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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From ANON - Megan on January 18, 2010
    FINALLY! We're getting back on track. How long will it take for these two dunderheads to realize they love each other? Really?
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  • From lostinthought on January 18, 2010
    OH was soo happy to see this if only they stayed together....
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  • From ANON - kns on January 18, 2010
    i cried. that was so sweet. i was wondering. did harry do the contraception charm or something? was this planned because he wanted to be w/ snape?
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  • From ANON - Tryysta on January 18, 2010
    I love your story!
    Every time I see a new chapter is posted I almost get nervous, I hate seeing Harry not realize he is such an idiot about Snape and how he treats him. It just seems so wrong to have them with different partners, but you make it work and have written a fantastic story. I read many many stories and this is the first I have reviewed in a long time.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Spiceholmes on January 18, 2010
    OMG! They had sex again, yes, it was bloody time if you ask me. Now what will happen next. Will Snape get pregnant of that encounter? and will Neville find out? and what about Creevey? I can not wait for the next chapter, every single time I read a new chapter I always want more. But still I want to hit Harry for using Severus in that way and not being upfront of why he is actually doing it, but oh well we cannot as then who we would hate. Keep it up your doing marvelous.


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  • From ANON - Angelstone on January 18, 2010
    I love this story soooo much. You really have done a great job at it and I always can't wait for more!Keep up the good work you really have talent. I can't wait until Sev and Harry get back together again :)
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  • From Veracityrules on January 18, 2010
    Awesome chapter, absolutely awesome. I seriously think that should mollify some of the bemoaners of the recent updates. You had us going there for a while.

    Great update, I just hope there will be further updates sooner rather than later.
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  • From ANON - seshy on January 18, 2010
    yesssss!!! i loved it! finaly i can see a light at the end of the tunnel..this chapter was realy yummmy
    thanks for telling me about the new chapter
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  • From MalfoysBitch on January 09, 2010
    OMG!!! Mylap top was murdered!! So i had to wait a while before i could read the last few chapters!!
    WHAT!!Harry and Denis, Snape... not with Harry!! WTF!!!
    I trust you, so i wont go psycho on you ;-)
    Cant wait for the next update, last 3 where fantastic!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kate on January 08, 2010
    I like how your making Snape learn that he CAN live without being punished. Also love the way you just gave us a huge hint about why only 2 kids have magic. Bet Harry wasn't the only one needing help that day ;-) Kingsley doesn't strike me as a sadist. I hate Harry so if Snape finds happiness with anyone else I'll be happy but I hope you have Harry realize what an ass he's been. Love the story.
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  • From lilpotter on January 07, 2010
    ok harry is monster, neville is good guy.but still i don't like neville and can!t imagine snape and him.i want harry and severus get back together soon please.i want happy snarry final.
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  • From Elvira on January 05, 2010
    Can someone please hit Harry! He's such a jackass if he can't see he's hurting Severus by saying all of that! He pisses me off, He acts like a brat at time. Anyways, sorry for my little rant there, I loved the chapter and good for Sev, he's not marrying Neville just like that. Update soon!
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  • From aislinnsdair on January 05, 2010
    It may be a good idea, when you decide to write another story, to incorporate something like the information that Poppy reveals about Severus' need to be controlled, in a more consistent way. If she knows this about him, she would have recognized that this part of him was responding to Harry in their relationship, and she likely wouldn't have been as harsh towards Harry as she was. Similarly, if you're now trying to explain away Harry's behavior with the little blue pills, it would have been more effective for us to see him taking them prior to becoming more aggressive - there is a writing technique called "show, don't tell" Here you are telling us this is the reason for Harry to have acted the way he did earlier, when we needed to be shown it earlier. You could still explain it here, but it wouldn't be coming out of left field as it is now. Also, that may account for his nasty behavior with Snape sexually, but it wouldn't account for his general nasty behavior and his complete unwillingness to listen to everyone else in his life that he loves and respects. I still don't see any motivation in your story for Harry to be such a jerk, unless you intentionally want one of your main characters be someone that has almost no redeeming qualities. Why should we care what happens to him, or want Snape to end up with him, when we have yet to see him recognize or take ownership of anything that he's done wrong, or attempt to grow? Time for some resolution to be shown in his thoughts and actions, not just more dysfunctional behavior, like his attempts to make Snape jealous here.
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  • From Kalendral9 on January 04, 2010
    I so hope Harry and Sev get back together soon... I love this... K
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  • From Veracityrules on January 03, 2010
    Excellent writing, excellent chapter. But what a nerve Harry has eh?! Expecting Sev to help him out and give him advice and acceptance with his relationship with Creevy, cheeky bastardo. I hope his impotence is nothing to do with his 'medical condition' and more to do with the soul bond. I also hope that suffers the way he has made Sevvy baby suffer...bastardo.
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