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Reviews for The Taming of the Shrew - Wizard Style - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From liagiba84 on July 06, 2009
    Oh my gosh, I loved that kiss! And even more the fact that it was preceded by her slapping his butt and then losing track of what was going on because his butt was so hard. Lol, I squeaked, I laughed so hard at that picture. My vote is that next time she spanks and then runs away and sees what happens then. And yay for the comment about Lucius liking spanking! I can't wait!

    And he chose books for her? I'm in love.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 06, 2009
    There is absolutely nothing to sigh over. That chapter was great! I like HG paired with several people, so it's all good with me. lol Her innocence cracks me up. And, all of your different ways to say penis make me giggle. Thanks for the continued laugh. And, the snogging session was hot! I think she's going to go up in flames in a week. ;-) Yes, I'm jealous. ha ha ha

    Looking forward to more really soon,
    HG4eva
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  • From ANON - aleysiasnape on July 06, 2009
    Loved it! Especially the wake up call Lucius got from Hermione! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jesse on July 06, 2009
    I loved that chapter!! The spanking and aftermath was too funny!! A very hot moment between the two. I can't wait for more.
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  • From rini868 on July 06, 2009
    Ahh! Lucius
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  • From ANON - blue artemis on July 06, 2009
    Snape and Narcissa? I've seen that one before, sometimes good, sometimes not. I'm guessing yours will be good. If they actually told each other some of the stuff in their head it would make their relationship easier. Of course, it would not make as good a story. I really like that he agreed to put off sex as an apology. She probably thinks he's disgusted by marrying a Mudblood. That was really a lovely reaction to being swatted. Sounded like an excellent morning to me, anyway.
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  • From angelnomiko on July 06, 2009
    wow that was awsome .. i love it .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Rainie on July 06, 2009
    Ok I got blind sided by the MAC truck known as Narcissa and Snape. So maybe that's why Snape was so pushing this union. LOVE the "pajama python", so much better than trouser snake. Happy writing and Thanks.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on July 06, 2009
    Chapters 1-5: Alrighty then =) I don
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  • From BeaBibliophile on July 06, 2009
    Chapter Five: Well I'm twice-surprised that we haven't met! I sneak into Spatula Twelve Step every so often. They have better snacks! Anyway, I promise not to throw bricks at you because I have faith in your ability to make almost any pairing believable. Though, I believe I have now developed a twitch at the thought of the dinner parties Lucius has to suffer through. Marrying your best mate's ex-wife is cold, I mean, positively gellid. I wait with baited breath. Also, I'm thoroughly in love with Lucius now. I may have lusted after him, liked him, thought him charming, but now I simply adore him. He's so considerate, generous, and lovely. And Hermione is just the luckiest thing. Those apartments! I would be torn between sleeping in his bed or my own. Very sexy scene there, by the way. I must remember to read this alone, as the giggles and chirps of delight aren't necessarily appreciated by my slumbering companion.

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  • From chickaboo on July 06, 2009
    Oh. I kind of feel bad for Lucius. For some reason I keep visualizing him as a lost, slightly naughty puppy who's desperate for love and affection but not quit sure how to go about getting it. And that makes me want to snuggle him. Fantastic update, I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - jw on July 06, 2009
    ch 5 - 'Snape had married Narcissa' - ROFL! I'm impressed that Severus and Lucius remained friends; I hope Cissa and Severus didn't hook up until after the divorce, rather than Cissa and Severus cuckolding Lucius. Lucius will notch up another 'Idiot' point when he realizes he insulted her by not offering to let Hermione share his bedroom, even if he expected her to refuse. I'm not sure why he was offended by her wanting to Apparate. Couldn't he send elves to her flat to get her clothing? Uh-oh, I have to wait another week for the next chapter! I shall try to be patient. Thank you for the new chapter!!
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  • From margaritama on July 06, 2009
    HOLD THE FORT - SNAPE MARRIED NARCISSA??? Did I miss it before???? Well, that was...um, yeah. And she was a door mouse in Lucius' bed? Yet, vibrant enough for Sev? I'm on a carousel, but don't let me off please - go faster. I said FASTER, damn it.

    So many lovely things in this chapter. So many funny moments, lines, situations, thoughts - too many to name and I know you know what they are. Though the whole Lucius contracting an STD and then having it treated the Muggle way was too funny.

    Hermione and Lucius are both mirror images of each other to a certain extent, aren't they? Both left by their companions - I won't say loves because I don't know if their perspective partners really were their true loves. Oh Ron loved Hermione, Narcissa loved Lucius and vice versa, but I think it was a caring type of love. Let's continue, shall we? Both Hermione and Lucius are lonely and alone. They desire the companionship that comes from being a relationship, there's comfort in that. They are both sexually frustrated from here to Timbuktu - obviously, something was slightly lacking in their previous partners. Oh they satisfied a need but their passions were barely scratched, from what I gather in this chapter. If it weren't for the fact that he was a former Death-Eater and she a Muggle-born, they would actually realize they have lots in common: intelligent, wit, low tolerance for idiocy, passion, etc.

    Again, you surprise us with Lucius' tenderness - and that's what it is. Not taking her and just satisfying himself. He's in this for the long haul and that desire to make things "right" and "good" with/for his new wife tells us so much about him. It actually makes him vulnerable, though he'd see it as weakness. The ironic thing is that Hermione would be a puddle of goo if she was skilled at Legilimens. I also really appreciated the realistic POV that the man would be a one-minute wonder if he tried to do the deed right then and there. I'm sure wanking off in the bathroom helped sort out his head (and we all know he did that). No need for a scene on that...we all have an imagination, no?

    I loved the scatteredness of Hermione's thoughts. It was perfect. I actually had to read that sequence twice because I was thrown a bit by the randomness of each new thought. She was bouncing around. And it hit me in the line "Hermione began to tap one foot in irritation" - she's flustered, horny, and definitely confused. It was a perfectly grounded in a reality - that is how a woman would probably react. LOVED it - I think Stanislavski couldn't have conveyed it any better in any of his books about acting - being grounded in reality despite the ridiculousness you feel you might find yourself in. Oh and trying to call him decrepit and old, low blow Hermione! LOL The man is "hung" as you noted.

    Lovely tour of the Manor - thank you. I can't believe he's waiting a week? Is that for her or for him? Make sure he's got the stamina! LOL And I wonder how long she'll have her own rooms before he ties her to the bed?

    PS: Hermione totally missed Lucius' spanking warning....Oh please let her try it again! LOL
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  • From alecto on July 05, 2009
    coaxed.

    good character development in this chapter. a crooning lucius makes my day. can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From PensievePerson on July 03, 2009
    Yeah more! Great two chapters. Once again Lucius got away with more, as the secret phrases in the contract! But I was glad to hear Lucius imply that he wasn't going to cheat on her. No more going to muggle bars for Lucius. Chapter two was also good, I was glad there wasn't too much hoopla surrounding the wedding ceremony. It was so old-fashioned though, it seemed like it akin to something performed five-hundred years ago. I really did feel sorry for Hermione when they entered the Drawing Room. It was very realistic with the notion of the Healers teaching her of the inner place to go to.
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