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Reviews for The Taming of the Shrew - Wizard Style - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From soldiersgirl0709 on August 01, 2009
    Chapter 9: Titillating tool? That has to be one of my favorite descriptives! Awkward and hot at the same time. Loved the reality of it, the awkwardness of new lovers trying to learn each other, trying to figure out what would please the other. Though Hermione and her claws seemed a happy accident for ol' Lucius.

    I dont think she will have any future issues with giving Lucius access to her body, access to her heart will be a long time coming for this stubborn version of Hermione Granger. Lucius seems a bit walled in emotionally, still feeling the sting of his divorce. I can relate. Lovely lemons, real and engaging. Wonderful work, dearest =)


    Happy Writing,
    S_G
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 01, 2009
    Well, based on the picture and his technique, I'd like to place an order for one Lucius Malfoy, please. He can be delivered directly to me and I will even pay double for shipping and handling. Thank you!

    Tee hee hee That was fun and funny in parts. I actually snorted out loud at the centaur/chihuahua thought. :-)

    Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 01, 2009
    Hahaha! Hermione is so ornery doing that to Lucius
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  • From BeaBibliophile on August 01, 2009
    Chapter Nine: I'll be the loquacious lurker to comment on Lucius's technique. His technique is... Hmmmmmmmm. It seems... effective. With that pine-scented love cologne and his lithe digits glissading across her sex, flicking and frotting and fishing around, it would be rather difficult to be ineffective, wouldn't it? And I suppose his inexorable assault was appropriate in this situation, given Hermione has the--if you'll pardon the slightly vulgar slang--vag of a pixie, as you so aptly put it. Hermione's effrontery was actually quite surprising; biting him, digging her nails into his arse... Then again, perhaps its not. The termagant has always had a predilection for verbally lacerating her husband; I shouldn't be shocked that it carried over to the coital realm.

    A massage is most certainly not smut! I can think of innumerable situations in which it is entirely platonic. Admittedly, it's difficult to keep things non-sexual when one partner is stark naked, but still! I maintain that an erotic massage is considered pre-smut foreplay. There was no, erm, happy ending. Snerk. And bask away, if you like, because there is plenty of sarcasm to bask in; my wit is like the sun: scorching and incandescent. Am I pugnacious when I review other stories? Not much, admittedly. I suppose I sensed your snarkiness and deemed you capable of experiencing my pugnacity without promptly fainting/crying/moping in response. I mean that in the best possible way you know. I can't think of any higher plaudit I could give, LaBib... Other than your writing style is unrivalled in its potency and variety and that your smutty scenes are some of the most rousing I've ever encountered. ;-)

    With all due respect and affection,
    Bea
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  • From ANON - jw on August 01, 2009
    ch 9 - "airborne Hermione" -- heh-heh! Lucius is definitely not Ron. I love the "after" pic of Lucius on your LJ, although I am a wee bit disappointed in his technique. Insulting Hermione's supposed virginity, comparing her unfavorably to a mermaid, and not even summoning the numbing potion -- he's definitely not wooing her gently. He behaved more like a Mafia debt-collector demanding a week-overdue payment, which is sorta what this was, but he's just lucky Hermione sees him like the "after" pic. If she is still in pain when she wakes up, he might look like the "before" pic on your LJ! Thank you for the new chapter, and I look forward to seeing Hermione's response in the morning.
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  • From liagiba84 on August 01, 2009
    I honestly don't think I'm feeling coherent enough to review after that scene. It was absolutely delicious!
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  • From ANON - linstock on July 31, 2009
    Yummy. Nice snappy sparring and lots of nice thought provoking comments about what is under Lucius
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  • From alecto on July 28, 2009
    sex. NOW!!! ooh im going mad
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  • From rini868 on July 28, 2009
    I couldn't resist. Procrastination rocks :)

    Haha! Lucius Malfoy turning up to your room naked! Giggle :D

    He made the right choice with the pine. Yes he did.

    I can relate to the feeling of wanting to pet Lucius. I'm sure all of us can ^.^

    Arghhh! Nooo! Forget anything I said about putting off smut... I lied! *Bangs head repetitively against wall*

    You master of the evil cliffie, you!

    Can't wait for more. I'll schedule in a little procrastination for next week :D
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  • From ANON - linstock on July 28, 2009
    I do not have much time for reading so I have been very slow to get through this and to comment. A great start. I like the tension you have built. You have caught Malfoy
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  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on July 28, 2009
    Ah, LaBib...I love you. I just noticed you were writing a new story. I've been immersed in the real world for a while, but I'm so glad I noticed this. I just love your Lucius. But only to read about. I couldn't handle such an overbearing, conceited man like him. Well, maybe if I got to see that fine body you fantastically described, I might be convinced. You're an artist. You described him delightfully.

    Let's see...previous chappies...I think their verbal sparring is hilarious, and I loved that you put Severus and Narcissa together.

    And the thing I've laughed at most was Hermione's wet English Channel!

    (Ch. 8)
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  • From marieve on July 27, 2009
    I can just picture Lucius in my head after the scene sitting in a large leather chair, legs crossed with a SMIRK on his face...his trail of thought would probably be like : that's right bitches lol no too common for him. I L O V E the interactions between our slippery, blonde haired man and Hermione. In some passages if I were Lucius I would have snapped...the whole spanking thing would definatly be appropirate or tieing her up or something cause damnit she gets away with soo much! I think the way Lucius is trying to gently domesticate her (maybe not the right word, but I think in this instance Hermione is more of a wild cat than Lucius) is definatly a good idea. I think when Hermione looses someo f her prudishness (''you have sex on this table?'' I burst out laughing at that part...in my head I was telling Hermione : sweetie, sex isn't confined to the bedroom GASP...or a bed DOUBLE GASP..you'll see..*wink* *wink*.) and gains abit of confidence they're going to be explosive in and out of bed.
    LOVE YOUR STORY!!
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  • From ANON - Jesse on July 26, 2009
    I don't think there are any words right now to describe that chapter. The way you described Lucius' body was... was.... perfect. Now, I am going to stop review so you can get back to writing the next chapter! Hurry!! :)
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on July 26, 2009
    You end this here? Seriously? Oh, how cruel you are! Now that Hermione gets a bit into it...Ah well, we'll just have to wait, right? Not that I like the idea at all!

    And I am wondering what the plot is about. What are Severus and Lucius up to? Can't wait to find out more.

    As always, excellent story so far!


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  • From ANON - blue artemis on July 25, 2009
    I enjoyed that. Hermione's responses were really fun, a delight. She is very sexually naive: a dingle-dangle? Even though she knows she's being seduced she did go along with it, so he does have something to look forward to. She really is in over her head there, but wow, what a way to go.
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