Click Here!

Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From ANON - noctu on December 15, 2009
    I don't think you should let Harry get off scott-free, with just the divorce. He's done more cruel and inhuman things to Snape than anything a Death Eater could ever have done - and before you rise up and challenge that, let me remind you that at the end of a Death Eater's playing with you, they killed you, or you died from your injuries. Snape has not died, and there has been no end to it - and after the marriage, Richard is two in the current chapter,that's a LONG time -, although you have had Harry soften towards him. I think Harry needs serious mental counseling, and yes, even imprisonment. The authorities that have the power to force him into marriage can certainly force other things upon him, with the support of the community behind them. And at this point wouldn't Single just love to screw Harry up?
    Report Review

  • From mrequecky on December 15, 2009
    Oh oh... I really hope Neville is not gonna do what Severus asked him to do and instead is going to get Harry out anyway...
    He just has to see how much Severus loves Harry, no way is he gonna continue if he knows it will make Severus suffer more, right?
    Report Review

  • From Veracityrules on December 15, 2009
    OMG! Neville bloody Longbottom! Married, divorce Harry?! (Veracityrules can't handle these plot developments and swoons disbelief)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tolani on December 14, 2009
    OMG Wat just happened harry is so going to be devastated i hope sev doesnt marry nev PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CANT WAIT LONG
    Report Review

  • From Spiceholmes on December 14, 2009
    Do not hold me back I want a piece of that mean, dumb, stupid, cow Madam Sprout. How dare she do this to Severus and Harry, and that Neville how he dare , I hope that this backfires in all of them and they see the error. And poor Severus, he is trying to be strong, but he is dying inside *sniffs* how dare they.

    I cannot wait for the next chapter, your are doing great, keep it up. Bravo!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nestedis on December 14, 2009
    Oh noooooo!
    I almost wasn't able to read the last 3 chapters. Oh my gosh, what have you done? *cry*
    I so dearly want a happy end for Harry and Severus and you just break them apart....WAAHH...

    :) BUT: I am really curios what will happen next. I hope you will update soon. Because nethertheless your story is addictive and I just can't get enough of it :)


    Report Review

  • From ANON - catnona on December 14, 2009
    Wah! Why must you bring me near tears with these chapters?! Another brilliant chapter, I can't wait for the next angsty one to appear.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2009
    oh mu gosh!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - batfacedgirl on December 13, 2009
    Now this was a really great chapter. I have to admit I was getting frustrated with Harry but now I feel like I get where the story is going. LOVE the reasons behind Harry loving the way Snape smells.
    Report Review

  • From VanityAngel on December 13, 2009
    OMG how can they do this I hate them so much right now I hope Nevile only frees Severus without marrying him.I am so mad and frustrated right now that i'm actually crying.You are a great writer this is the second fic i cryed on i am normaly not so emotional.Please update soon!!!
    Report Review

  • From Kalendral9 on December 10, 2009
    Keep it up, can't wait for more ^_^
    Report Review

  • From KillingProphet on December 10, 2009
    A M A Z I N G! I have laughed, cried, been enraged, and excited. I love your work with a passion that is firey red. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes but nothing that can even put a scratch on the wonderful ability of your writing. I hope you updeate soon.
    KP
    Report Review

  • From MalfoysBitch on December 09, 2009
    Hummm... What an intresting chapter!!!
    Divorce...

    Snape wont go for it, and evenif they are divorced, Harry wont kick him out of the house,
    and sev wont leave - cause of richard and all that... so i wont freak out over this lil cliffie....

    Im just trying to console myself...
    I love this story!!
    Report Review

  • From aislinnsdair on December 05, 2009
    From the latest chapter:
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Emma on December 04, 2009
    Great story - is there any possibility that Harry could really go to prison and the rest could be about Snape and someone else? Harry is evil! I hate him! You haven't left him any sympathy with the reader. Send him to Azkaban for good!!!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!