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Reviews for Incandescence

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From on July 05, 2009
    Oooo! Now I can't decide which I want to win more! Of course I'd love for Harry to have to be open with Draco and answer his questions. But then I'd also really enjoy an auror lesson for Draco in which Harry is in total control. That seems like great fun. So I'm sure I'll be happy no matter which outcome this bet has. Not to mention they held hands, so I'm already happy ^_^

    Hmm, Yolanda continues to intrigue me. She's such a strange character, I rather like her xD I'm excited to find out what Draco can weasel out of her at the Hog's Head--that is, if there is anything to be weaseled out.
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 05, 2009
    I can't help but wonder if Harry is looking for the telltale signs of immanent death that would suggest a risk of danger to Draco. That is both touching, yet distubingly eerie at the same time. It must be depressing to have such uncommon knowledge, which makes for a lonely existance, especially to someone like Harry who's life had been harrowing enough since he was a small babe. This Yoland Timpany maybe a red herring, but she looks the part of someone who's not to be trifled with in any capacity. At any rate it was good to see them making a friendly wager along with planning their trap, which hopefully will begin to draw them closer together. You've managed to whet my appetite for more, so please continue to slowly unravel this juicy mystery. ;) ta for now!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 05, 2009
    Interesting bet now no matter who wins they spend the evening together, so it's a win-win, though the itching powder sounds funnier.
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  • From on July 02, 2009
    Wow! So much information in this chapter! Quite the twist with the Deathly Hallows/Resurrection Stone. I like how Harry sees (a cliche twist) death (a very uncliche twist). You have such a way of making the original unoriginal. It's fascinating every time a new bump in the story is uncovered.

    Hmm, this Yolanda sounds shifty. Although mad men sometimes are more interesting to write about than sane men her enjoyment at ruining public figures seems odd. Can't wait to find out more about Draco's hunch!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 02, 2009
    I dothink that the classics are the best and probably so does Harry. He's just well read on muggle authors or something.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 02, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 8!!! Is it this Yolanda person? And how does she know?
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  • From ANON - Perona on July 02, 2009
    Your head is full of the most interesting plot-lines! I don't usually review, but I felt compelled, because I pounce whenever you update on of your fics. I love the dynamic you craft between Harry and Draco, and the progression of their relationship. It's always filled with passion, tension and entertaining verbal sparring. I love that the characters have flaws, and the slow build up to Harry and Draco's romantic entanglements seems more realistic given their turbulent history. Anyway, I love your writing! Your Harry and Draco are always fun to read about. I can't wait to read more, of this story and the others you've got on the update cycle right now! Brilliant!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 02, 2009
    How distubing to see what Harry has seen, and as Hermione once said before it's not good to hear, or in this case see things that others can not whether in the wizarding or the muggle world. Draco must wonder how can he bear it, this terrible gift of knowing the evil that others do, even to what awaits them in the beyond. Still it is a step in the right direction for Harry to seek help from Draco who has already made an effort on his behalf. This is a very interesting use of the Deathly Hallows as a connection to the beyond, with serious consequences for those who meddle in the lives of others no matter what their reasons. Please continue with this fascinating tale of yours.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 29, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 7! He decided to drop the book? Oh holy moly!!!! Who attacked him? Sounds like Luna with her weird animals!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 28, 2009
    about #6...[I think]

    There were a couple things I wanted to mention but I got caught up
    watching an awards show...and forgot.

    So, here's the one thing...

    As I was reading this it hit me, is Draco based on you? With the personality
    and venture into the world of writers/journalism?
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on June 28, 2009
    ohooooo someone is gonna get their butt whooped if harry finds out who has been after him and who attacked draco. can't wait!
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  • From ANON - allyroksmuch on June 28, 2009
    this story is soo good and getting better chapter by chapter! Can't wait till theh next chapter is up!
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  • From on June 28, 2009
    Ooo, that ink weapon sounds nasty... I want some!

    But yay! They're gonna be a team now! And Draco doesn't have to worry about his promise. Cause one day, when they're in love and married and have a hoard of children, Harry will let him write a novel and have only one publication made for their own person library :D

    I particularly enjoyed the excerpt from Draco's novel about Dean Thomas. It's a very profound observation. Everyone looks at stars and sees beauty but sometimes there's more than that. It makes me want to go star gazing ^_^

    Can't wait for the next update and more Harry/Draco interaction!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on June 28, 2009
    Finally Potter has begun to accept that he could use some help with his deranged adversary. Draco has taken the first step toward flushing out this poisonious writer who heretofore has enjoyed playing a particularly nasty game of cat and mouse with its singular prey. Only a fool would dare to take on Potter now with a Malfoy at his side. The use of ink combined with the toad suggests Neville Longbottom or perhaps an acquaintance of his, but hey that's just a guess on my part. Anywho tallyho as the game is afoot in this tale worthy of the great Sherlock Holmes! So please continue to write more! xD!!!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on June 26, 2009
    hmm looks like maybe draco is starting to realize that he wants to get to know harry as something more than a rival and former schoolmate
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