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By : SalonKitty
  • From mannyaf1 on July 16, 2010
    Great chapter, loved the Harry and Hermione scene. After all that has happened I hope that Harry doesnt let himself get swept up with Luna so easily. She did break Harry's trust and she should work at earning his trust back, Harry shouldnt have to do everything. She was a fault too.
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  • From marinepotterfan on July 12, 2010
    What a wild ride with Hermione, a frend with benefits.

    Thanks for writing
    MPF
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  • From xtp10279 on July 12, 2010
    Hm. Yeah. Well, that was quite good, wasn't it.

    Uhm...

    *dead faint*
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  • From Daye on July 12, 2010
    Holy goodness, I think that has to one of the hottest scenes you've written yet. It got this perfect mix of the bdsm stuff, coupled with what is feel is clearer consent on what's happening. So its more playful than the harder Master/slave stuff you do. Despite this originally being a Harry/Luna fic, this chapter really sold me on it morphing into full on Harry/Hermione.

    I must admit when I imagined this morphing into a sex scene, I thought that Harry would remain submissive and Hermione would be taking charge in her typically bossy way but the build up to the scene was completely in character. I loved Harry feeling guilty about perving on Hermione and slight scene of unreality and disbelieve he had that he was going to get to screw his best friend. Hermione very dry technical description of the act she want was so her and the way it got hotter and hotter as she lost control...

    Yeah, Well worth the wait. But now I can't wait to see wear this heading. I can well imagine Harry becoming involved with Hermione permantly from this, though I suppose he'll eventually make up with Luna. Perhaps He'll end up with both? Being submissive to luna and Dominating Hermione? Though Hermione knows he likes being submissive, so maybe she'll be up to try the domme role as well? THat'd be cool if they had a relationship where they both played both role at one time or another....

    And on a completely different note: the capatcha for this review was 'athletic chessmen' I mention this for no other reason than I found it amusing.
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  • From acky on July 12, 2010
    OMG, I think I just died and went to heaven. You know how big of a Harmony fan I am and that H/Hr scene has got to be one of the hottest things I have ever read in my life. I was grinning from ear to ear as I read through the chapter. I love how Hermione is a bit reluctant to give up control at first, but once she does boy does she ever. I thought the way you worked up to it too with Harry kind of unintentionally coaxing that side out of her was a really neat way to go about it. But enough of my rambling on not really making sense, simply put OMG. Update something else soon :), Im dyin here.
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  • From Pete91888 on July 11, 2010
    That was awsome. Incredably hot. Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 11, 2010
    That's probably one of the hottest things I've EVER read in any story....fan fiction, regular fiction, Playboy/Hustler fiction. You kept them both in perfect character and made it so believable and damn...it was just HOT. Thank you.
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  • From newtothis on July 11, 2010
    i like your story, i hope ron does not get left out. he need some sex, and the feeling of being close.
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  • From alienyouthct on July 11, 2010
    Go Harry go! YOU CAN DO IT!
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  • From majob on May 22, 2010
    I won't lie. I was glad when Harry did what he did. Luna was abusing the trust and faith he had in her and as a man, I certainly wouldn't have sat there and just forgive her. Good story through and through
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  • From xtp10279 on May 08, 2010
    My word, you do write some fascinating stories. And how on earth do you write so much sex without any of it being repetitive? I might have to go back and analyse your writing later so that I can figure it out. It's rather difficult to have an analytical brain in gear on a first read through!

    I'm up to chapter 3 - and yes, you definitely write well from the male perspective. The feminist and gender issues you are toying with are exceptionally well considered - and lead to some very hot sex.

    Brill!
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  • From cheater71 on April 04, 2010
    Well, me and alot of other people are starting to get worried. Its been a while since your last update, like 2 months...and i'm worried you might have grown tired of this story and given up on it. i certainly hope thats not the case. i would love to read more of this story, i want to know what lunas plan is. i hope you can finish this.
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  • From Daye on January 30, 2010
    Now I'm not sure, If I like this one or the other one more. I think I prefer the sex in this one and the story in the other one. Which I think is fair because the story in the one hasn't had as long a build up as the other one and is obviously less plot heavy taking place in the forgettable Half Blood Prince as opposed to Deathly Hallows.

    Oh and poor Harry's a damn idiot thinking with his dick like that. Could just seeing all that end up tears and embarrassment and so it did, or will.

    Really liking your depiction of Daphne Greengrass though; for a character who had all of one line in the seven books; she's fucking hot in this.
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  • From 4privetdrive on January 23, 2010
    I just thought you should know that this is THE best fanfiction I have EVER read. KEEP IT UP, please! :) *hugs*
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  • From lilone77 on January 19, 2010
    amazing!! i just finally got caught up and i really cant wait till the next chapter!!
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