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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From ANON - mre-quecky on September 16, 2009
    a kiss! I love your chapters, every chapter ends so very interesting, that I cannot wait for the next chapter... I was sooo wondering what he wanted.
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  • From ANON - Malfoy's Bitch on September 14, 2009
    Wow, another great chapter!!
    Such a great story!!
    Love it!!
    But...lol, the only thing... I HATE Neville!! He sucks!! He's so richeous!!!
    Let Harry go on a trip or two, build his powers up or something!!
    Just a thought!lol!
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  • From Veracityrules on September 13, 2009
    Excellent update as per usual. I can't tell you just how much I love this story and how much I look forward to the updates. Keep up the great writing. ;)
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  • From ANON - nap on September 11, 2009
    very nice chapter! harry's also trying to be nice and

    i really like severus's answer about his nightgown ,so touching !

    good good,couldn't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Spiceholmes on September 10, 2009
    I feel like I been waiting for this chapter for an eternity but it's here!

    OMG! Poor Severus, I just want to go and smack Harry on his head and say 'don't you see your hurting him' but *sights* I can't. Another wonderful chapter, keep them coming.

    One more thing your Beta is one lucky person she/he gets to read them first.


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  • From starstruck86 on September 07, 2009
    Oh god, and things were going so well :( Just because Severus finally gets a little release.... oh Harry, I was really starting to come round to you. *sighs*

    I know what you mean about getting sidetracked by reviews. It's happened to me a few times!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on September 07, 2009
    Good luck with the new position and all the extra work it brings!!

    Loved the chapter, take your time on writing it!!lol!!

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  • From SailorSol on September 07, 2009
    Just read chapter 20.

    I am finding this adventure into a dark Harry both disturbing and extremely interesting. You've apparently thought this out, and you're proceeding very well. Harry seems a bit less sympathetic than I would have thought to people being starved, but I'm trusting that things will work out. Please keep going, this is one of the best I've read recently.

    Your note at the end was both a surprise and a delight to me.

    I thought I was the only author, besides my husband, who quite often found that a chapter, or a complete story, developed a mind and a life of its own. Don't fight it, even if you can. You will find that the story flows better, and turns out more interesting and cohesive, this way.

    If you need to talk or if you want to know about my adventures in writing, drop me a line.
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  • From Spiceholmes on September 06, 2009
    Omg! I found another story of your yeah! I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, I love it. and please don't change nothing, for me it's perfect.
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  • From Nikte on September 05, 2009
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I think Baby is probably blind, cause he is so unresponsive to everything and everyone. Anyway, I can
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  • From mrequecky on September 04, 2009
    Wow, everytime I think it is going well, something blows it up. It is soo well written!
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  • From Veracityrules on September 04, 2009
    Oh, absolutely sodding brilliant! I love the mixed emotions Harry is displaying; passionate, posessive and yet disgusted with his desire for a man. Seriously conflicted...
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  • From squeaker on September 04, 2009
    Well, here I was, thinking Harry was getting a little better, then at the end of the chapter, he goes and blows it. You are doing an incredible job with this story and I can undestand the homework and job thing. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on August 30, 2009
    oh wow, their releationship is buding!!
    I love this story line...
    You have an amazing tallent!!
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  • From ANON - SageKage on August 28, 2009
    I have always been a big supporter of the !InoccentHarry but this story has completely changed my thought process, it make me want more of the abusive but kind Harry type stories. I can't wait to read more of this take your time and keep up the excellent work.
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