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Reviews for The Taming of the Shrew - Wizard Style - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From HarryGinny4eva on May 09, 2010
I now know without a shadow of a doubt that you are undeniably brilliant! To know that you sat back one day while stirring your coffee and listening to the children playing in the background (just my mental picture) and thought of all of this, blows me away! I love the idea of the paper that was mentioned in passing so many chapters ago being the culprit. Plus, I like Hermione then Draco being the ones to solve the riddle. Seeing them work together, even a little, was lovely. Thank you for letting us know that Narcissa is finding her strength and backbone, and that she is thriving under Severus' care, despite the rear-end bruises. lol Brilliant, simply brilliant! Thank you, HG4eva
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From luna4917 on May 09, 2010
Well, the paper makes perfect sense. That's why the woman went crazy coming out of the stationary store and hit Cissa and Hermione. Now that they know what the problem is, how are they going to be able to fix it without putting that store out of business. I doubt Hermione would want to hurt someone's livly hood, Unless of course they are doing it on purpose. Then I'll bet she tells them to take the place out.

Happy Mother's Day!!
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From ANON - AngelBaby on May 09, 2010
What no Sevvie love? I can't believe you stopped the chapter there (LOL).
Sorry I only lurked for two weeks, had to read and run with work being crazy busy and all.
I like a pregnant Hermione, her changing moods are so funny.
Her little spat with Draco last chapter was really funny too.
So the plot thickens can't wait to see where this is going.
I just love your stuff, every chapter is good reading.
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From ANON - raincloverleaf on May 09, 2010
I don't mind the plot, lol. It's amazing that the culprit is so simple. I was baffled and tried to think of some ridiculously elaborate scheme, but it's simple yet effective. Love the resolution :D I like your charater building, how even after marriage you can learn something new, even for seemingly perfect couples (such as the Snapes). Most stories leave off at the happily-ever-after, but you go beyond that.
Can't wait for more chapters!

I find Severus and Narcissa very sweet.
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From lemonade8 on May 09, 2010
The parchment! You DID use that store as the distributor of the drug! Cyber cookie for me! Love the Snape and Narcissa.
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From ANON - blue artemis on May 08, 2010
That was really a fun chapter, even if there wasn't any smut. I really liked the interactions between all the characters.
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From ANON - jw on May 08, 2010
ch 48 - aha!! Brilliant tactic for transmitting the chemical. I never suspected it; I just figured lots of females would like colored parchment after centuries of only plain white parchment. I am glad Cissa realized Severus would be hurt at being the only one who hadn't received masher notes, as it shows more of the strength and affection in their marriage. Yay for Hermione and Draco figuring it out! Thank you for the fun chapter.
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From serinblackmoon on May 08, 2010
lmao OMG! On his arse?! Really?! That's hilarious! I love it! Great way to figure it all out! I never would have thought about the paper, even with all the clues at the beginning of the chapter!

As for Lucius being in love, I swear if he doesn't figure it out soon, I'm getting the veritas potion and shoving down his throat and making him confess!

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one,

Lady Serin
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From ANON - aleysiasnape on May 08, 2010
Loved it! Yay! They found the source at last. And that Lucius is looking forward to the twins. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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From dragongirl on May 08, 2010
Thank you for the Mother's Day gift............
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From voraciousreader on May 08, 2010
I hadn't thought of the paper--the colors explain the prevalence of it among the girls and would make them far more aggressive. Should have known, you never mention something in one of your stories that has no significance (i.e: the wand sale in 'Beyond the Veil) or purpose. thanks for the insight into Sev and Narcissa's relationship, it was believable and quite tender.
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From pittwitch on May 08, 2010
Awesome as usual. So much for my air pollution theory!
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From ANON - aleysiasnape on May 07, 2010
Loved it! Poor Lucius not getting enough sleep! Love the talk between Severus and Lucius as they tried to come up with some ideas on how to get rid of the virus. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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From Scarybearhair on May 07, 2010

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From ANON - aliciana on May 07, 2010
I've always thought the ROR was like the Holodeck in Star Trek:TNG and once it became "sentient" when it produced a real life Professor Moriarty. Ahhhh......happy days! So Hermione's hormones are turning her into a nympho.....I remember the feeling well and Lucius is a victim of his own success. Serves him right. One should always be careful for what one wishes for. Loved the oldies getting a bit tipsy. Sorry it's short and sweet but we're in the throes of a General Election over here and it looks like being a Hung Parliament. More impotantly however a third of my front garden has been dug up and concreted awaiting a fairly big summerhouse. And not only that but I celebrate twenty-eight years of wedded bliss tomorrow (Yes I know. You get less for murder)and have to get my hubby a pressie. Till next week. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
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