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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From Kalendral9 on September 27, 2009
    Sweet, can't wait for more... K
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  • From ANON - Lilianblack on September 27, 2009
    at first I really didn't like this story, for some reason, Snape and Harry relationship just tugged me the wrong way. it almost physically hurt me to see Snape and Harry so broken. but i pushed through the chapters and now I'm glad i stayed with it. you are a wonderfull writer. and i look forward to reading more
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  • From Veracityrules on September 26, 2009
    Love the new chapter but how weird is this: I've been sat here reading the chapter after finishing work (midnight) in between watching a film that I've not seen for years on the television.

    It's Ghost with the late, great Patrick Swayze. Spooky!
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  • From ANON - Dee on September 26, 2009
    I'm totally captivated by this story. I couldn't stop reading, and thought the writing improved with every chapter. I like the way Harry doesn't fall head over heels for Snape, but gradually comes to build a family with him.

    I can't wait for Snape to get pregnant again, since I think we'll see a more indulgent Harry.
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  • From helga1967 on September 26, 2009
    I loved! Snape and Harry deserve a family. Is very good the step by step change of Harry.
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  • From Spiceholmes on September 26, 2009
    Thanks for updating this was a really wonderful chapter Harry is more open to Severus and everyone is starting to realize that Harry is not mean anymore oh that is so good. keep them coming.

    and Good luck with your job.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on September 25, 2009
    thanxz for the update it's my brithday and it totaly sucked everyone forgot ecept a two people but your update just made it so much better thanx again and i love this story i read all your stories and you have a great talent you should really nurture it.
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  • From starstruck86 on September 25, 2009
    That opening scene between them is one of the loveliest in the whole fic, I think.

    I just feel the eternal want for them both to meet and *enjoy* each other.
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  • From ANON - sandfull_a on September 23, 2009
    That's a wonderful story. Reading first chapters before Harry started changing his attitude, I had tears in my eyes.. and I mean tears. Now I am pretty happy with how the action proceeds and hope you will update often. Thank you.
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  • From alexsei on September 20, 2009
    Awww, how cute! Love the chapter, and how well your story always flows
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 17, 2009
    Severus' plight really breaks my heart.
    Amazing story! PLease continue!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on September 17, 2009
    OMG!!! I cant wait for the kiss!!
    :D
    I never noticed, they have never actally kissed!!
    What a great chapter!!!
    And I think you should bring in more of this Mark Sly fellow, I love that someone could beat Neville!!!lol!!
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  • From Veracityrules on September 17, 2009
    Great chapter!
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  • From starstruck86 on September 17, 2009
    Ohhhhhhh. Well. I wonder how that's going to go down?

    I was so uncomfortable reading what Snape did for Harry. I just want him to be able to feel normal. The man has spent his life trying to please others and yet he's forced into doing it all over again for Harry :(


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  • From Spiceholmes on September 16, 2009
    Oh no,no,no you can't stop the story there. I can't wait to see what happens will Harry kiss him? will he get punish for asking such a thing? Oh can't wait!!
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