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Reviews for The Taming of the Shrew - Wizard Style - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From dragon37 on November 01, 2009
I think they need do more talking and less sex, thats if Lucius wants to have Hermione as the wife he wants. Then have awsome sex.
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From ANON - Gilly_sirl on November 01, 2009
Could Hermione be warming up to Lucius? I hope she will, because, you know, she'd be a very silly girl not to!
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From sirsevchick on October 30, 2009
It was so wonderful to come home after a 13 hour work day to find that you updated. Ahhh, the anticipation of what is to come. Poor Lucius, for one so smart, he can be thick as a brick. Telling her that Narcissa just stopped by, Hermione certainly showed some self control there and more than likely more that I would have. I see you have given them another bump in the road, but I love when you do that. I totally agree with what you said earlier, Hermione is not going to give in easily and I don't think either of them know what to do next. Am I correct in thinking the move to Hogwarts is going to give them a push in the correct direction? Enjoy your vacation, you more than deserve it!!
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From Insolence on October 30, 2009
Husband was drinking Gamay while I was reading, I nicked it to make Sangria, chaos ensued. Due to nicking, not reading; for some inexplicable reason, he thinks it's YOUR fault. *shrugs*

And I will thank you NOT to make me a scapegoat for your twisted plans concerning one Severus Snape... mucking about with his sex life is your job, not mine. LOL

It's hard to believe Hermione's brain going into a complete shutdown over any cock short of Merlin's (and even THAT would be due to scientific potential), but hey... the guys take a while to shift focus from one head to the other too, so I'm still hoping you'll make her come around.

Bah... Whom am I kidding? You could write a chapter about half a dozen naked House Elves prancing around Voldy in a pink tutu and I'd still read it. Just... you're not ACTUALLY going to do it, right? Right? O_O *gathers the Hufflepuffs resignedly* All right, onward we go...

"Blinking in shock, Lucius went on into her bedroom and straight through out her hall door..." - Priceless! ROTFL

"Please have a little care for the delicate ware." - Ditto, my good sir... *snorts*

"Finally she saw a costume that surprised to her and she pulled it out." - One tiny glitch there.

And taking her into the room full of Narcissa's playstuff... bad call, Lucius.

"Hermione looked down at the Muggle entertainment magazine and saw Captain Jack Sparrow from "Pirates of the Caribbean" " - The first thing I thought after reading hair description was 'Legolas Greenleaf? WTF, Lucius?!' LOL

And it's a good thing your vacation lasts a whole week - it'll take at least as much for your readership to recover from the costume-induced coronary. ^_~
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From chickaboo on October 30, 2009
Oh my indeed. I just about had a heart attack just reading about what he was wearing. Mmmmmmmm....yummy Lucius. lol Fantastic, I can't wait for more! Oh, and I hope you have a lovely holiday!
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From voraciousreader on October 30, 2009
Ooh, rowr! Nice mix of Lucius and Lord Felton, there. I'm referring to the hairstyle. I can see their relationship having to take a couple of steps back before moving a bit forward; at least Lucius is self-aware enough to try, really. I look forward to seeing them amek a few breakthroughs. Enjoy your vacation, Labib!
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From ANON - aliciana on October 30, 2009
Just in time for Halloween. Toujours Pur Magique.........getting dressed up. You know, we used to go out "guising" in Scotland when I was a kid in the 60s and 70s. One of the biggest nights in our calendar. But as usual I digress. Where are you off on holiday to? Probably more exotic than Cornwall. My youngest daughter whilst at Edinburgh Uni spent her third of four years in Tempe, Arizona. She visited Vegas, Hawaii, Los Angeles, San Diego and the Grand Canyon. Christ, LaBib....how the other half live...eh? I've just been to Vegas and Florida a few times each. Anyway. I must admit almost until the last eighth of this chapter I was for suggesting that Lucius and Hermione call it a day as they really seemed to be making each other pretty unhappy. I mean a good sex life does go a long way but it has to be balanced with companionship and friendliness and a bit of mutual respect otherwise things can really "gang aft aglay". But she did comment that she had missed him in her bed and we will put it down to her "terminal naivety" that she didn't take the lead and seek him out in his bedroom. Hmmmm....a viking....OK. Violent, masterful....yes...that'll do. OMG. What's Sev going as? Hurry back luv. I need to know. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx.
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From ANON - jw on October 30, 2009
ch 22 - c'mon, peeps! You've just taken two steps backward but no steps forward (well, at least Hermione apologized for ignoring Lucius when he waled in naked to her suite). Does he really not understand her response to him in his costume? Perhaps she should jump his bones in the club! Oh, wait.... Cissa will be there; all kinds of potential trouble with Hermione's insecurity. Meeps. I hope you have a fun trip next week!! Thanks for updating.
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From serinblackmoon on October 28, 2009
Gah!!! I should have known they would muck it all up by shutting their feeling down again! That's it! I am Tying Lucius down and brow beating his little attractive pure blood butt! I know jus the person to handle Hermione too!!!

Great chapter, Now I reaaly wish Hermione had legimins.

Can't wait for the next one

Lady Serin
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From ANON - aliciana on October 26, 2009
Sorry as you can see I've time on my hands. Should point out that as I have a degree in English Literature it is quite unforgivable that in my last review I spelt "actually" and "marriage" incorrectly. And to think I went to a bloody English grammar school too. Fifty points from Slytherin I think. That's my House. Right....off to bed now. Night night. Wouldn't be able to sleep if I hadn't rectified that...............etc, etc.Zzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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From ANON - aliciana on October 26, 2009
Well, Labib I rest my case. As stated earlier ma'am, Lord help the middle-aged male teacher from 16,17 and 18 year old girls!I mean we're only human. And if Jason Isaacs...sorry Lucius Malfoy came to teach woodwork or even better French (think David Ginola) at my grammar school....hell yes I'd take those subjects to "A" level and beyond. Actualy I did do French "A" Level and got an A grade! How good am I? But I digress, ma petite plum-duff! I made that one up. So,they are communicating on one level but still not being totally honest with each other. He wants her to love and worship him but has acknowledged that he does not love her...yet. And therefore why should she? It could be argued that they could, as a double-act, be a mariage guidance counselor's wet dream or indeed worst nightmare. I think The Plan will work but only if Hermione exerts enough force to ensure that her younger would-be rivals realise that he is hers and therefore totally out of bounds. Superb writing as always and sorry I've rambled a bit but I'm away next week on my jollies to Falmouth in Cornwall. Keep up the excellent work Miss LaBib. Best wishes, Love Professor Ali xxxxx.
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From dragon37 on October 26, 2009
As always your imagination astouns me. I can't wait to see how the girls react to Lucius as the Headmaster, I think Hermione will have her hands full. I know, if I was one of the girls, I would have try real hard to get his attention, no matter if he is married.
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From Scarybearhair on October 25, 2009
Oooo, LaBib, you always do such a good job of showing the persnickety touchiness of Lucius and Hermione Malfoy. Here Lucius is, setting Hermione free from the manor, hoping that she will stay
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From ANON - Gilly_sirl on October 25, 2009
Oh, please update this soon! It's so good. And well written! Lucius/Hermione smut is the only HP ship I follow, and I'm so glad to find quality material such as this story!

I just love the kind of love story you're writing, with two apparently ill-assorted lovers who'll... end up falling in (a kind of) love, right? Is that where you are going?

Not being a Snape "fancier", I don't enjoy his involvement in that story as much as I should, I guess, but you're the author, and in my book, what the author says goes.

Please, more smut!
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From Kayrox133 on October 25, 2009
I loved the complexities of your characters in this story and will enjoy reading more.
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