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Reviews for Move, Countermove

By : ronsmistress
  • From luciusmalfoy76 on June 06, 2009
    Please write the wedding!
    I'd love to see what happens, peoples reactions and so.
    These stories are (To quote Ron Weasly) bloody brilliant.
    I really have enjoyed reading them
    becky.


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  • From kazfeist on June 06, 2009
    Very nice ending...you could do a wedding for the epilogue, though. :D
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  • From goldiducks on June 06, 2009
    wow! i'm impressed the first one was great but i think i like the sequel even more :)
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  • From dragongirl on June 05, 2009
    Again pls tissue alert needed on #7... hey that is so beautiful and cute.. That is the Draco I love and never transpire on the JK Rowlings books, I am greatful to her but yeap I am more greatfull to the wonderful imaginations of my fan fic writers.. BRAVO!!!!!!!!!
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  • From emmibubbles07 on June 05, 2009
    You update like nobody's business! Love it. =]

    A few errors here & there,but over all, love the chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From emmibubbles07 on June 05, 2009
    Sadness to how it ended! But,I love how it was written!! Can't wait to see how Draco tries ti fix this. Great work!!
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  • From margaritama on June 05, 2009
    Oh my....what now? Lucius you big fathead and Draco obviously didn't mean how it was taken. Oh dear.
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  • From margaritama on June 05, 2009
    I adore this story and relationship...so fun.
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  • From pickles87 on June 05, 2009
    LOVE IT!
    Now I must go pack for the scout camping trip.
    Say a prayer for me. I'll be surrounded by a bunch of brownies.
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  • From kazfeist on June 05, 2009
    Very interesting update....but I really don't foresee any problems. They're both adults, independent financially, and I can't see why societal approval would matter to either of them. Hopefully, Hermione won't find out any evidence presently linking Lucius to the Death Eaters....or will she? :D
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  • From margaritama on June 05, 2009
    that was a great dinner scene...this Draco is so mature but so sexy and quietly commanding which is what Hermione needs. NIIIICE
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  • From dragongirl on June 05, 2009
    Love it Love it Love it... Specially Narcissa controling Lucius is very funny!!!
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  • From caseyjarryn on June 05, 2009
    wow! great chapter,
    update soon!
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  • From dragongirl on June 04, 2009
    I love this game ... More please!
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  • From Eilisbelle on June 04, 2009
    Nice move on Hermione's part..... *giggle*
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