

Hell, he's refusing to leave the cupboard behind! I'm REALLY curious to
see how you pull this together towards the end.

PS: Oooh my God! I didn't think you would mention my name to MM2, you
could have taken credit for that. O_o
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From FallenAngel1129 on July 02, 2009
i wanna kick the other harrys whiny ass....can i ...please..? just write me into a chapter...it will be quick i promise hehe
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From thrnbrooke on July 02, 2009
Soooo need chapter 9! If Harry is sent home will he try to reconcile with his Draco? He should probably tell this Draco there's a chance he'll be sent home without notice!
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From ANON - MewMew2 on July 01, 2009
Thank you so much for finding the time to update this wonderful story! As a not to SP777, thank you for your vast knowledge of the King of Siam, etc etc etc.
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From ANON - polka dot on July 01, 2009
I feel sad for the other Harry. he's certainly not nice but he's also very unhappy and it shows.
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From ANON - Kale on July 01, 2009
Like all your other fics I have read I am enjoying this one. A very interesting concept of two Harries meeting and being at loggerheads.

I, however, think the summoned Harry is being a bit cold, unfair and judgemental to his other self. He has in fact fallen in love with Draco and while initially he agreed to heal Draco, he also did it and continues to do so because of his interest in him. Draco has indeed been through some traumatising events, but he too was a bastard (refering here to Harry's thought on his other self, that he has no right to be a bastard just because he is having issues) and Harry still decided to help him. It's when others are in such situations they should really rally around a person like what he did for Draco.

So I am afraid, in this case I am sympathising with the other Harry, he may have fallen for Draco for the wrong reasons, but when you fall, you fall. Plus he was trying to apologise to Draco and Draco, with his sharp tongue and wit, I beleive made things turn for the worse and this could because they were/are (for other Harry) in the wrong space. I hope the Harry's will be partnered with their counterparts of their own universe's in the end.

Looking forward to next chapter. Cheers
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From ANON - keikey on July 01, 2009
I adore your stories !!! And this one is no exception !You characters are complex and very mature in your descriptions. They have their own features and their behaviour matches perfectly their mind. I like it. Will you marry me ? XP

Hahhahahhahaha ! Sorry, a little daring me I guess :p
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From ANON - butterpie on July 01, 2009
Harry is a tough cookie, and now knows his other self by now well enough to remain firm and sincere in helping both him and Draco. The change in Draco alone have made his efforts more than worthwhile, even if he eventually must return to his own universe. I'm reminded of the title of a song called, "Where do I go from here",the title itself actually and can only wait to see what's next. So for now please continue to go with the flow. ;)!!!
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From ANON - SP777 *R.i.P. M.J* on June 26, 2009
oh, by the way...tell MewMew2 that the song, ''Getting to know You'' is
from the musical ''The King & I''.
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From ANON - SP777 on June 26, 2009
about #7...

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From ANON - butterpie on June 26, 2009
Harry has done his usual Gryffindore part, but the kudos go to Draco and Greg for facing up to sharing their mutual loss, and finding what they still have as old friends. This is a pivotal and positive moment in Draco's recovery from what he's been up to now-a recluse who is learning to live again. It also helped that Harry respected their need to sort this out on their own, which says good things about him too. All in all a chapter where everyone has come out feeling much better about themselves than originally anticipated. Hopefully down the line the other Harry will come to realize this too. Anywho this was a treat to read, so please continue the ride. ;)!!!
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From ANON - MewMew2 on June 25, 2009
For some reason the song 'Getting to know you, getting to know you my darling' from either Mary Poppins or The Sound of Music (I can't remember its origins) kept on playing inside of my head whilst I was reading your latest update. Regardless, thank you for finding the time to update once more, once again, excellent job!
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