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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From jojoleo63 on August 05, 2009
    This is a great story :). When are you posting the next chapter????? I hope Harry melows out :(.
    Hope to read more soon (big grin)
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  • From ANON - maloanne on August 05, 2009
    I like it.
    Their relationship is evolving nicely.
    I hope that one day, Harry realise how wrong he has been (and still is for considering Severus as the bad guy)
    But I hope he will not collapse completely under guilt.

    Bye
    M
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  • From Makovaso on August 05, 2009
    good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on August 05, 2009
    Severus, you deserve to be loved in this house. If not by harry, at least by your son. But I've seen improvement with Harry's treatment towards Snape and that makes me happy. Makes my heart grow a little for him. And you've been growing as an author too. I don't know if this is your only story or if you've sone others, but this one has made a lot of progress. It was super cute to see Snape giving Harry advice and how they interacted. Maybe soon the hatred Harry feels needlessly for Snape will pass and they can live happily every after. But then the fic would end and I would be sad cause then I'd have to find another one. Keep up the great work and I sincerely mean it when I say that I appreciate the frequent updates. You never disappoint me and that's why I continue to review and rate.
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  • From PantherRain on August 05, 2009
    Finally caught up! And slightly disappointed I did so. ;P Certainly greatly enjoying your story. Some of it makes me remember the early days...

    :)
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  • From PantherRain on August 05, 2009
    I've only reached chapter 6 so far, and surprisingly enjoying your story (bad past, so some things are hard to deal with). Anyhow, I read your comment on your daughters and the breastfeeding, and I just wanted to sympathize. My youngest was premature and too small to breastfeed. When he was big enough, he didn't take to it well, so I was forced to give it up. Though as you say of your daughters, he's happy and healthy and obviously hasn't suffered for it. Still, I think whether for the plot or not, it's something that should be encouraged. Again, interesting story and concept. This chapter was really saddening... it's always hard to think of a child's death, and especially for such a reason. To be honest, it's the only reason why Pet Semetary is the only horror film I cannot watch. Your writing is really rather fluid, which adds to the feel of it. Even with the little errors. ;)
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  • From starstruck86 on August 05, 2009
    :D There you go, smiley face because I enjoyed the chapter.

    The beginning did fair break my heart though. Poor Severus. I'm just so glad everyone else is deserting Harry in the meantime, it serves him right.
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  • From ANON - akahimena on August 05, 2009
    ^____^ Although Sev and Harry's relationship is on a thin wire, I still like where this is going. Keep writing ^_^ update soon please! YAAAY!
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  • From ANON - HallowsEve on August 05, 2009
    :)
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on August 05, 2009
    AWWWWWW!!!!! ^________^ CAN I HAVE MORE NOW PLEASE
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  • From Japhia on August 05, 2009
    :D LOVED it. I know Harry is curious about what Snape's milk tastes like... even if he won't admit it. He should just go for it. What's Severus gonna do, punch him?
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  • From ANON - schabu on August 04, 2009
    =O)
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on August 04, 2009
    Ha! I was expecting to have to wait until Sunday to get an update, but it seems we've (I really shouldn't use the collective we, as this is my first review) charmed you into posting early. I love this story. I could spend at least ten minutes writing all the reasons why and it's late. I will however, say that you're a very talented writer, your characters are complex and appealing. I look forward to seeing more from you.
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  • From on August 04, 2009
    :) :) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Enough Smileys??? I really like this story wasn't sure at first but now it's one of my favorites.
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  • From ANON - demonsweetie on August 04, 2009
    ^_^
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