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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From ANON - kjg on December 29, 2009
    i hope harry doesn't treat dennis badly. i'm really sad that they are moving on. its understandable thought but still sad. i'm really mad at harry adoptive family. how can they do that to him. harry needs help. its a good thing that he still have dennis. please don't let harry hurt him. he actually my favorite in this story.
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  • From paganwoman on December 29, 2009
    Am I the only one who sees a little conspiracy here between Dennis and Neville? Isn't it convienient that Dennis is WAITING for Harry in the house when he gets home? And this sudden declaration of love by Dennis. I'm smelling conspiracy here and it can go two different ways. Also, what is this mystery illness of Harry's? Hope that you update soon. Have been anxiously awaiting new chapters for long time. Am seriously hooked on this story. So far, has not disappointed. I think fanfiction is great and trying to always write the characters in canon is dull. The reviews blasting you for making Harry a bit (!!!) evil are hilarious. This is your story, your world and you do with them as you think is right. Knock yourself out and have fun with this. Remember, every story that is written out of character pisses JKR off and she "deserves" it after that stupid epilogue.
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  • From ANON - alexia on December 28, 2009
    great twist, hope harry admits his love soon. can't wait for the next update! thanks
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  • From ANON - Abby on December 27, 2009
    This is such an amazing story! I feel so bad for the characters it makes my heart hurt. Poor Snape. Poor Harry. I can't wait to see what you do next!
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  • From lostinthought on December 27, 2009
    oh please say they some how get back together.. can't stand to see them separated.
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  • From linky4u on December 27, 2009
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  • From mrequecky on December 26, 2009
    Oh, I really had to cry so hard... Poor Harry and Severus...
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  • From KillingProphet on December 26, 2009
    With every damn chapter I fall more in lovr with you. So update aoon my love cup is empty. I really want to know what is up with Harry, I bet this is going to quell the mass hystaria over Harry being mean. Although I love him like this. Don't keep him with Neville to long we don't want Severus getting to upset.
    KP
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  • From ANON - Not_a_dr_yet on December 20, 2009
    I love your story! I can't wait to find out how it all ends. Post more soon! Please...?
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  • From MalfoysBitch on December 16, 2009
    OMG!!! Who does Neville think he is!! Trying to TRAP snape into a loveless marriage!!
    He thinks
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  • From KillingProphet on December 16, 2009
    No, no, no, no! Harry never said why he did it!! I want to know damnit! Update soon or I'm going to have a heart attack. Lovely chapter as always.
    KP
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  • From RoseKelly on December 16, 2009
    I hate Neville, Minera, & Sprout...I am actually starting to get pissed off! I don't know if that makes it a good story or something I need to stop reading.
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  • From ANON - Gwympsy on December 16, 2009
    I agree with Jess/Jessy/whatever, I'm not reading another chapter until you have made sure Severus is NOT marrying that FUCKING TOAD Neville. I really loved this story up until a few chapters ago. I craved every new chapter, I even waited up on the days I knew you'd update. Then you went and destroyed it when it was finally coming to a happy closure. I can usually handle angst, but this is just ridiculous. You do not separate them like this and keep your readers, just so you know. Kill Neville, get him away from it. He does NOT, I repeat NOT, belong anywhere NEAR Severus, ESPECIALLY NOT in this story. There's been enough angst, really. You don't get to pull one of these at the finish lines. If Severus does indeed marry Neville, I am going to stop reading this and remove the link from the 4 fic rec lists it's been on. Neville destroys the charm of the story. He's suposed to be Harry's friend. Honestly. Harry did more for him than Snape EVER did. He was scared shitless for him. I do love Severus, and I know Harry's been bad to him, but really, give them a fucking break. Give us readers a fucking break, or all of us who can't stand mroe angst are going to be leaving.
    I'll be waiting for the next chapter. If Neville STILL intends on breaking them apart after hearing Snape admit he loves Harry and even admitting they are soulmates, I am NOT returning after that.
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  • From ANON - Jess on December 16, 2009
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Ok, seriously, I'm not going to read another chapter until this is completed and I can skip (or at least skim through the most important details of) the HORRIBLE angst, because THIS is TOO FUCKING MUCH. Really, cut them some FUCKING SLACK! Don't marry him off to Neville; you can't keep the story in the Harry/Snape section then and it will DESTROY everything that WAS good with this story. Horrible idea. Don't even think about it again. Shame on you! I feel like screaming. DO NOT DO THIS TO ME.
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  • From Kalendral9 on December 15, 2009
    Woah! Intense... Keep 'em coming... K
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