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Reviews for Unexpected Things

By : windy
  • From hellangelhellina on July 08, 2010
    I love this story. It realy good.
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  • From LonelySyndrome on June 24, 2010
    FFfffffffffffff! I love the way you think! This is one of the best and well thought out Lucius/Harry fanfiction I've seen yet! I think I'm in love with you for writing this and hope you will update soon since I saw that you haven't updated since last month, but no pressure since you have your own personal live to attend to besides this story. The only critism my poor, soft heart can give you is that you have many grammar mistakes, but they don't really matter. So there really is nothing. . . . . And I was just wondering. . . . Will Lucius and Harry get married?
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  • From lex1621 on June 01, 2010
    This story is absolutely priceless, I love it!
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  • From faithsdouble on May 12, 2010
    Hey, I have been following this story from the beginning and love it so far. I did notice that there are still some gramatical errors, if you are in need of a beta to go through and correct it, I would be willing. You can contact me at my email: faithful_kink@yahoo.com if you are interested in my offer
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 11, 2010
    Sooo need chapter 22!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 17, 2010
    Sooooo need chapter 21!!!
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  • From TheDarkBeginning on April 13, 2010
    alright i have read the entire story that you have posted so far, and I love it. If not a fanfiction I could honestly see this as something like a novel in the making. It's truly wonderfully done. I thank you for the great read so far, i'll check back and if there is a mailing list for updates I would love to be included on it.

    Thank you
    E
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  • From TheDarkBeginning on April 12, 2010
    i am on chapter 6 of this story and i am loving the way this is going so far. Though I can't help but cringe at some of the grammatical errors, (English major, sorry.) If you'd like I can begin going over it and mail you the fixed chapters. It's not something you have to do the story itself is great, and I love how everyone seems to be staying in character with lil tweaks here and there of course to fit the story. Anyway I'm gonna go continue reading now, keep up the spectacular work.

    E
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  • From rinkankuruhyou on April 11, 2010
    I like it, and I've noticed fewer mistakes in the last few chapters. I hope you will update soon and can't wait to see what happens with draco.
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  • From simones123 on April 10, 2010
    I love this story more and more and the next should definitely be with Lucius!!
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  • From Mahmelie on April 09, 2010
    Amazing story!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 06, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 19!!!
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  • From TheUndiscovered on February 05, 2010
    this story is ace! love how harry is flirting to get what he wants as well as malfoy sr. and tht they are both attracted to each other but all the while denying it in a way. love it!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 22, 2010
    Sooooo need chapter 19!!! Narcissa thinks the bracelet is for Draco. Won't she be surprised.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 01, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 18!!!! I'll have to check back to see if you updated! I usually haunt HP/DM!!!
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