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Reviews for Incandescence

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on September 27, 2015
    oh god - wow.

    that was - er - wow.

    BRILLIANT story, from start to end.

    I loved every part of it!
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  • From YamiBakura on November 23, 2010
    This is a beautiful story, and quite possibly one of my favourites, ever.
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  • From callistianstar on August 30, 2009
    (Is that the reason he
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  • From KristalR on July 25, 2009
    WOW, I've been looking for a serious Harry/Draco fic all day, it must have been fate that brought us together lol. You're really a good writer, you caught my interest from the very start right to the very end { which was perfect by the way}, truly brilliant! You really have a way with words {this one I favor the most} as quoted from Draco "because the writer is the god of the story, he can give them whatever they want." well not only did you give the characters in your story what they wanted, but you also gave your readers exactly what they wanted as well, not an easy feat, but you did it very well.

    Great Job!!

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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 22, 2009
    i loved this!!! i really liked the part in the hospital with them, made me go awww and wish i had someone to be there for me the way harry was for draco
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 22, 2009
    Vivant! I am soooo going to miss this!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 22, 2009
    How fitting that Draco finally realized that he had a story of his own to write. Many hands have guided him along the way, but Harry has proven himself the best at keeping him motivated-yeah! We should all have such good people at our side keeping the homefires lit, especially in the bedroom lol! It has come full circle and I'm sorry to see it end, but gladder still that it turned out so well. Kudos again to you and please continue to show us more of your ever fertile imagination-oh yeah!
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  • From ANON - Kelsey on July 21, 2009
    That was very nice. :3 You're writing is wonderful~
    Though, I am very disappointed there was no sex. :[
    Nonetheless, amazing job.
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  • From ANON - Blood on the Water on July 21, 2009
    Wow, today has been so full of good things! I forgot to check yesterday for an update, so when I checked for a new chapter of Their Phoenix, I just about smacked myself for forgetting. And I so knew what Draco was going to name his book, or first book, at least. The Incandescence Trilogy? I'd read that.
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  • From ANON - dana_aeryn on July 21, 2009
    I really enjoyed this. Love how Draco grew throughout the story and loved the revlation of Harry's powers. also enjoyed your Luna.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 21, 2009
    A trilogy, hmm? Well Malfoy does have quite the ego. I don't think a book on the History of the Malfoys will sell well unless he's willing to smear the family name a little. hehehe
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  • From on July 21, 2009
    Wow! That was an excellent ending!

    I loved the bit with Luna and Neville. Those two really make me smile :) And of course! I felt exactly what Draco felt when Cassidy gave him the idea of writing about himself. That feeling of mentally slapping yourself in the forehead. It's so obvious and yet I hadn't thought of it either xD

    I love how you ended with Harry and Draco in a comfortable relationship without changing Harry's character. Too often authors write a hard Harry who falls in love with Draco and becomes soft, mushy, romantic Harry. Your ending was very well done--hell, the entire story was amazing! Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)
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  • From Juana13 on July 21, 2009
    hahahaha Loved this! thanks for writing it, and i look forward to more works from you : )
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on July 20, 2009
    ohh i so hurtin to see where u take this now haha!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 19, 2009
    about #11...

    I have to say if I haven't already that I am in love with this
    version of Draco that you've created. He's witty, funny and the 'funny man' to
    Harry's 'straight man', which is a uncommon or I should say, not regularly
    seen in this section.

    I take it he's somewhat patterned after you?

    I get the feeling the story is coming to a close, but to be honest I can see...or maybe not. Never mind.

    Oh YEAH, you got me curious about what it is Draco has written regarding the other
    novels, ever thought about doing side stories on what he wrote in the other sections?
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