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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From mrequecky on October 27, 2009
    Ui, looved! I hope they start to go public somehow...
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  • From RoseKelly on October 27, 2009
    You know I may not have been happy with Harry in the beginning but now his "friends" are being the pain in the butts. Great chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Milla on October 26, 2009
    I absolutely adore this fic! It's just getting better and better!
    There is one thing I'd like to ask you... I'm going in for surgery on Friday, and will be on bedrest for 1 month, and I only have a stationary computer... I'd reeeeallly, reaaaaaaaaaaallllly want to read another chapter before the surgery! Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Nestedis on October 26, 2009
    That was amazing. I really liked the part about Millicent and Sly. And I really really really liked the part about Harry. Finally he is making progress!!! I can't wait till he gives Severus his magic back and treats him the right way (like Ron has described the relationship to Hermione). And also I really really really really liked to read that Harry confess his love to Severus. I am no longer able to read how he messes everything up. That makes me almost furios with him :)

    Can't wait for the next update, you are doing a wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - Bwilde78 on October 25, 2009
    i want to start out by saying how much i love your story.

    i really like the way harry and snape's relationship is progressing. even the way harry is still reluctant to admit his feelings for snape.

    but even though i know it's an important part of the story i cant stand the way everyone seems to look down on harry. there are times when i wish harry would just tell eveyone to shove off. if you hate me so much then stop coming over.

    how hard is it to understand that harry hasnt turned into some monster who cant be trusted. you'd think if his friends were truly his friends then they would take time to understand the reasons behind harry's actions and why he feels the ways that he does. it's so frustrating when they expect to barge into his house and know what's going on when they dont trust him with anything.

    fair enough, the way he treated snape in the beginning was horrible and pretty despicable, but he had just finished fighting a war and the only person left for him to take his anger out on for the things he had lost was snape. he was in no way justified in this, but even if he wont admit it i believe he regrets what hes done. i hate the way ron talks to him like hes some slow child. i hate the way everyone conveniently forgets about harrys dysfunctional ubringing, and how they have always relied on him to save them and then he makes a mistake and everyone turns their back on him. i know im ranting but i really feel like time and time again people rely on what they think they know about harry and now it's his friends who have abandoned him.

    and kingsley went in that room too. perhaps with better intentions but i fail to see how one gets off scott free and the other is persecuted.

    ps. i agree with everyone else...neville's an ass.

    love the story tho. just in case i came off upset. i'm just a bit into it. i think you're doing a brilliant job.
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  • From ANON - anhelo on October 22, 2009
    Sorry I'm late, I read your new chapter on my birthday (It was a great gift!) but I did'nt have time to review it before now.(I'm a midwife with a busy schedule!)
    It was a really interesting chapter. Baby is making progress (It's really great), Hermione and Ron realize that Harry cares about Snape (even if he's not ready to say it), I wanted to slap Neville (I'm sorry but I don't like that character, I don't know why!).

    I hope Harry's family will be happy and that Richard will have quickly a new brother or sister (not before he's two years old, I know! lol)

    Bye I will review all your next chapter maybe my english will be better!lol

    PS: I think that Milicent's prince charming is Mark, am I right?
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  • From ANON - alexsei on October 20, 2009
    Woo!!!!! Go Harry! Stick up for your family, man! And gwt our dear sevvy preggers soon...*cough* *cough*
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  • From Kalendral9 on October 20, 2009
    Ouch! This keeps getting better and better!!! Yay, Baby giggled!!! Soooo.... Is Harry really going to try for Minister?? Want MORE!!!!! K
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  • From MalfoysBitch on October 20, 2009
    Oh wow!!
    What a chapter!!
    "I have a family" - Is like Harry accepting Snape as his family and not just his Marked one!!

    And who does Neville Longbottom think he is?! "Il never keep Richard from you... so not only does he want to take harry's husband
    he wants to take his CHILD to!! What an ass!!! And even if Harry doesnt want to admit it, we can all see his concern for snape!!
    btw.. loved the chapter!!
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  • From ANON - batfacedgirl on October 19, 2009
    AWESOME!!
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  • From Spiceholmes on October 19, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter.

    Oh I cannot believe that guy coming out with the news paper to separate Severus from Harry.
    And Neville too don't they see that Harry loves him.

    I cannot wait...
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  • From chrisdavis on October 19, 2009
    O...M...G!!!!! This story is so fan-freakin-tastic! I just started reading it today and I read all 27 chapters. I am an advid reader of fanfiction and I can genuinely say that this is one of the best. The kind of story that makes you think about it long after you finished reading it and I can NOT wait for you to update!!!!! PLEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE update soon!!!!

    By the way, bad Harry is very disturbing but I really like the way he is slowely but surely coming around to being a decent person again.
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  • From Veracityrules on October 19, 2009
    Excellent chapter. It seems ages since you updated but I think it's just relative since it was only last week. I just wanted to tell you once again how much I love this story. It is fantastic.
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  • From mrequecky on October 19, 2009
    Oi, I loved that stampede :D I hope Harry really will run for Prime Minister!
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  • From ANON - SageKage on October 19, 2009
    OH! moonofthesea you make hating Neville so much fun even if Harry is suppose to be the bad guy. I love Harry and Snape can't wait for them both to relieve how much they like each other. I wait with much anticipation for the chapter that comes out next week. And don't sweat the technicalities you could throw out the whole epilogue for all I care your work would still be Awesome.
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