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Reviews for In Your Eyes

By : SexyKittyLovesCum
  • From ANON - ice on September 20, 2009
    I think your fic is really good. But it has the potential to be better. You just need to punctuate better. You are missing a LOT of commas. So it makes it awkward to read. Just thought I'd let you know. Maybe investing in a beta reader would be a good idea for you so that they can just polish this gem you have.

    Ice
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on September 20, 2009
    OOOPS! I wonder what'll come of this encounter! Does Dray have creature blood too? Please update soon!!! Pretty pretty please with naked Harry on top?
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on September 20, 2009
    Aside from the general spelling mistakes this story is still great. I can't wait to see how they're all related. Maybe you should throw together a family tree...
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  • From ANON - TempermentalBaker on July 12, 2009
    AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! Now THAT is what I am talking about! Harry getting to hear what everyone is thinking? That is awesome! And realizing that Malfoy totally has a crush on him? Priceless! Please tell me that you'll update this story as well? It's just such a pleasure reading your stories--they are clear, concise, and have just enough cuteness to make me fangirl, without giving me a frickin' cavity. I commend you.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 24, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 4!!! What was Dumbledore talking about? What is he hiding?/
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  • From ANON - LoBaR624 on June 20, 2009
    I LOVE IT! Can't wait to see what creature Harry is. Creature inheritance fanfics are some of my favorite.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 19, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 3!!! Dark eyes? Severus? Why is he on the train? Sooooo need more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 17, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 2!!!
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  • From on June 16, 2009
    i love it
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on June 16, 2009
    OOOOOHHHHH!!!!! *is intrigued* A very original creature type. *applauds* Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Jan on June 16, 2009
    Interesting start, can't wait to see what's going to happen next ^_^Please update chapter 2 soon.

    Jan
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  • From slashslut on June 16, 2009
    Definitely a very interesting start! Looking forward to finding out harry's secret.
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  • From ANON - Blood Lust 777 on June 15, 2009
    Interesting....Anxious for another chapter....
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on June 15, 2009
    very interesting ..... if i say please will you give me more now..... PLEASE!
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  • From neverfallx3 on June 15, 2009
    interesting, i would like to see how this goes. so update soon
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