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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From helga1967 on October 13, 2011
    Wow! An excellent tale and a beautiful ending. I loved it was awesome.
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  • From ANON - Izanagi on August 04, 2011
    Rubbish. Utter rubbish.

    I'm only on Chapter 25, but everything about this makes no sense.

    A: How did you forget that Snape DIED in Deathly Hallows but remembered that Hedwig did?
    B: What is your fascination with mpreg? It is a disturbing subject that quite frankly I see no appeal for. Only women get pregnant. That is the way reality should be.
    C: Why in the hell are the Marked Ones being treated like this? Did Harry forget everything in Deathly Hallows? Snape tried to help him many times. Snape wasn't even responsible for Sirius' death (THAT WAS BELLATRIX LESTRANGE. A COMPLETELY SEPERATE CHARACTER. She probably deserves to be tortured, but Snape not so much. Even then, she doesn't deserve to be forcibly impregnated.), or James and Lily (That was Voldemort. It was Peter Pettigrew who ratted them out to Voldemort. You ever read the books?), and if you read Deathly Hallows, Harry should be aware that Snape was asked by Dumbledore HIMSELF to kill him. Really, Harry has no justification for doing this to Snape. Remember, two wrongs don't make a right.

    This is a very disturbing fic that clearly shows you haven't read the books that closely - or you're taking MANY liberties with the storyline - and JK Rowling would be ashamed that you have twisted her universe this way.

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  • From ANON - Elena Batista on July 26, 2011
    Well I have just started reading Adultfiction.net and this is the first story I find... While reading it in the beginning I thought it was a little too morbid for my taste, because of the way Harry acted towards Severus Snape. You see I didn't even like the end of Harry Potter because Severus died after all the hell he went through to keep Harry alive after Lilies death. I am a huge fan of the actor that played Severus Snape since I last saw him in Dogma... I fell in love with his voice.. But I would love to see the end of this marvelous story cause it kept me at the edge of my seat and even my husband read it with me.... You have a great talent for writing this kind of stories...

    Hope you let me know if you write some more new ones... I love to keep on writing your work...

    Sincerely Elena
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  • From MalfoysBitch on July 26, 2011
    wow!!
    Is all i can say! sooo cute!!
    Dont leave us waiting to long to find out how harry is going to save his family?!
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  • From wavedancer70 on July 20, 2011
    more this is so great
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2011
    Glad for the update! Can't wait for more.
    Xx.
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  • From mrequecky on July 12, 2011
    Oh, how sweet, what a beautiful update :)
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  • From niceladysakura on July 09, 2011
    Thank you for updating!

    Thank goodness there was a reinforcement, I am happy that Harry & Severus and their children are for now safe.
    I never thought the turn out of events, but I like it. How will Harry react to what Severus told him? Is it really possibly that their magic will bond? Does that mean that what Harry thought before was wrong that his magic and Severus' can't bond? I just hope that it will not ruin the afterglow they are feeling...

    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Judith on June 07, 2011
    How can you stop at this point?? I need more!!
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  • From ANON - Z~K on June 06, 2011
    absolutely cant wait for the next chapter :) love where the story plot is moving. :)
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  • From helga1967 on April 18, 2011
    Wow excellent chapter. Please continue, I love the idea of Snape with magic and willing to continue summiting to Harry, but ferocious defender of his childrens. I will love to see Harry in a more important position in politics in the end.

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  • From Kalendral9 on April 04, 2011
    YES! Sev's magic is back!! More!! K
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  • From ANON - Debby on April 03, 2011
    I started reading this on Saturday and could not stop until I had read all the chapters that are done. I love it! Fantastic! Is there a way to receive notices as to when it updates? I am snape504@yahoo.com
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  • From kattniptwo on April 02, 2011
    This is a great story but i mean what is up with Snape...I am sorry I can see him giving in but this is too much it is almost like he cant refuse...I just want to see some fire from him he is a shell of himself :(
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  • From kattniptwo on April 02, 2011
    Chapter 2..im just crying now..what is wrong with Harry..it would serve him right if snape lost the child due ot his abuse..someone has to get snape now!!!
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