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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From mrequecky on January 03, 2010
    oh wow... Is Harry really this dense???
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  • From Spiceholmes on January 03, 2010
    Oh poor Severus, and what a mean Harry doesn't he know that his hurting Severus with the comments his making. I just want to go and smack him around that is what he deserves as for Neville I want to tell him to open his eyes and just help Severus with Harry to stop dragging his feet and see what it was there all along. Severus does not like you Neville, but oh well I know he wont stop, but maybe that is what Severus needs too. I am so happy that he got his independence back, but will Harry ever give him his magic back.

    This was a incredible chapter I cannot wait to read the next one, even if I have to wait a whole month, take care and keep them coming.

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  • From ANON - anhelo on January 03, 2010
    Sorry, I had some troubles with my computer
    But what happenned? how could you seperated them?
    I really like Dennis and I can't stand Neville, I really like hope you will perform some magic and bring back Sev and Harry together (maybe with Dennis, as a threesome!)
    I really enjoy your story

    Kiss Anhelo

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  • From ANON - GeminiSoul on January 03, 2010
    I have just decided after reading 36 chapters of this story that Harry Potter is a bastard. That's all I gotta say. Plus I think everyone else
    should have left well enough alone. They forced Severus to do something he didn't want to do and now he's alone and seeing Harry with Dennis and he doesn't have feelings for Neville and poor Richard. He just stuck in the middle with his parents seperated..it sucks.
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  • From ANON - luna love on January 03, 2010
    I just read this one from the beginning and it was hard reading at times because Harry is such a dick, but I was hoping that it would actually begin to make some sense why he is like that and that Harry and Sev could have some future. So I went on with hope.

    But now I wish I hadn't cause the thing with Dennis and Neville, who I both hate here, is ruining the story and making no sense at all, and it's making it harder to get any idea of what Harry and Sev are thinking at all. All of it leaves me with asking why, about everybody and everything actually, without really caring to know the answer at the same time. (don't even get me started on the crazy "friends" who are just as bad!!!)

    The almost-Sev/Neville and Harry/Sev's last talk was the last straw and this chapter is the last for me.
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  • From circe266 on December 30, 2009
    Whew, I just read all 35 chapters in one sitting! I am enjoying your story very much, and can't wait to read the next chapter.

    Even though the story is categorized as Harry/Snape, I really, really, really hope that Severus ends up with Neville instead. I'm sorry, but Harry is such a rat bastard: telling Severus how ugly he is, taking his pleasure without giving any in return, expecting Severus to take a potion to cut his penis off!! And now his sick little pleasure at the thought of taking Dennis's virginity?!? What an ass -- growing up neglected doesn't begin to excuse this reprehensible behavior. Severus deserves to learn what real love is from a kind person like Neville.


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  • From ANON - alexia on December 30, 2009
    Thanks for updating soo quickly, keep 'em coming!
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  • From ANON - sinfulwolf on December 30, 2009
    omg really!!! you are killing me here. I just want sev to be happy! poor thing has been through so much. Harry is a douche as far as i'm concerned anyway, I have been following this story since it first started. I never expected it would become such an epic piece of literature. I can't wait for your next chapter I only wish you could post more frequently but it's ok at least you are not letting it die like what happens to most fics lately. I love the direction you are going in and I am very excited to see how everything turns out in the end. Happy New Year!!
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  • From ANON - seshy on December 30, 2009
    if u keep up this crap with sev/nevile relationship i wont even bother to read this story anymore....i couldn't wait to read a new chapter, but right now it's just anoying...sev and harry are meant to be together...so fuck mcgonagall and that medic witch bitch! i hate that nevile imbecile and that denis moron...and everyone else who comes between harry and sev
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  • From mrequecky on December 30, 2009
    oh wow, it sounds as if both could eventually be happy with other people... But i do so want Harry and Severus together...
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  • From Elvira on December 29, 2009
    Ok, Harry is stll a bastard in this chapter but he's getting there. Poor Sev, (sigh) He really doesn't know what love is. Update soon Please! I love this story!
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  • From helga1967 on December 29, 2009
    Excellent, the amended of the chapter 34 make more easy and enjoyable the reading. The tale is brilliant.
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  • From Veracityrules on December 29, 2009
    OMG what the hell is going on? The whole plot is going topsy turvy, what with Neville trying to marry Severus and Dennis going out with Harry. Arrrggghhh, I can't keep up and think I'm going super bonkers crazy!!!

    Happy new year btw!
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  • From ANON - Kate on December 29, 2009
    Your story is definatily interesting. Can't wait to see which direction it goes. Or how Harry is going to handle Dennis since I don't see Dennis as sitting back and letting Harry treat him like he did Sev. Hopefully Sev doesn't take to long to realize what he was missing.
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  • From Spiceholmes on December 29, 2009
    Ha! I am so lucky, now that I have time to read, I find out that you updated twice. K now on to the review.

    I want to hit Harry I think he should have fought longer for Severus, but I do understand that he actually thought that that was what Severus wanted. As for Harry and Dennis now that I was not expecting, I hope that when they reunite back Harry will learn to love and show it and for Severus to know what he wants and does not.

    Another incredible chapters, I cannot wait until the next one and as you will not post before New Year's HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!!!
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