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Reviews for Incandescence

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - butterpie on June 14, 2009
    Well that went as well as expected. His rating just went up from annoying to infuriating where Harry is concerned, and that could have serious consequences for him and even from his own family. Harry might take legal action, and frankly I couldn't blame him for such a serious breech of privacy. How will Draco make up for this not so little faux paux is clearly up to you, so I guess I must be patient for now. So please continue this relentless tug of war.
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  • From ANON - Blood Lust 777 on June 14, 2009
    Ha I knew he would caught, and Draco thinks himself a shadow...what a load of crap.
    Excited for the next chapter.
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  • From on June 14, 2009
    Excellent first chapter! So very well written it makes me want to cry ;)

    I actually haven't yet read a post Deathly Hallows. I've been too scared they might ruin the thrill of Rowling's perfect last book. But Incandescence hasn't done that (so far) because of the way you've written your Harry, I think. I love the intelligent, strong, independent, and (most of all) war-hardended Harry. Which is probably why Rowling's epilogue wasn't 100% for me. I would have liked to see a bit more (Oh, I hate this word) angst. But you're Harry has the perfect amount of angst and also sexiness ;)

    I'm also appriciative of your Draco. Peaceful, reserved, and yet still a complete snob. I think that you've created the perfect balance between him and Harry, which will make them fit right together when the time comes.

    I can't wait to read more! If the rest of the story is half so good as the first chapter, I'll scream from the rooftops xD
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  • From on June 13, 2009
    Oooh very interesting. I hope you write more of this soon. Will it be a longer fic? You just finished one a few days ago right?
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  • From ANON - butterpie on June 12, 2009
    Good title for this chapter as Harry and Draco are the very image of immovable object and irresistible force with both of them determined to win this tug of war over Harry's memories of the war. Draco is way too sure of himself, and I wouldn't put it pass Harry not to take a peek inside his thoughts even as they shared their dinner together. Harry has little reason to trust any writer, much less his former rival from his Hogswarts' days when it comes to sharing any portion of his life so freely and without some lingering reservations to boot. Perhaps it would help Draco to gain Harry's trust by talking about his own wartime memories, especially those involving what he tried to do for the Dark Lord in order to protect his parents-his family. That coupled with a sincere regret for his past behavior in regards toward Harry and his friends might be a step in the right direction. At any rate please continue to feed my addiction to your unique ability to tell a tale that keeps me coming back for more.





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  • From thrnbrooke on June 12, 2009
    Can't wait for chapter 3! Harry wants to cook for Draco?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 11, 2009
    about #2

    Whoa! O_o

    Now, THIS is awesome..so far. A story you can REALLY sink your teeth into
    and STILL not be full until it's almost at the end! :-)

    Praise! Praise to the author, who is on vacation!

    What I'd liked about this right away was your description of Harry right off
    the bat. You immediately gave me a visual of a MAN, who's lived a lot of
    intense years & is VERY sure of himself...on the outside. No telling what
    the inside is like.

    Plus, it's interesting how you've made Draco a writer & the description of
    his world seems spot on. Makes me wonder have you considered making writing
    your main profession in some type of venue?

    Anyway, do a reader a favor and break down the meaning of your story title.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on June 11, 2009
    wow this seems really great! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Alex on June 11, 2009
    Iam officially addicted! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Blood Lust 777 on June 11, 2009
    Good job, I really love it and I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From Juana13 on June 11, 2009
    His correspondence.... hmmmm well it seems like Draco hasnt gotten far in finding out anything about harry, other than the mysterious letter. Is Draco gonna investigate now?
    ooooh, i cant wait! I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on June 11, 2009
    So Malfoy is out to score another book based on the quintessential hero of heroes with Potter. I'm curious to see what their dinner will consist of as they attempt to verbally dance around each other and see who gives in first. More to the point will you make this another serious one, or will there be comic moments to up the ante when it comes to the end? However you write it is fine with me, but please continue to do your thing-kay? TTFN.
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  • From Lunamaru on June 10, 2009
    Wow, this story just caught my attention, like so many other stories of yours, and I can't wait for Harry and Draco's dinner! :D
    It is infinitely amazing how you captured Draco in this chapter, and I like how you portray Harry, too. They'll make this story all the better as it progresses! :D Hurry and update! I'll be waiting!
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  • From ANON - anonny on June 10, 2009
    will there b smutness involved inthis lovely tale ?
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  • From ANON - Black Padfoot on June 09, 2009
    Wow...! I can already tell this is going to be a fantastic story! I'm intrigued and you've definitely gained yourself a reader to follow this one right through! =)
    Can't wait to see more soon,
    Stef =)
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