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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From ANON - anhelo on October 12, 2009
    Hello!
    I'm a french reader so sorry if my english is not correct.
    I discovered Deserving 3 weeks ago and I think I have read it four or five times, and I really love it, at the beginning I was not so sure that I would like it but the evolution of your characters is amazing, and the story is great!
    I would like to say more things but I'm struggling with my english (It's weird 'cause I have no problem to read in english lol!)
    Thank you
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  • From starstruck86 on October 12, 2009
    Harrrrrrryyyy *whinging voice* Please. Just stop with the 'everything you say is a lie' and I'm beginning to get more frustrated with Severus, too. Whereas before he was the victim, i'm getting to the point now where he's becoming a sort of... I can't describe it. I'm getting impatient with his subservience, I suppose, which is obviously what the story is about and it's not bothered me until the last couple of chapters.

    It probably just does spring from Harry, though, I want them equal which is not necessarily the route you're going to take.

    Even still, great chapter and update. I think Ron was right to ask Sly to stay, its obvious his confidence in Harry was shaken by the fact he did what he did. I can't blame him for that. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - schabu on October 12, 2009
    pleaseeeeeee please update :(
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  • From Kalendral9 on October 11, 2009
    He shrunk his partner that is so funny. ROTFLMAO ^_^ K
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  • From MalfoysBitch on October 08, 2009
    wow!!!That
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  • From MalfoysBitch on October 08, 2009
    Wow, great emotional bonding for Harry and Snape!!
    Loved this chapter!!
    Welcome Mark Sly!!!lol!!
    A Feisty one he is...
    ;-)
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  • From mrequecky on October 04, 2009
    Wwow, I simply love how you're always full of surprises!!!
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  • From xAingealx on October 03, 2009
    As hard as it was to read the rape (many friends have been raped, we don't live in the safest place) It was definatly a VERY powerful start. I just wanted to say that before I continue reading, I can tell you I hipe that Harry changes for the better.
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  • From RoseKelly on October 03, 2009
    Okay that was cute ending...chuckle.
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  • From Spiceholmes on October 03, 2009
    another wonderful chapter...Oh this was really good I wonder when is Severus having his second child? Oh this is getting so exiting can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 02, 2009
    So aweseome! I loved that Harry had Sly shrunk in his pocket the entire time.
    I'm so glad the Slytherin students managed to get to Hogwarts without a hitch.
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Midnight Rain on October 02, 2009
    OMG! A tiny Sly! That's sooo neat! Please update soon!
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  • From starstruck86 on October 02, 2009
    Ooh, mini-Sly! Also pleased to see Harry having an actual conversation with Ron rather than just getting all bitter about how he deserted him.

    My heart gave a tiny crack though when Severus couldn't believe Millicent that Harry would love him. *sniff*
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  • From mrequecky on September 28, 2009
    Amazing, I really loved this chapter!
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  • From countesszero on September 28, 2009
    the story is that balance of a dom/sub fantasy and heartbreak. some might object to a submissive snape but i like it, canon or not. some of my favorite kinks are incorporated - bottom!snape, virgin!snape, slave!snape - oh, and pregnant!snape - so i hope you can write also prostitute!snape as well, but i guess that'll be difficult at this point. you story goes well with haagen dasz ice cream so thank you for that :)
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