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Reviews for Unexpected Things

By : windy
  • From Yuutousei on December 23, 2009
    I've been lurking your story for a while (sorry, but at one point, reviewing on AFF made my computer hate me, so I've been wary), so, in the spirit of the season, I gift you a review, lulz.

    Wonderful "D The last line was just... ah, there are no words to explain it's pure awesomeness. I'm quite excited at what will come next.

    Have a happy Christmas (or whatever you celebrate). And I won't ask for a new chapter soon - just that you have just as much fun writing it as we will have reading it~
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  • From WolfPup5683 on December 11, 2009
    Interesting story.
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  • From dehdavid on October 19, 2009
    I am normally a lurker, but I absolutely love this story. Please continue it!
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  • From countesszero on October 19, 2009
    nice! i like lm. somehow people don't write about him as much as about the marauders.

    i never would have thought harry is desiring marriage. is that not very girly? it does make him a bit needy - or manipulative depending on one's view point, but i am sure it makes a cute plot device.


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  • From countesszero on October 19, 2009
    hey so far you hp/lm story is a nice read.

    i am also a big fan of spoilers (uhm, especially where there are sex scenes involved.) there are some things i just DON'T want to be exposed to, no matter how well written the rest is :)


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  • From simones123 on October 14, 2009
    great, I love the story!

    Only 5 or 6 more chapters,too sad!!
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  • From lostinthought on September 16, 2009
    ooo.... smirks can't wait to see the next update..
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  • From gravilove19 on September 10, 2009
    I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From lostinthought on September 03, 2009
    can't wait to read more. thanks for sharing
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  • From yourblackrose on August 21, 2009
    i love this fic so i hope u update soon:) its really good and i would have never expected this to be your first hp fic until u said it was!!! so great job!!!:)
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  • From noxlumen on August 14, 2009
    I see a great deal of potential in the story but I am having troble reading it with the typos you have. I would love to help you with those and try my hand at being a beta. Please contact me so we can work together to make this better.

    amber.and.the.kids@gmail.com
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  • From simones123 on August 09, 2009
    Great update, can't wait for more!
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  • From danawarner on August 07, 2009
    It's an interesting story. I've never reviewed before because I never bothered to read it before.
    Can't wait to see what happens next.
    BTW: some of the tenses of your words are off. (ex. He calls, instead of He called)
    = Pick a tense and stick with it.
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  • From on August 07, 2009
    NNNOOOOO!! DUUUUDE! This story is awesome!
    I love how the story isn't rushed! I really
    hope you update as soon as possible! I'm
    in love with this story!!!
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  • From on August 07, 2009
    Rawr!!I love the feisty Harr!
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