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By : LaBibliographe

From ANON - blue artemis on November 14, 2009
This is the first time in one of your stories I don't think they are going to find a way to each other. They honestly don't seem to want to. They find each other sexually attractive, but so much time is being spent on their bitterness and need to change each other. I'm sure you will prove me wrong, but I'm wondering how.
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From wordwench on November 14, 2009
More, more, gimme more. Please!!! I can't wait to see what other wicked things will happen. You're definately a Goddess at this. ^__^
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From Insolence on November 14, 2009
Oh. My. God. A brand new spanking chapter! *catches the comment and glares* What do you mean, 'got the word order wrong'? What kind of establishment are you running here?! I ordered spanking, damn it, and unless I see some in the next 20 minutes I'll expect a full refund!

First off, the wine thing: EVERYONE gets the headaches... But it's not the influence that causes them, it's memories of performing under it. The wine influence. Performing under other 'influences' is more likely to cause pregnancy (smart girl, sticking to finance!). Second: May I suggest 'Merlin Monroe' getup instead of the tutu for our dear Potions Master? That's two Wrackspurts with one bone... err... stone - 'peeking included in admission price'. Third and anal... I mean, final... (what the Hell is wrong with me today?!) Oh, forget it... I'll just go read the damned thing, shall I?

"Was that a requirement of Death Eaters?" - Makes one question her allegiance, doesn't it? ^_~

"I haven't really bothered to date since..." - Now WHY would she volunteer this kind of information to Cissa? Lucius talk I can buy as an attempt to pry some 'tips&tricks' out of the lovely Mrs Snape, but this is something she can't possibly think Narcissa is interested in. Babbling again, the poor dear...

"...one of us would be kissing a Dementor after the wedding night." - Another gem. XD

"He had a strong ego, but he was more competitive than Cinderella
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From ANON - jw on November 14, 2009
ch 23 - poor Cissa is trying hard to help Hermione, who is just too stubborn and insecure to accept her advice. I wonder if Severus could/would advise Lucius. As for the dance floor scene -- OMG, that was sooooo spellbinding! I could just 'see' Lucius dancing in front of her, and what a hot scene it was. If this were a movie, I'd be rewinding that DVD over and over! Poor Hermione is so lucky; too bad she doesn't know it. Thank you for the hot chapter!
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From lemonade8 on November 04, 2009
I was a little sad that Hermione chose the wedding dress, but caved in and put on the devil's outfit instead. Kind of represents their whole relationship thus far. She's so twitterpated about his eyes in makeup it will be funny to see her jealous side at the party. And, have you seen Jason Isaacs as Captain Hook? http://webzoom.freewebs.com/johnrandallyork/l_1735862.jpg :D
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From ANON - aleysiasnape on November 04, 2009
Chpts 21 & 22 loved them! I think I've reread them about 4 times!!! Poor Lucius, he thought Hermione wanted to leave him? And in 22, I loved how you described Lucius' costume!
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From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2009
What do you mean 'little' crushes on Snape? Mmmm sexy Snape voice...

Awww! Stay in the garage :(

Lol! Lucius thinks the collar is a love trinket :) I wonder what else he considers so?

Guh! I'm imagining Lucius' costume... but you've also got me thinking about Capt. Jack Sparrow now :) Yo Ho!

I'm tingling with excitement! Can't wait to see what happens at the club!

Also, you should check out the link below for an AWESOME costume :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QIzKK2tVrsQ&feature=popular
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From HarryGinny4eva on November 04, 2009
Hey there, I am really sorry I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters, although I have been enjoying them. Life...sigh. Anyway, I feel it coming, their breaking moment; the minute when Lucius (because I think Hermione is simply too stubborn) will finally let all the frustration and disappointment get to him and shout out the truth of what he wants. I am pretty sure if it happens, Hermione will not respond in kind and that will further the chasm, but at least one of them will have gotten some of it off his chest. lol I do feel for him, but Lucius as a nighttime toy... hmmmm. lol Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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From Scarybearhair on November 04, 2009
First off, let me say I would love to see Lucius in a Viking outfit. Just the thought made me squee! LOL
This was a lovely chapter though, my dear. I find it amusing that Lucius is just now catching on that Hermione is provoking him into spanking her. She really is rather cantankerous. Maybe they should play a game of King Cophetua and the Beggar Maid. That sounds rather fun. Hermione could deliver herself to Lucius
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From lilashannah on November 03, 2009
Oh my poor Luke.She is so mean..I wish I could find a picture of him that get up.I would love to know Hermione's thoughts.They both seem lost,too bad they can't open up to each other.I love this story.
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From serinblackmoon on November 03, 2009
*Sigh* I know that Lucius is pig headed but I can hope can't I?

Ahh a costume party. Nice distraction... sorta lol. Just like most pig headed men, can't say what the issue is or face that hippogriff in the room, but then again neither can Hermione.

I do applaud him on at least trying to help ease the tension, but the poor man needs to open his mouth, not his wallet. His still thinking that he can woo her with cash not with more substantial things. I wonder if Snape can fix that....

Oh trust me I'll use silk scarves and a lot of other silk things that will make that man purr and scream and all sorts of interesting noises...and then I'll walk away... For about 2 seconds lol. Don't worry, I'll help him see the light. ^_^

Great chapter!

Can't wait for the next one.

Lady Serin
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From ANON - Prince_Angel on November 02, 2009
OK Labib. I'm slowly getting there. Am now up to Chapter 5.

Snake Jammies!!! Poor Lucius. You could've just given the poor bloke a pair of boxers to wear. Hermione should take photos as blackmail. I'm sure Rita Skeeter could use the scoop.

Galloping Guinevere on a Grindylow??? Hahahahahahahahaha. You're too much.

xxx
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From LilTinyBee on November 02, 2009
The last two chapters were major WIN!!! This is what I've been waiting for-- Lucius and his vulernable side. It's a tribute to your writing that I was really beginning to hate him. He was very unlikeable and I wasn't sure if I wanted to continue reading, but I stuck with it and could trust that you had a plan for the story. Now, we are seeing things from his point of view and he realizes that his marriage started out completely wrong. Hermione is slowly coming around as well. They have a long way to go, but at least they're getting there. I'm enjoying finding out more about his true feelings. I can't wait for these two stubborn people to find their way to each other and fall in love!! You rock! :)
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From ANON - blue artemis on November 01, 2009
They both want the same things, they just can't find their way to each other. Pride, naivet
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From BeaBibliophile on November 01, 2009
Chapter Twenty-Two: I'm actually quite glad that Lucius took offence to Hermione's rather callous treatment. *strokes Mr Malfoy soothingly* Oh dear, I might just have to come to terms with the fact that I'm irrevocably prejudice against the little witch Hermione. I mean, let's be honest: I wouldn't have any problem with Lucius using Hermione, but switch it around, and I'm in a tiff. Oh no matter! It's your story and I'll just take whatever it is you have to offer... Riiiiight.

I'm quite enamoured with the idea of attending a Hallowe'en masquerade with the Snapes and the Malfoys. Though, I'd be more inclined to enjoy myself if it were held in the hall of a large estate than a nightclub packed with the Great Unwashed, but I'm sure that's just my haughty and aristocratic sensibilities coming through. It will undoubtedly be sexy as ever, though. I'd say quite impossible for it not to be considering that Viking costume you've squeezed Lucius into. Hawt. I'm in love with that dress-up room, by the way. It would be such fun to play around in there... That bit about the wedding dress made my usually frigid heart thaw slightly, though it re-froze just as quickly after.

Affectionately,
Bea
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