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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From Nikte on August 03, 2009
    OOOOhh, that was a really sweet chapter, I
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  • From ANON - schabu on August 02, 2009
    This chapter was beautiful, I loved the sex scene, were harry started playing with sev's nipples, its a huge step forward for him! An is Sev starting to enjoy the sex too? after all he did contemplate getting himself off in the bathroom. Lol, but he does get off on harry's attitude, doesn't he? He wants him to be more forceful and in control during sex :D. I loved it! But I was sad that we didn't get to see more sex scenes, I think that during those we can also appreciate the change in their relationship. I loved the end, really, it would have been so sad if Harry was "dada" and sev was just "'ape", I was actually wondering what he would be called when he first called Harry dada. I really liked the chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D!!!
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  • From Veracityrules on August 02, 2009
    Great chapter. Thank you for updating. I read your A/N and realised that I had been guilty of merely praising the story and the updates and not the writing style/quality or your growth as a writer. I admit that the story has had me so sucked into its plot that I was oblivious of this. However, in your favour, your writing style was in my opinion already of a superior quality from the beginning.

    This, along with another WIP Snarry (Situational Ethics by Zega) are my favourite fics. Please take pride in this work as it is excellent and highly entertaining.
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  • From ANON - jillpaige on August 02, 2009
    i think that if the other "owners" of the marked ones start thanking harry for protecting their HORRIBLE actions, it may drive his horrible behavior home.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 02, 2009
    Having Richard around is having such a profound effect on Harry. I really love this story. You have a great writing style!
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Countess Zero on August 02, 2009
    oh! i do like your snape you know! as i am typing on an ipod my review is rather short. i like snape enslaved and pregnant. sadistic harry is ooc, but who cares :)

    btw, thank you for explaining the review system to me. i never understood before why people are so keen on reviews. i was not aware that it's connected to a ranking.

    i hope this story continues. it makes the heart ache in the perfect way.
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  • From mrequecky on August 02, 2009
    Well, Harry is growing as well :D I love how he is changing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2009
    I love this story, though it is hard for me to read. I like reading dark romance stories, but I've never come across anything like this before.
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  • From alm1067 on August 01, 2009
    I just read all that you have posted so far. I really like this story, please keep up the good work. Thanks for the story.

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  • From ANON - Aru on August 01, 2009
    That was def ur best chapter yet!
    I nearly cried at that last. It was beautifully written.
    Poor Sev -hope we get more angst even if Harry's turning 'nicer'
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  • From starstruck86 on August 01, 2009
    Lord, is he actually becoming... decent? *blinks* And actually enjoying the sex?!

    I do very much love your story, Moonofthesea. xx
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  • From stray523 on July 30, 2009
    I think the Ministry needs something like Muggle social workers to check up on the marked ones and their offspring to make sure they're being properly fed and taken care of. Even in the days before slavery was abolished here there were the Grey Laws to make sure people at least treated their slaves (which is basically what the marked ones are) fairly (i.e. taking care of their food, clothing, shelter, and health needs and not inflicting upon them cruel and unusual punishments). I love the way that you show that the "good guys" aren't always good or nice people and that even the best of us can be downright petty at times. I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - misaki on July 30, 2009
    Yay!! Harry is 'becoming human' again....well...kinda. Anyways...nice chapter. i wonder what will happen next.
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  • From starstruck86 on July 30, 2009
    *falls over dead with shock*

    ... *still speechless* He was far less of a tosser than usual. *blinks*

    *needs a stiff drink*

    Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
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  • From Nikte on July 30, 2009
    Ok, who's that man and where did he hide Harry? I just can
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