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Reviews for Mystery of You

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From smmz79 on June 28, 2009
    great chap you wrote lucius' depression very well and i especially liked that you did not waste a lot of time on it.... i love that hermione was able to bring severus to her... poor thing was worried it seems that they have become quite close
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  • From dragongirl on June 28, 2009
    You are absolutly right they will be miss, but think about it .. God must be preparing a great party and he needs Ed for the announcements, Farrah for her smile and beauty, and Michael for the entertainment! On the other had your story is very sweet and we need more redemtion is always a good thing.
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  • From margaritama on June 28, 2009
    are these two mates? still don't understand what's quite wrong with her...and why Lucius could help her.
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  • From smmz79 on June 28, 2009
    what a great chap... i am glad that luna visited and we are getting to see more sides of lucius i like that... so harry and draco are together that is interesting... i bet that surprised lucius great chap btw!!!! can not wait for the next
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  • From smmz79 on June 28, 2009
    wow so lucius is going to help her that is cool and she can touch a person and read their memories and thoughts way cool.... so draco is being a baby hopefully he comes around and you kept him close to his charactor in the books he would be concerned with his fathers money....
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  • From smmz79 on June 28, 2009
    wow this is very interesting.. i wonder what her inheritance is???? hmmm great job and i like that severus is in this i hate that he was killed in the actual books so i always love it when a fic has him in it.... :-)
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  • From katiekrm on June 27, 2009
    You know, you make me laugh with all of your little review notes which is why I review. I'm glad that Lucius and Hermione are taking it slow. And I'm glad he's finally feeling some guilt for what he did to others. Not that they need to continue taking it slow. ;-)
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 27, 2009

    Chapters 7-8: I loved the back and forth talking between Hermione and Lucius when he convinced her to return to his home. It was sweet and snarky and clever and cute all at the same time. Lucius and Hermione played a joke on Draco? Lucius colluded with Hermione? It was a bet? Draco is perhaps slowly learning not to mess with Hermione. As for Harry breaking up with Ginny and dating a blond
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 27, 2009

    Chapters 4-6: Hermione is willing to let Lucius help her without a murmur of dismay. I suppose if I were tossing people around without trying, I
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 27, 2009

    Chapter 1-3: Hermione is affected (or infected) by some special trait? Hmm, interesting. And what trait did Snape inherit? Does she have a bit of clairvoyance going on? Hmm, it might include seeing the past, also. How fascinating, she
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  • From lilashannah on June 27, 2009
    I love Luna.She is so deep.Hell of a good Chappy but I wish you could post more then one chappy at a time.The story starts to roll along and then..we have to stop and wait.ahhhh.5/5
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 27, 2009
    I've always liked Luna. In some ways she's more intelligent than Hermione because she uses intuition as well as fact and can sythesize the two seamlessly. I wonder if JK was aware she'd created a character that used holistic logic not only for analisys but as a lifestyle?
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  • From shelagh on June 27, 2009
    Execellent job with Luna! I love the way you write her. Could we possibly have a longer chapter please? I don't mean to sound greedy but I am enjoying this story.
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  • From margaritama on June 27, 2009
    Oh, Lucius had better not be losing his snarky, dommish, bad-ass edge....this soft Lucius is a bit disconcerting. I do love Luna and how funny about Draco. So where does that leave Pansy? Such a tangled web you've woven.
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  • From margaritama on June 27, 2009
    the whole greyback admission was seriously shocking -- did he rape her? it wasn't clear...oh lord. ron is an idiot.

    so Lucius can't explain the attraction and possessiveness...
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