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Reviews for Life Begins Anew

By : use2b2t2
  • From dragongirl on January 06, 2010
    Voldie need his butt kick ASAP, let's see apart of Harry, Ron and Hermione, who else can kick it, ahhhhhhh Neville, brilliant!
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  • From dragongirl on January 04, 2010
    We are getting closer and closer........ but where is Severus's sister? Did I miss anything?
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  • From dragongirl on January 02, 2010
    So the torture begins... outch poor Neville!
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  • From dragongirl on December 29, 2009
    Hot romantic and beautiful! Yeap 2010 comes with a lot of creativity I can feel it.
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  • From dragongirl on December 24, 2009
    I think the final battle aproaches, wow this is so incredible....... more more more Merry Christmas or Happy Christmas!
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  • From dragongirl on December 20, 2009
    You kill John!!!!!! SOB SOB!!!!! He was so cute! But hey, the good part is that the story continues!!!!!!!!
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  • From dragongirl on December 18, 2009
    Oh my God!!!! This is getting intense! Please more and soon I am dying in here. I know curiosity kill the cat! LOL
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  • From dragongirl on December 17, 2009
    Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From dragongirl on December 14, 2009
    He really is a knight! Love it!
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  • From dragongirl on December 12, 2009
    This trek is complicated and intense as I can read... Interesting to no end... Please we need more PRONTO!
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  • From anncee on October 08, 2009
    this story is AMAZING!!! I love how this story has developed! yes the first few chapters may seem a little dry to some readers but what great story doesn't have intro chapters?? Keep up your fantastic writing!! this story has come a very long way and i'm glad it has =]
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  • From LadyxEmpire on September 19, 2009
    I completely 100% agree witth mysticangel. I had to really force feed myself those first few chapters. you can definately condense it, or cut it out completely and really expand it in another story and post it under the original character section. As far as the later chapters are concerned, i LOVE where you're taking the story and how you're devloping the characters and the bond between hermion and sev, but maybe cut down on the amount of "beloved"'s? ;) but thats just me, great story!
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  • From MysticAngel77 on September 14, 2009
    I think my main issue with not being sucked into this story within the first couple chapters is that the new character you are introducing is VERY Mary-Sue. I'm not saying my opinion is correct, nor the only opinion out there, but I believe the strongest female lead (aka the one promptly introduced in the story, not to be taken as literal strength) should be the female in the pairing you are writing the story under in this fanfiction. Which in this case would be Hermione. Coming into the snape / hermione pairing section, I wasn't looking for an original character story and that's what you are showcasing with the opening chapters, see the problem? Not sure what your other readers think, but that's my issue with what you have going so far. I don't want to skip the information you have in those chapters, but I can't get myself to want to read it because I see no tie in with the female lead I DO want to read about. Your writing style and ideas are very poetic though, so I did appreciate that :) Thank you for writing!
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  • From TriniMinx on August 30, 2009
    hmmmm, read up to chpt. 5, not sure how I feel about it yet. seems to be going very slow for me.
    will read more later, am exhausted -- but it does look like a promising read :)
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  • From lisamarie on August 27, 2009
    The spelling errors in your summary may discourage people from reading your fic!
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