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Reviews for Second Time Around

By : RynStar15
  • From AlaskaFoxx on October 22, 2017

    As always, LOVING your work. I'm actually stalking it a bit, lol. It's just so good! I love how you portray Draco!


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  • From ANON - pickles87 on July 15, 2015
    Chapter 4
    the last paragraph I can picture on the front of a romance novel
    great story so far
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  • From CafeAuLait on May 17, 2011
    Wow! I can't believe he hit her. I find it interesting that he's grabbed her heart before, but he never realized her was hurting her. *eye roll*
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  • From CafeAuLait on May 17, 2011
    I laughed out loud when she went on about S.P.E.W. and the mistreatment of house elves.

    Schelling ablik
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  • From CafeAuLait on May 17, 2011
    Aww poor Hermione. Ron is right bastard.
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  • From newtothis on October 07, 2010
    i am a huge ron fan, i dont like that you made him into a jerk, but i really like this story. you show how a marrige fall apart. and there friendship is still there even after every thing.


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  • From TheLadyMeow on March 01, 2010
    Congratulations! You've been rec'd!

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  • From fan8225 on November 27, 2009
    I just finished your story! it is awesome! The interchange between Draco and Hermione was HOT! Also great plot and buildup to the confrontation and action scenes. Overall a great fic. that i really enjoyed!
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  • From mlui on August 31, 2009
    Aww, what a great ending. Though I would've thought they'd get married before Ron did. But I guess not. I dunno, I found that very awkward having Ron's mistress (and now wife) as her bridesmaid. Personally, I think that makes Hermione look like a pushover even more. Inviting them to the wedding is another thing, but particiipating?? I completely disagree.
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  • From DragonHeartstring on August 25, 2009
    It was beautiful.
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  • From ExperimentalMe on August 25, 2009
    Oh my goodness, I got plenty of guilty pleasure out of that! I do believe I'm feeling the after effects still. What a perfect love story with lots of angst and a smattering of delicious smut. Great length too. You are a master and that story is definitely on my all time favorites!
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  • From Robs on August 25, 2009
    OMG, I actually nearly cried at the end! For me that's pretty bad, because I never cry at books! That was an utterly brilliant ending to an utterly brilliant story, and I commend you for writing it. Everything just flowed so well from chapter to chapter, and the whole story was filled with suspense, so you never knew quite what was going to happen next. I am also following Haunted, and I will check out the new one you mentioned too. Keep up the good work!
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  • From katiekrm on August 25, 2009
    Brains squeezed out of ears? That is so gross. lol I've thought about what makes horrible people bad and wondered if I had grown up the way they did if I would be any better. That says a lot about Draco's character. He had so much going against him, but he still managed to become a wonderful person in the end, thanks to the chance Hermione gave him. This was a very romantic fic. That being said, I didn't want Rebekkah at Hermione's wedding or at least not mentioned. I am obviously not as forgiving as Hermione, bad me. She and Ron gave Hermione one whole year of pain. And then Hermione panicked when she thought she might not be good enough and said she couldn't go through that again and Rebekkah laughed when she and Ron were responsible for that panick and all that pain. Ugh! Her presence just made me think of how awful Ron was to Hermione and it put a damper on the wedding for me and took my focus off of Draco and Hermione, which sucked b/c their romance has been a beautiful one. It's good to forgive and not to dwell, but I don't think people who were able to continuously hurt her for so long deserve spots in the wedding party. I would have preferred a mention that Hermione was able to forgive Ron, but they would never have the kind of friendship they once did b/c that trust had been broken, but she could still wish him the best. I realize Ron and Hermione's marriage was not meant to be and Ron didn't mean to fall in love, but he chose to lie, he chose to stay out late every night, he chose to cheat, and he chose to drag it out for a year no matter how much he hurt his best friend. And he hit her. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE this fic. Not so much love for Rebekkah and Ron.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 24, 2009
    Hello there. I don't know how I missed the last chapter, but I am thrilled I got to read the last two together. It was sweet and perfect. Thank you for a wonderful story. I love a good happily ever after. HG4eva
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  • From kazfeist on August 24, 2009
    LOVED the last two chappies. Unfortunately, either Priscilla's has taken down that pic, or there is another tag to it. I trawled through the entire site looking for style 50435, and couldn't find it. The wedding sounded lovely, and I love happy endings, as you may have guessed. Thanks for a wonderful journey! :D If you want to email me another link, it's kazfeist at gmail dot com. :D
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