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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 11, 2010
    (review for chapter 75) Whew! What a cliffhanger! I can see why you needed a break. I must commend you on such a brilliant plot, great character depth, good dialogue and foreshadowing. The most amazing quality of your writing is your commitment to finishing this story for so little feedback. That's dedication! As your dedicated fan, I thank you heartily! As for your grammar, I see no major faults. Thanks again! I hope my feedback brings you encouragement and warmth.
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 11, 2010
    (review of chapter 62) What a poignant death for John! I actually cried. Good job on your characterization of him! For a minor character, you took a minimal amount words to ensure that I bonded with him. Impressive!
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 10, 2010
    (review of chapter 57) Whew! I loved the ending - particularly Hermione's letter. I guess the 3 deatheaters are redeemable. You sure can play with the Readers' emotions well, authoress!
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 10, 2010
    (review of chapter 55) What a dark chapter! It is hard to read because it is graphic (easy to envision). Plus it puts our main characters (Snapes & Draco) in nearly irredeemable status.
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 10, 2010
    (review of chapter 52) How exciting! I love all this angst!
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 10, 2010
    (review of chapter 48) I hope Draco has more presence in this story!
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 10, 2010
    (review of chapter 46) Nice pacing and build up of tension!
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 09, 2010
    (review of chapter 34) I'm really enjoying this tale. There is one point of contention that I would gently like to mention concerning your dialogue: overuse of exclamation points.

    Here's an example:
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 09, 2010
    (review of chapter 30) That was brilliant! I loved the scene of Severus's death and Sarah's retrieval of the upper hand in their power struggle. I love your portrayal of Death.
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 09, 2010
    (chapter 27 review) Good set up, using the meeting with Severus as a means to establish their relationship (based on family and the power struggle between them). Well written and interesting. I like that Hermione trust her over Severus at this point.
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  • From ExperimentalMe on February 08, 2010
    I'm liking your story. I don't mind that Hermione has not yet made her entrance. It's refreshing to read an original plot. I like your use of the Assassins and the Master Assassin; I'm sure they will make formidable foes to Voldemort. I like learning about her as well through the view points of other characters. I especially loved your characterization of Death (I love Piers Anthony stories). It would be awesome if he could have a greater presence in the story.
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  • From dragongirl on January 29, 2010
    Wow so many things in one chapter........ Lovely!
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  • From dragongirl on January 13, 2010
    Finally they are a little safe, now we concentrate on kicking Voldie's butt with a lot of pain.
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  • From dragongirl on January 09, 2010
    Beautiful!
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  • From dragongirl on January 07, 2010
    WOW, love the drama!
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