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Reviews for Just a Daydream

By : ronsmistress
  • From MotekElm on March 24, 2017

    Fantastic


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  • From ANON - Liz on April 25, 2015
    Your plot was good and the story Draco "wrote" after he read Hermione's notebook was a hoot. You do need a little editing for punctuation, spelling and grammar, nothing major, though. I was sad with the way you ended it. :( I always root for Draco and Hermione to stay together. :)
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 25, 2009
    This was a great story.
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  • From Coipje on June 21, 2009
    oooh Hermione is such a bitch
    the cheap bastard
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  • From Robs on June 19, 2009
    Noooooo! You can't end there! You should write a sequel, or an epilogue....please? That last chapter was great. I love the way Draco challenged her, and she challenged him right back. Fabulous!
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  • From PixieStick on June 18, 2009
    Well I did like this story till I read the end. Please don't let it end this way, I think we all need more closure.
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  • From Tanya on June 18, 2009
    Will there be a sequel?? Please :) love the story
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  • From rini868 on June 18, 2009
    :O Seriously? Is this a joke? Please tell me it isn't and that you've got more chapters or a sequel in the making?

    I mean even if they don't end up together, there should be at least some more closure between Draco and Hermione. But that doesn't mean I want them to break up, they should be together.

    Please continue this in some way, it's very good but could be wonderful with a little more :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2009
    WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN..."THE END"..ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT..DAMN IT,,POST MORE AND SOON... ok, now that thats out of my system, this is really good, please post more soon,,dont end it like that..
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  • From dragongirl on June 18, 2009
    Sequel Sequel Sequel.. Yes is all written in the lines between.. Please!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From margaritama on June 18, 2009
    WHAT?????? ARE YOU KIDDING????? Um, you had better write an epilogue or a sequel or SOMETHING! ARGH!

    PS: fun fic but the ending - argh! *clutches heart*
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  • From charlottebuchannan on June 18, 2009
    Love love love this story, but I'm sure I'm not the only one to be very disappointed with the ending. I'm all for a happy ending where they end up together, and you may not be for it. But seriously, I think you can pull a couple more very interesting chapters from this story! It seems like a cliff hanger ending. I was kind of underwhelmed. Maybe you could have a chapter where Malfoy tries to fight for her? or a chapter of them after school? They could be together, or not together, and come across eachother? I love this story, and I enjoy the way you write, and I just don't think the ending does either justice.
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  • From emmibubbles07 on June 18, 2009
    That cannot be the end!...Is it?? I hope not. Great chapter! A few errors here and there, but amazing nontheless!!
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  • From ExperienceMyDreams on June 18, 2009
    You HAVE to be joking me right????????? You just killed me!!!! All your stories have happy endings why not this one????? I'm floored! I don't believe it!!! I'm plying out a better ending in my head but it's just not right!! I'm going to review all the damn time until I get a better ending... ok maybe not but damn it all to hell that just sucked!! But great story, sad about the ending!!!
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  • From thiskittenhasclawz on June 18, 2009
    you so can't end it there, the story hasn't finished!!
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