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Reviews for The Taming of the Shrew - Wizard Style - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From KagomeLove1 on May 01, 2018
Hi, I just discovered this story and I love what I read so far. I am only at chapter 6. I love the dynamics between hermione and Lucius. The verbal exchanges are fantastic and so is the friendship bêtes Snape and Malfoy.

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From ANON - Fox on March 21, 2016
Another thing, do you believe Draco would wear sandals???
I don't :-D :-D :-D
Fox
xx
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From ANON - Fox on March 21, 2016
Dear Author,
I'm here to deliver my detailed feedback on your story.
PLOT 10/10 -it's original and no annoying loose ends. I've read quite a few LM/HG marriage scenarios, yours LLis fresh, well explained and it seems believable to me.
SEX 10/10 -imaginative, well worded, varied and most importantly not too much of it. I like to see Lucius and Hermione in intimate situations, the age and background difference is exciting and amusing. I love Lucius' commanding nature.
BDSM 8/10 -not descriptive enough for my liking. Also I don't think that corporal punishment in intimate relationship is issued in anger, it seems amateurish, which I believe Lucius is anything but. One needs to be in total control of emotions to deliver precise strikes in order to keep punishee from serious injury.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT 9/10 -it's great to see Lucius has a (well hidden) soft side :-) and to witness Lucius/Draco relationship bloom. It's very heart warming experience.
Hermione is almost as expected: strong-willed, opinionated, with brain and big mouth, BUT she demonstrates shocking lack of theoretical knowledge on sex matters, to the point of not knowing correct names of quite basic sexual practices?? Not believable for someone so knowledge thirsty... I loved how she worked Lucius' manierisms out so quickly, she was a little too cruel at times, but I think it's understandable in her circumstances.
HUMOUR/DIALOGUES 10/10 -must admit I was laughing histericaly while reading your story. I loved Severus/Lucius baiting -so in character :-) very funny. Interactions between characters and clashes -all very amusing.
NARRATIVE 8/10 -I personally had some problems understanding some of your sentences and was forced to re-read...few times :(
It could be due to English being my second language..or your distinctive writing style..or lack of commas in places? It made it difficult for me to enjoy the story 100% as I wasn't sure what you meant at times. And to be clear, I didn't mind reading your story with a dictionary, which I did...:-))
OVERALL 9.1/10 -I loved it and Lucius and Hermione are good together, also loved the fact, that Severus is alive -I hate it when he's dead. A lot of fluff at the end, but I'm a big fluff fan (and sex, and love, and mistery)
Thank you for sharing.
Fox
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From ANON - Fox on March 17, 2016
I like your Lucius/Hermione so far, however she is a little under-informed about variety of sexual practices. Knowing Hermione's curious nature and hunger for knowledge, I'd assume she would at least read about it -even if she had no opportunity to try. I guess she's lucky it didn't work out with Ron.
I must say it is such a thrill to read about her first experiences with Lucius. I find the idea of older and experienced/kinky man pared with near virgin girl very exciting and describing her as small, petite, tiny or pocket amazon ads to it considerably. So much in fact, that I'm very happy to overlook her lack of knowledge :-)
I believe they are perfect match.
Thank you for sharing.
Fox
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From ANON - Ashley on May 08, 2015
I know its been years since you wrote this story I just wanted to leave a comment. You are a brilliant writer. Your story has a great plot which is always interesting and the way you word things is sublime. I was always captivated by this story so thank you for writing it. As I said I know its been ages since you wrote this but I just wanted to let you know that your story was still being read and appreciated. I happen to be one of those "lurkers" that you mention. I never review a story but I just felt that your effort deserved to be recognised. So thank you very much for a highly enjoyable story.
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From ANON - SilverFoxyLycan on January 08, 2015
I Loved this story so much that I couldn't sleep until I read it all *o*
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From ANON - jay on August 28, 2014
You do BDSM a disservice. Their relationship is all bit rape and violence. She is abused from the get go and magically finds that a-ok and participates? That is 100% inaccurate and just what adult education societies disapprove of. How horrid for you to glorfiy emotional and physical abuse and call it bdsm.

One submits bc one wishes to and knowingly enters into a relationshi as such. Your lucius is not a dominant, he is an abusive person. That is not love. It is perceptions,like these that have real bdsm relationships labeled as freakish and abuse.
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From ANON - mre-quecky on February 08, 2014
ohwow, what a glorious story! I started reading it once when it was still a WIP and only saved the link. Now I finally came back to the story and read the whole novel. Very juicy, lovely, intense, entertaining and all the way brilliant :D
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From ANON - Devilish04 on December 06, 2012
I loved this story. So much that even though its been years since you finished it I had to review. It was beautifully written, a wonderful journey to take with Lucius and Hermione!
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From ANON - Desmerelda on December 03, 2012
I love this story and read it over and over!
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From SailorSol on July 12, 2012
My dear, you never ever disappoint. I think I read this for a while, and then lost track of it, but I've just finished it from beginning to end, and it was an e-ticket ride I'll never forget.
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From ANON - Mary on May 18, 2012
This story is AMAZING!! Thank you very much. I could not tear myself away from it till I read the last sentense. This one is the best fanfic I have ever read!!
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From vickje91 on November 01, 2011
Since this is the third time i've read this story and i've never reviewed (shame on me..), i thought it was time to write something. Let me start off by saying how much i love all of your fics. The Taming of the Shrew and Through the Veil are my favorites, though all your stories very good! As an avid admirer of Lucius, i'm so glad to have found some fics about him! Your style of writing is also very good. I like your dialogues very much, in my opinion you know exactly how to choose the right words a character would say. All the dialogues are very convincing. I dont know if you spend a lot of time thinking about what words he'd use, or if this just comes naturally, but it's very good. Also, the way you take your time for a proper build-up is something i admire in your stories. Some other writers don't pay any mind to making a story and a relationship convincing from the start. Now i know i'm gushing a bit but i would like to make up for the lack of reviews because it gives me so much pleasure to read your fics and i sincerely hope you continue writing. Thank you for taking the time to write the fics you uploaded so far, I very much appreciate all the time and effort you must have put into them and you should know the results are amazing. Are you writing anything new at the moment? I certainly hope so.
(excuse my grammar if i've made mistakes, i'm not a native english speaker)
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From ANON - Mickey Ryen on October 25, 2011
I just finished my second reading of your story. I am convinced. It has been the best Lucius/Hermione fic I have ever read. There have been others that have been great, but your stories, particularly this one, are legendary. If Lucius/Hermione was in a dictionary, it would read: Lucius/Hermione - (n) hot fan pairing with limitless sexual potential. see the works of LaBibliographe.

Thank you very much for your stories. It is so easy to get drawn in for hours. (I feel like I have to read your chapters in quick succession.) Although, I will say that I did have to consult google quite a bit for the new/unknown words in your story. I was happy to do it. I love learning new things, and your story made the effort pleasurable. lol

Thank you again. Please write more someday.
~Mickey
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From ANON - newreader on September 18, 2011
I had some ideological difficulties with the consent elements of the marriage and then the sex within it at the beginning of this story, and I was skeptical at first about whether I would enjoy where it was going, but even in the earlier chapters I was never less than entertained and compelled by the story you wove. Needless to say by the end I was thoroughly enjoying myself and very happy that they had worked out some kind of balance together which was mutually beneficial.
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