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Reviews for Girls & Boys

By : SalonKitty
  • From cheater71 on January 04, 2010
    I'm so glad lunas going after harry, i enjoy the times they spend together the best in this story. I find it amazing that you manage to get so much character depth out of what could have been mostly smut, as you have mentioned. So many writers lose sight of the characters in the midst of the sex, but you always have a strong sense of who they are at every moment. Such a good read, and i can't wait for you to update Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen. Thanks for the email by the way, it'd been so long since you updated, i'd gotten out of the habit of regularly checking. I'm a little worried about your new story though, don't quite think it'll be a pleasant read just by the description.
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  • From Pete91888 on January 03, 2010
    Great chapter I look forward to the next update.
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  • From compwiz101 on January 02, 2010
    I hope you update this story soon! The anticipation is killing me!
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  • From cheater71 on November 24, 2009
    I'm captivated by this story. I've only made it to chapter seven at this moment, because i'm slowly devouring it. The characters ring so true while moving in directions i can't imagine the actual ones would, yet it seems to flow so naturaly, I'm loving it almost as much as i did the real series. Though i suppose i'm dissapointed not to see more of hermione, i can understand how she wouldn't quite fit into this story. In all other respects its wonderful. The sex is more then i ever thought could occur in any story containing the carnal act. Its more then i can take at times, yet it does not offend, and i am actualy impressed by the writers unique imagination. The world of harry potter must lend itself to an amazingly broad range of ideas for the creative mind. The writer has captured a real element of the actual series in these charaters, its a pleasure to read it.
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  • From Oric13 on November 01, 2009
    Awesome series - incredibly hot.
    Aside from writing very hot, very kinky sex scenes, you also got a knack for writing funny dialogue that fits the characters.

    I am a little surprised at the very small role that Hermione plays in this story, considering what a huge part she plays in Harry's life in the books. Despite not being the gossipy kind, she surely must've heard about Harry's sex life by now and talked to him about it.

    Anyhow, I also want to say that I very much enjoyed the plot-filled chapter 7. It felt like the story really needed a chapter like that and take a bit of a breather from all the sex (which Harry also needed). I hope you'll continue to show us more of Harry's "ordinary" Hogwarts life. This has the added benefit that it gives the sex scenes more impact.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Pete91888 on November 01, 2009
    I finally got around to really read Girls & Boys. I really like it. I can't believe I waited so long to read it. I especially got a kick out of chapter two when you described Harry's first reaction to Luna showing him off to her roommates. ANyway I'm definatly going to keep reading until I get caught up to the latest chapter.
    PS. I also am looking forward to the next installment of MS&E.

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  • From Elphaba on October 31, 2009
    oh my! Wow, I need to go lay down, I'm tired...
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  • From acky on October 27, 2009
    One thing I forgot to add, Good luck with your One-Shot, you totally have to send it to me when you're done.
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  • From acky on October 27, 2009
    *Thud* I don't want this story to ever end. Even though nothing really happened with Harry and the other girls in the RoR you still manage to bring out such an amazing sense of just pure sexuality and lust. I almost feel bad for Luna missing out on this, or is she..... Hmmmm. But its her own fault. Im imagining the orgy unfold in my mind and I'm sure you'll just blow my vision out of the water. Absolutely cannot wait for the next installment. Don't be depressed by not having many reviews, when I look at my story, I just like to think sometimes that ppl are so blown away that they forget to leave a review. I think thats about my whole review so........ Update something else, Nao.....
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  • From wiberg123 on October 18, 2009
    I really found this story interesting. It is like the fantasy of fantasies. Trying to be the other gender with all intent of going back again.

    What a way it could be to learn each others small quirks better.

    ....and the story was a big turn on :P

    Thank you! (btw. how do I know when the next chapter is out? is there a notification system, that I cant figure out?)
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  • From Elphaba on October 08, 2009
    Oh My this has been awesome!
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  • From Amandajane on October 01, 2009
    Well who'd have thought it with Luna ?

    And getting her friends joining in..WOW !
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  • From Amandajane on September 30, 2009
    YAY I'm glad Luna got to be with harry. Thoe others were horrible.
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  • From blueneck666 on September 29, 2009
    He is gonna snap soon. He has had no control of his life so far and will seek it when he realizes his love and trust has been violated. After all, trust is the most important emotion for a sub.
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  • From acky on September 26, 2009
    *Faints*

    *Kitty finds several minutes later and wakes up with salt*

    My god, that was absolutely awesome. I love how you're keeping the challenge at heart, but adding you're own bits of flair to it. Can't wait for another update of this or MS&E, I need stuff to read.
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