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Reviews for The Taming of the Shrew - Wizard Style - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From ANON - Schwertlilie81 on September 22, 2009
I really like your fiction.
I might be tempted to smack one or the other over the head for being so headstrong, but I must say you charcterize them very well. Lucius would have definitively needed someone more selfconfident years ago. He
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From LadyJMarie on September 21, 2009
Two words, hon, BLACK LEATHER! Great job.
J.
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From Scarybearhair on September 21, 2009
Woohoo! Thank you for the lovely lemon pie. That was like two slices instead of just one.
I
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From ANON - Sara B. on September 20, 2009
I'm liking the story so far! It's nice when fics keep Lucius the dastardly, insensitive plotter that he is, instead of turning him into a. a monster or b. a fluffy romantic reformee. So nice job. :)

I enjoy the dynamic between him and Hermione, also. It's very realistic.

And to answer your question... I think a professor's outfit. (magical professor, NOT muggle.) Just like some teaching robes or something. And act out a scene w/ Hermione as the student. ;)
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From rini868 on September 20, 2009
Oooh! Next chap Sev and Cissa? Awesome!

Yes, sleep is overrated...who needs sleep anyway?

Skinning a ladybug? I'd assume acid would work quite well, but maybe a little too well...

"Come and lick us" Oh I like that :D

Oooh! That's not good, you don't not answer the master of the manor :S

If he has a helthy sized ego now, how big was it before he married Hermione? I shudder at the thought...

Now they're both feeling like failures? These two need some help.

I just want them to give each other a hug :)

I think Lucius should dress up as Batman :D Batman is awesome!
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From ANON - aliciana on September 20, 2009
Well sweetie. At first I thought it was easy (and predictable!). Dress him in the Potions Master's garb but then I thought no......how about a British Naval Commander's uniform complete with reasonably short haircut.....Oh Christ....I'm getting visions of Daniel Craig/Jason Isaacs a la James Bond. Right enough of that. Down to business. That was one hot chapter but I am thinking that even though Hermione is still very assertive and sarcastic she should still fight her corner a little more. I'm hopeful that they will both learn the often lost arts of communication and compromise as they also have to learn to make the most of what Fate and the gorgeously devious Snape has dealt them, wonderful bastard that he is. As for stringing up some of the teachers at my old school, yes I hear what you say. Fortunately, I was 18, a very strong personality and was in a very loving, confident relationship with my older boyfriend, now husband and was more than able to deal with the attention. I mean some of these guys were only about 25 and drop-dead gorgeous. And I also appreciate that in the main these relationships can be both very damaging and dangerous especially when coercion/ blackmail/force is applied. So don't do it!!!!! Just do as I say and not as I did! In my day it just seemed more innocent and made school a more exciting place. Think St Trinian's! These guys never even taught me my subjects. I had all the old, skanky ones for that! I love this story. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
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From dragongirl on September 20, 2009
I will love to see him as EL ZORRO, cape and mask only... as for the sword.. HEHEHEHE!!!!!!! You figure it out.. LOL
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From ANON - MioneLuv on September 19, 2009
I like this story and appreciate all the work you're putting into it. You're an awesome writer! Your stories are treasures! There's a little bit of a "but" coming up. I know and trust that you have a plan for the story. Our couple will have a happy ending. But... I'm having a hard time with the way Lucius is treating Hermione and the circumstances of their marriage. Sure, she enjoys the sex once they get started, but she is still a reluctant partner. She does not want this at the moment. If she had a courtship period, she probably would. It's almost like any future feelings on her end will be partially due to her being brainwashed by sex. Amazing sex-- you're a goddess with your descriptions! I know that they will have a tumultous but wonderful journey. And! We will all be very happy with the whole story once the relationship all works out! I hope I didn't upset you! Just needed to get that bit out! Can't wait for more!!
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From ANON - aleysiasnape on September 19, 2009
Love it! I'm just wondering how Hermione is going to handle the Snapes when they get to dinner. Lucius certainly surprised her there!
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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From soldiersgirl0709 on September 19, 2009
Oh it would have to be something Zoro-esque....black trousers, red sash at his waist, no shirt...black mask.....mmmmm, delicious....though I can also see him in a fur loincloth, fur boots to his knees.....gold bands around his biceps and a horned helmet...maybe wearing nothing but a pair of tall black boots with several silver buckles all along the sides....my god I could go on and on and on treating him like my own personal Barbie doll. =)
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From ANON - blue artemis on September 19, 2009
You know, once Hermione gets past her puritanical ideas about sex, she's going to be insatiable. Well even moreso. I'm surprised she hasn't started researching. "come and lick us?" Hee. I'm starting to feel really sorry for Lucius, because he is actually starting to be engaged by the vicious little witch. But I don't think he realizes how he makes her feel, either. Lovely lemons, by the way.
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From sirsevchick on September 19, 2009
I loved this chapter. The lemons were fantastic, but I must say the details that came out about their relationship were even better. I thought there seemed to be some sadness in this chapter. They are both questioning themselves, even if they don't realize it. For a very socially adept man, Lucius was not so smart with his invitation for the Snapes to come to dinner lol. Amazing that two such perceptive people who can see the motivations of others are so blind when it comes to each other. I am really enjoying how you are spinning out this getting to know each other...the sex just opens up the door for more communication for them because they are unable to erect their barriers at that time. It will be very interesting to see how the dinner party plays out....I would love to have Lucius now that I am back from vacation, I can truly appreciate him now that I am rested....Lucius in costume....hmmmm, I think I like the school teacher version as any other ideas may be too Muggle for the poor man
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From katiekrm on September 19, 2009
I wish Hermione would stop trying to conform to pureblood ways and just be herself. Wear a muggle dress to dinner if she wants to, have the elves prepare a middle class muggle dinner. Invite two of her friends over. Organize some charades for afterwards with words like death eater and inbred. Better yet, invite some muggles over. Poison Snape's food for his part in this fiasco. At least some U-No-Poo. Aside from not asking Hermione about the dinner invitation, Lucius has invited over two people who Hermione has a very bad history with. Severus with his constant unfair and ill treatment of her and Narcissa for her role in Hermione's torture. I know a lot of people are ragging on Hermione's attitude, but she was forced into this marriage and Lucius is a bigoted death eater. She is a victim in this. I see that he is making attempts and they are misunderstanding each other, but with all the steps she is taking to conform to his culture, why can't he do the same?
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From Kooldragon400 on September 19, 2009
It's been a while since I've dropped a review, but I've been reading along nonetheless. I love your story so far, and I'm already wrapped up in the plot. What kind of trouble are the two going to get up to once they reach Hogwarts? Is it going to be a very detailed stay at the old Alma Mater? Are Snape and Cissa still going to be a big part of the plot when they go to the school? Would Batman kick Superman's ass in a fist fight? These are all questions that only YOU can answer. ^w^

I'm just crumbling your biscuits, there. I'm glad of the update, and even gladder (word? Not a word? No red line....doesn't mean it's a GOOD word...) that there was some smut involved. Hermione surely is an uptight little thing, isn't she? But I think she's coming around. Around his bedroom, around her bedroom, and probably some random room in the house later on. :3 I look forward to the next installment of lovely lovely awkwardness.

~DragonFyre
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From BeaBibliophile on September 19, 2009
Chapter Sixteen: I didn
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