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Reviews for The Taming of the Shrew - Wizard Style - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - moregoth on October 23, 2009
    The bat-guano joke by Snape was priceless :) as was Hermione slapping Lucius.
    I'm really enjoying your story and I like your writing style. Bringing Hermione and Lucius together shouldn't go easy.

    Not criticism, but it would be interesting to hear your thoughts about it!
    I'm slightly surprised by Hermione's lack of knowledge about sex, while I certainly can see her as inexperienced I would expect her to have a bit more of a clue at least in the vanilla department. But I guess she might have been influenced by her surroundings in the what I perceive as the conservative wizarding world and I doubt "sex and coexistence" is a part of Hogwarts curriculum.

    Looking forward to next part
    moregoth
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  • From ANON - aleysiasnape on October 21, 2009
    Love it! I especially liked the part where Severus found out that Hermione slapped Lucius. And Lucius tried to cover it up by saying he ran into something! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From Scarybearhair on October 19, 2009
    Yes I will admit it, openly and completely. Your chapter totally inspired me. I
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  • From LaihosHatecrew on October 18, 2009
    Really love the story and lover Hermiones spunk. Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - aliciana on October 18, 2009
    Oh Christ luv...you almost got me into trouble and let my guilty secret out. Both daughters are here and grandchildren too and none of them know about Mum/Nana's obsession with HP fanfic. So what happens? I read your line about Hermione contemplating biting Lucius' thigh whilst being spanked and just fell about. I mean it was quite Pythonesque in both timing and being totally unexpected. Sheer quality! Oh and the sheep shagging bit! We rent out our field to a local farmer for the (Half-Blood!)princely sum of
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  • From serinblackmoon on October 18, 2009
    ahh time to curl up for another great chapter.

    Lol. I so knew the hot heads couldn't remain peaceful for long.

    It seems as though Lucius is beginning to realize that he's getting what he wanted and cramping Hermione in a pure-blood box isn't going to get it.

    I really want to know what this little plot Severus and Lucius have going. Hmm...I wonder if tying them up and spanking them both would get me answer. *evil and dreamy grin*

    Perhaps Severus should tie them down and give both Lucius and Hermione a dose of Vertaserium and get them to talk. *Grumbles* Damn Dunderheads.

    Great chapter. I do have advice for Lucius, Use Legimins on her and get it over with!!!! Lol

    Can't wait for the next chappy! Great one by the way. Talk about 2 steps forward and three steps back lmao.


    Lady Serin
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  • From ANON - Linstock on October 18, 2009
    Ahh sangria; best served chilled on a really hot afternoon. *sigh* I see that wizards can learn something from muggles. Good to see Lucius getting as good as he gives. Poor man just doesn
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  • From mrequecky on October 18, 2009
    Haha, liked a lot! Go Severus!
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  • From BeaBibliophile on October 18, 2009
    Chapter Twenty: Oh what a lovely thing to say! Yes, I
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  • From dragongirl on October 17, 2009
    Hey you always spice it up with a little humor and this was simply funny... More please!
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  • From Robs on October 17, 2009
    Oh, Lucius, when will you learn! LOL at Snape being the counseller. Lucius, bless him, can't seem to do anything without Severus having some say in it. Hermione really should stop baiting him though. She's not helping herself at all.

    I AM an LJ crony, LOL. But I go under a different name there xD

    Look forward to the next chapter!

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  • From sirsevchick on October 17, 2009
    Hehe, Lucius certainly has his hands full and he certainly was not expecting a full temper Hermione. However, in his defense, I think he was taking out his frustration on her backside, more or less. I have read your garden scenes in the past, they are wonderful, and it is always good to stir things up *snickers*. Now you have me a bit puzzled as I am not sure what Lucius and Hermione's next moves are going to be, but I know for certain that they will keep me entertained.
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  • From ANON - blue artemis on October 17, 2009
    I could use a sangria. Lucius still doesn't see what he is doing wrong, does he? I thought he was a bit smarter than that. I really don't blame Hermione for slapping him. And I really loved the mind games Snape was playing with him, that was fun.
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  • From ANON - magalena on October 17, 2009
    Yay! Another chapter, I do so look forward to your updates! :)
    I think Lucius' spanking in this chapter seemed to be more out of anger and frustration than anything else and not at all conducive a fun time in the bedroom.
    His constant correcting of her and belittling her is not going to do anything to overcome her already battered self esteem. She already feels inferior in comparison to Narcissa and his attitude is not helping her to get over those feelings. On the other side Hermione needs to remember the phrase you catch more flies with honey; her constant challenging of Lucius just sets him off.
    And the "little" things he feels compelled to call her to task for: her manners, her business and her familiar. *shakes head* Oh Lucius you are so clueless!!!
    On a side note, Loved the sangria scene, bat guano indeed!!LOL
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  • From lemonade8 on October 17, 2009
    LOL, Lucius didn't even realize that Snape WAS giving him advice, did he! Wonder when it will dawn on him. Hermione is due for some soul searching, I'm thinking. Even though I have a little more sympathy for her than Lucius (just because he has all the answers in front of him but can't see his way to recognizing them). I'm thinking that being spanked as punishment, even if you like it as bedplay, would be tiresome, hurtful and witout trust just another way to distance them. If Lucius doesn't start trying to get close to her without using pain and games, it's going to be a loooooonnnng, angry marriage. :D

    and BAT GUANO? LOL.
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