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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From Spiceholmes on November 10, 2009
    Omg! what will happened next, will they have another child? Oh I cannot believe you, left us in a cliff again. I think you enjoy that, this chapter was really beautiful, but what I love most is that in one chapter you make me hate Harry and in others you make me love him. As for Severus I always want to hug him.

    Cannot wait for the next chapter, PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 08, 2009
    i dont knwo how to feel about this story at all... im completely flabergahsted and discusted by harry but at the same time i feel kinda bad for him being such an idiot like seriously when is he gonna get a clue? anyway update soon please!
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  • From RoseKelly on November 08, 2009
    Okay, I want more! Good chapter.
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  • From mrequecky on November 07, 2009
    Oh, Harry gets so impulsive sometimes... I loved how Severus turned the discussion to another topic when Richard arrived.
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  • From ANON - BWilde78 on November 07, 2009
    beautiful.

    he's calming down a bit. good to see. jealous rage, however misguided, still somewhat encouraging. it'll be nice when harry finally realizes how much snape actually cares for him.

    richard is adorable. i almost wish he could actually hex harry a little.

    this is really nice work.

    xx
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  • From MalfoysBitch on November 03, 2009
    Loved it, Loved it, Loved it!!
    Cant wait for more!! :-)
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  • From mrequecky on November 02, 2009
    Loooooved :D
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  • From Spiceholmes on November 01, 2009
    This was a really interesting chapter, first I love how you letting us view more into their marry life, and second love the way everything is coming along. I just love this story so much, but now I have a question for you when are they going to have their second child I would love to see more and what happen to the bad guys too.

    But overall I still think your a great writer and I cannot wait to see(read) the next chapter.
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  • From countesszero on October 31, 2009
    lovely - i wouldn't object to harry to go through with his initial threat and force severus into prostitution. hee. but obviously this is not that kind of story, so there. but the tale as it is still appeals to my inner sadist, in a good way :)
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  • From ANON - goldeneyed angel on October 29, 2009
    This story is great. If you would like an idea, you could have Harry reward Snape again and have Snape ask if Harry could just once call him by his given name 'Severus' and this could lead to the next step in Snapes and Harry's relationship if you are heading that way. It is a suggestion, but this story is great keep up the good work.
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  • From Veracityrules on October 28, 2009
    Muchas gracias for the newest chapter (I'm sorry but that is the limit of my Spanish). As usual excellent update.
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  • From Kalendral9 on October 28, 2009
    i can't wait until single gets his just reward... looking forward to the next chap... cheers K
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  • From Spiceholmes on October 27, 2009
    OMG! This was one incredible chapter you madam outdid yourself, I love this chapter I do not know what part I love exactly the most, but it was just incredible.

    But I cannot believe you, You left us in a cliff, I cannot wait and see(read) what he gave to her? is it the money? or a potion? What?

    Please, please with cherry on top, update soon!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on October 27, 2009
    Your English is amazing!! I can
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  • From ANON - anhelo on October 27, 2009
    I knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I'm proud of me ! lol!) I guessed that Mark was Milicent's Prince charming, I'm so happy for her and baby/Matthew
    I really liked the discussion between Ron and Harry, and I'm pretty sure they'll be close again

    I can't wait for your next chapter

    Anhelo
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