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Reviews for Second Time Around

By : RynStar15
  • From LadyDisdain on July 03, 2009
    Oeh the plot thickens..>!!
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  • From katiekrm on July 03, 2009
    I really love this fic. I'm glad Draco is being such an infuriating and attentive watchdog. I love it when he calls Ginny Weaslette. I eagerly await the next chapter!
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  • From dragongirl on July 03, 2009
    This is getting very complicated, well all divorce are... We need more and quickly...
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  • From margaritama on July 03, 2009
    hi -- not sure what you mean by scrolling problem. this chappie was fine.

    oh ryan: so fiery is that Ginny. my goodness, she was like a damn steamroller, my body aches....she nearly gave me whiplash. she was high on emotion the entire time and she entered as fiery as she left...wonderful writing. Draco is pressing and pressing more into Hermione's life...he has a hidden agenda, I just know it. I love how you're revealing it all do deliciously.
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  • From voraciousreader on July 03, 2009
    That's it, grab the 'raid', Skeeter's goin' down! Or worse, catch her, make her swear an oath to tell nothing but the truth without innuendo or slant and then tell her the entire story. Loved the Ginny/ Hermione interchange.
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  • From Snakekat on July 03, 2009
    This story just keeps getting better and better. Well done
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  • From kazfeist on July 03, 2009
    I didn't notice any scrolling problem at all. Loved the most recent chapter. :D
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  • From From56to62 on July 03, 2009
    Best chatper yet! I loved all the dialogue. Moved along smoothly and quickly. And I love how Draco's always cutting her off with the "Draco."'s haahhaah. that would be infuriating. And i found your writting overtly good in this chapter. I liked that plugging her ears bit. Please update quickly! Can't wait.
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  • From emmibubbles07 on July 03, 2009
    Man! I didn't want it to end!! Can't wait for the next one! Great job!! =]
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  • From mlui on July 02, 2009
    I really enjoyed reading this story. Ron is despicable for cheating on Hermione. I honestly burst out laughing when I heard that she can get divorced for not doing his "husbandly duties". I hope everything goes smoothly (though I doubt that will happen). I'm glad Hermione has someplace private to stay. Greece is fabulous and I could really imagine being on the island. Though I can understand her relunctance to just stay at his place without paying for anything or even to repay the debt he owed her. I /was/ surprised that Hermione Apparated from the island dressed like that, even to Harry and Ginny's place. Fabulously written and I hope you'll update again soon! =)
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  • From LadyNiteRaven on July 01, 2009
    I like the story very much. However, can you please stop putting long lines of ============= after your story?
    It causes the story th have a scroll bar at the bottom of the screen and you have to keep moving it back and forth to read a sentence.
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  • From LadyDisdain on July 01, 2009
    Lovely updates my dear! Good job!
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  • From LadyKildare on June 30, 2009
    Hello, I'm usually a lurker on this site as English is not my mother language, but your stories are so good (and Merlin knows I am picky) that I just had to step out of the shadows to congratulate you for the quality of your work.
    You manage to make us feel the characters' emotions as if we were there, with them, without being sappy or overly descriptive. I find myself crying for Hermione, hurting and mourning her marriage with her...
    Your writing is highly addictive, and I can't wait to read more of you. Thank you very much for those beautiful emotions your words stir in me :)
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  • From Robs on June 30, 2009
    Another fabulous chapter. It wasn't going to be long before Skeeter stuck her nose in. I wonder what stories she will be printing? I'm also intrigued as to what Ron's next move is going to be. Won't Hermione moving into Draco's house affect her case? Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From pstibbons on June 30, 2009
    best lines:
    He knew Hermione didn’t deserve the way Ron was treating her but he didn’t want to lose his best friend by calling him out on it.

    (Shows what kind of worthless man HArry is... men always stick together, the bastards)

    But another part of him, the large part that thought about Hermione receiving the wrath of Ron’s anger, wanted to rage and scream, show Ron that he hadn’t lost his DA skills. He heard a small snap and looked down to realize he was gripping the teacup so hard it had cracked.

    (What use is hitting a fucking cup? Hit Ron!)

    “I defeated Voldemort for a reason. If you ever, ever hurt Hermione again, I won’t take pity on you for being my best mate. I will kill you. Stay away from her until you can get your act together. Do you understand me?”

    (All bluff Potter. You'd never hit your little sidekick.)

    Because right now, all I can see is a pathetic drunk fuck-up with no future. It’s slipping down the drain faster than you can imagine....Now get the fuck out of my kitchen before I decide against giving you one more chance and beat the living shit out of you.”

    worried about Hermione. Who would do this to her? Who would crawl into bed next to her and cherish her as she should be, as she deserved to be? How would Ron ever be able to get her back?

    (Of course, Harry still thinks that Ron can cherish Hermione. He certainly won't accept Draco doing it. For all his words, HArry is Ron's friend before he is Hermione's friend.)

    Did you really think I’d forget so easily what you did for me all those years ago? Hermione, you saved my life, the least I can do is help you fix yours. So I suggest before you insult me to stop putting everything into line and columns of debts that will need to be repaid and just accept what I am doing is being done out of friendship and respect.

    She stilled. “Draco. I didn’t mean to insult you. I appreciate everything you are doing for me. I’m just not used to it,” she smiled sadly.

    “Alright, if you must know, Crookshanks and I have taken residence in a very nice hotel.” She was a liar. A filthy liar, but not nearly as filthy as the shack she was in that classified as a ‘hotel’.

    “My friends won’t come by,” he assured her.
    “How do you know?”
    “Because you are the only other person who knows Weston House exists,”

    “Why?” she asked, not able to form any other question.
    “Because it’s my turn.”
    She said nothing. She understood now. He was paying her back. It was nothing he hadn’t said before but now it really stuck.

    This simply had to do with him no longer wanting to be in debt of her. She didn’t want to take his offer but to do so would mean he could finally settle the score in his warped mind and she could go back to her life.

    (heheh - interesting POV from Hermione)

    “Draco Malfoy! Well, well, well, what have we here?”
    “A lawsuit, if you do not remove your hand from Miss Granger at once.”

    “Now, listen here,” she yelled, her patience at an end. “It’s none of your damn business what I do in my spare time. If you were missing your jar you should have just asked because I can make it appear real easily.” She conjured a jam jar in mid-air and watched as Rita paled. “If you don’t want to spend the next year in here, I suggest you sod off.”

    “You know as well as I do how Rita gets her stories. You were the one feeding her all that bogus information about Harry in our fourth year.”

    (Good shot by Hermione)

    “How do you know she’s an animagus?”
    “My intelligence doesn’t stop at books,” she remarked, irritated.
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