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From ANON - SP777 on June 16, 2009
about #5...

First let me say, I FINALLY figured it out...thanks by the way. :-)

Second, next time I want to know a tid bit from you I'll email you, so 'others' won't
blab so much. Sorry...

Third, I was hoping once the 'other' Harry popped up Malfoy would have a slight aneurysm seeing
the two together and realize Potter was telling the truth.

Fourth, WILL the other Harry get it together...or will my stick come in handy?

Fifth, oh YEAH...why is it we haven't been treated to 'Run' yet or did you have plans to do some
changes to it??? That was COMPLETELY unexpected...and I didn't realize you were on FF also.
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From ANON - butterpie on June 16, 2009
Gotta love how you write this Harry who is patient and oh so clever as he manages to interest his new friend into gradually learning to open up and trust again. The other Harry only serves as a startling contrast to the one Draco was beginning to warm up to, and that is a step in the right direction. The warmth Harry felt seems to match Draco's as they continue to spend more time together, but I guess I'll have to wait and see what's next up your sleeve-lol! So please continue-kay? xD
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From ANON - momoko on June 16, 2009
good story
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From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2009
interesting.
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From ANON - Isadmalfoy on June 16, 2009
I loved the chapter Harry IS falling for Draco... I can only hope that Draco falls in love with Harry to... rsss

cant wait for the next chap...

Just one question... is Harry going to go back to his reality or he can send the other HArry in his place???
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From ANON - weepingtenshi on June 16, 2009
Loved the part with the other harry poping up... It's like 'You're cheating on me with... me...' but without the whole dating thing lol..

Man I wish I had know that the whole code thing was a real code.. It would have made it alot easier..

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From ANON - polka dot on June 16, 2009
Oh but I dont' think falling in love is a good idea when you're not in your own universe. That's a bit of a strain on the long distance relationship.
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From ANON - SP777 on June 14, 2009
about #4...

*Harry glares at 'other' Harry hoping to melt him into a
puddle of goo. I decide to stroll up.*

Me: ... ???? ... Uhh, is there a problem Harry?

Harry: *growls* Yeah...this OTHER Harry REFUSES to be honest, doesn't give
me a clue on what exactly is going on between him & Malfoy AND has the nerve
to act childish when things are not going up to speed, BECAUSE of the fact
they're NOT being honest!

Me: Wow...I know the feeling. That like some authoress I know who gives you
a clue of some sort about a certain story, but doesn't tell you if the clue
is pig latin or at LEAST give you an initial of what language you should be
looking at!

Harry: Huh?

Me: Nevermind...anyway, I got a solution. :-)

Harry: Like what??? :-/

Me: Whenever someone just exasperates me, I take out my 'Whoop-Ass' Stick
and just CLUNK them upside their measly head! Want to borrow it? :-)

Harry: Sure! *takes stick* I definitely will be doing some workout
with this!

'Other' Harry: Oy! You're not really going to use that on me....are you??? O_O

Harry: *smirks evilly* Batter up!!!!

*WHACK!!!*

*OWWW!!!!*

Me: Hey! Don't break it, I just might need to use it soon. ;-]
**********

So...now that's over.

COME TO DRACO MALFOY
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From ANON - isadmalfoy on June 14, 2009
Is just me, or Harry (the one that dont belong there) starting to like Malfoy... I mean realy like
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From ANON - weepingtenshi on June 13, 2009
I figure out you cose at the end of chap. 4.. It took like four pices of paper and an ice cream but I did it lol..

I figure the story was going in that direction, from the way you have set it up so far... But I am curious to see how you take it there..

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From Dezra on June 13, 2009
I am enjoying your story so far, I hope that Harry and Draco get together in this universe. Not sure if I like the ending you have planned though. But I still am looking forward to your story, you're doing a great job.

acraftycutie@yahoo.com
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From ANON - butterpie on June 13, 2009
Wow, finally an opening toward a chance at friendship and perhaps more. It just goes to show how much Harry needs to help even when being annoying in his approach. That's his specialty of course helping out despite the less than subtle reburks from Malfoy to where Harry resorted to acting out with the intent to provoke a response, even a negative one to get the ball rolling, so to speak. Malfoy still has genuine issues with both his world's Harry and life in general, but for now maybe, just maybe a sincere appeal to appreciate his home will help him to open up to this Harry. At least that is to be hoped for, and this should give Harry a reason to consider his own world's Malfoy is in need of a friend too. All in all you keep on giving the gift that never fails to delight me, so please continue.
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From ANON - celeste jacobs on June 13, 2009
I absolutely love this story!
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From ANON - MewMew2 on June 13, 2009
Excellent job. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, I can clearly envision Draco's private garden. Thank you for updating!
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From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2009
Having just read your latest chapter, I stick to my theory more than ever... But of course I don't know yet how the story will continue, I just enjoy.
Don't know what has happended to alternate Harry, but he is pretty selfish. Seems he's somehow switched sides with Draco in this other universe?
Quite funny, the way Harry is stalking Draco!

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