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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on June 10, 2009
    about #3...

    Okay, I just want to know...you can even answer in some type of code for
    me to figure out...WILL Harry go back to his universe before the story is
    over & make a move towards HIS Draco???

    By the way, I'm under the impression if the 'other' Harry had Ron & Hermione
    in his life, they would have been able to 'ground' him...help him see the other
    side of things, think things through and 'temper' that temper of his.

    ALso, out of curiousity, where did you come up with your 'name'?
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on June 10, 2009
    I definitely loved the descriptions of Draco's attitude and perceptions in this chapter. You could actually feel and see him tearing at the seams trying to withstand the sympathy Harry is giving him. Very nicely done.

    I love the way Harry just won't quit! He's much more understanding and I can't wait to see where their relationship goes.

    Great chapter!


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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 10, 2009
    This is coming along, it's a little out there, but the other Harry needs some sympathy too.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 10, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 4!!! What will Draco do now?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2009
    The way it looks now I would say there is no way the alternate Harry can make a match with his Draco. No Way. But "our" Harry will probably fall for him - and what will happen then? Harry has to return to his own universe - or will he send the other Harry back, because he is better suited to the other universer? Speculation, I know. But this story reminds me a little of your "Wondrous Mirror".
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  • From ANON - butterpie on June 10, 2009
    Hello again. So this Draco has lost his family, his fortune, and his way, wowsers that a lot to take in, and his Harry is such a jerk to boot. I can see the simpatico-like feeling of finding a person who needs help much like he did after all Harry went through during his own time of need. Clearly this guy needs a friend, and no one is better suited to offer this then our Harry. Like his mom he has the amazing ability to see to see another person better than they can see themselves. Draco needs someone to just be there for him to help him let go of his pain before it devours him whole. He needs to learn that it is okay to live, laugh, and love as before. Life is too short to spend it looking back and forgetting to enjoy today. Here is a precious gift of friendship in the offering so I sincerely hope Draco doesn't throw it away. I look forward to your next chapter-so please continue to shine on!
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  • From KodaijinYurei on June 09, 2009
    I really like how this story is panning out so far, and I like how people are remaining in character even though the situation is starting to get dynamic. Please continue updating, I really want to find out how things turn out! >.> and see the Harry from the universe we know get together with the Draco from the other universe.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 07, 2009
    about 2...

    Harry is truly going to earn that title of 'Saint Potter', because I personally
    would have taken the liberty of whacking the other me upside the head a couple
    of times, with a sound speech AND adding 'jackass' in that sentence.

    I think Harry is going to wind putting those 2 in the same room and say 'look
    this is how it's going to go.'

    By the way, liked how you pulled off Draco's 'mazing Snitch catch that was kinda
    the scenario I was trying to describe to you 4 months ago involving ''Draco
    going against Harry in a Quidditch Game & Draco winds up helping to beat Gryffindor and inventing a move for Hogwarts' History book.''

    *sigh*...
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 07, 2009
    Sooo wonder about the past relationship between Harry and Draco in this world!!!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on June 06, 2009
    Harry sure has his work cut out for himself. Malfoy has honest issues with the Potter of his world, but was touched by this gentler version of him somehow sensing that this was not the man he already knew too well. Harry will definitely not come away from this untouched by what he's seen and felt, and somehow his Malfoy will no doubt benefit from this encounter. I can't help but be entralled by what you started here so please continue.
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  • From on June 06, 2009
    Wow...this other Harry is a complete Asshat.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on June 06, 2009
    Lovely chapter!

    Draco desperation with Harry makes so much sense. You explained his story, and people's aversion to him, perfectly. And the other Harry? A berk. Definitely a berk.

    I can't wait to see how things progress. And I had the weirdest moment when Harry was sympathizing and touching the other Harry's hands. It was very weird when you think about it :P

    Looking out for the next update! ^^
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  • From on June 04, 2009
    Ah damn I was hoping there was another chapter after this. I'm so very intrigued. But your fics are always so awesome!
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on June 03, 2009
    You know what would be both interesting and hot? Having Harry/Harry/Draco happen. The original Harry (who doesn't have a crush on Malfoy) starts to find himself falling in love with Draco and doesn't want to leave and then Draco somehow manages to convince both Harry's to be with him. It could be very hot. Kamerreon over at hpfandom had a cross-dimensional story with Harry/Harry. I don't know if she's re-posted it yet since she came back.
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  • From ANON - Black Padfoot on June 03, 2009
    Wow... sounds interesting so far! Can't wait to see the rest...! =)
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