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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From RoseKelly on August 16, 2009
    Finally Harry is becoming human. I hope for more soon. It's been good!
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  • From ANON - zega on August 12, 2009
    I am reviewing from my phone since my wireless connection isn't working. Anywho, this chapter was far from what I saw coming. Harry taking in a child? Who are his parents? Are they irresponsible? It seems likely since M. is prostituting him out. That was a little disturbing, but not nearly enough to keep me from reading. I must read more now. That and the change harry is going through. Will he ever want to be loved by snape? Will he ever try to court snape for the sake of himself and their children? I look forward to the update. If you keep to the schedule, you'll be updating on my birthday and that will make my day. Thank you for the update
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  • From ANON - mre-quecky on August 12, 2009
    Yay, totally loooved the updates!
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  • From starstruck86 on August 12, 2009
    "Severus
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  • From Nikte on August 10, 2009
    Wow, awesome chapter, it was so damn sexy in a kind of dark angsty way, I loved it!!!!!!!!! You deserve a big box of cookies, hope you enjoy them. It
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  • From ANON - afraidofreality on August 10, 2009
    You are a good writer. I feel like watching a car accident, I just can not stop reading this story. I think if Severus and Harry are going to live happily ever after in the end I will throw up.
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  • From ANON - HazelWolf on August 10, 2009
    Oh my god. That was so hot. klahfahsclch. *random keyboard mashing*

    *GLOMPS YOU*
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  • From MalfoysBitch on August 09, 2009
    OMG! I just read this in one sitting!!
    I have never read a Fic like it and i was hooked from the first go!
    Chapter 13 even brought tears to my eyes!
    Im just annoyed I have caught up and now have to wait for updates!!
    This is fantastic!!!

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  • From MalfoysBitch on August 09, 2009
    This is such a good story, in a slight twisted way!! Reading it in one sitting!!

    You have an amazing talent!!
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  • From cathyhester on August 09, 2009
    Good story. Good writing.

    Smack Harry down.
    Update soon.

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  • From ANON - Bored137654 on August 09, 2009
    I've read and loved this story from the first chapter, although this is the first time I've had time to review, instead of just rating. Awesome chapter, and I love how the plot just thickens. This is the first bottom!Snape story I've ever even liked, and you've written it so well that I cannot not love it! Amazing story, really.

    I look forward to Wednesdays update! One thing though, Dennis is called Denise several times in the beginning of this chapter ;) But otherwise, AWESOME. I can't wait for Sev to realize he is falling for his husband, cause he obviously are!

    Love,
    Pilly/bored137654 (was too lazy to log in XD)
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  • From starstruck86 on August 09, 2009
    Even if you were late with your posting it's nobody's position to complain at all! :-|

    I still want to slap him with a wet kipper. And something harder behind that to send the message home.

    I hate how Severus believes he's done things to deserve punishment. It's so cruel. :(
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  • From ANON - Profound Yaoi on August 09, 2009
    This was a wonderful update!
    I've noticed how you've improved in your writing, too. :)
    I read your other stories and this is a VAST improvement! (And they were pretty good, too - just technical stuff like spelling and grammar etc)

    I hope Harry comes around and realises how awesome Severus is! Maybe he should let Severus treat him like he's been treated for a few days to see how he likes it! Including the bottled semen! Ha!

    Wonderful work. I can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - chichidark on August 06, 2009
    :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2009
    :)
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