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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From ANON - chichidark on July 29, 2009
    I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't stop writing this story. I've been reading fanfiction for a long time and have seen many a good fic go unfinished. It's very good, so please continue!
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  • From RoseKelly on July 29, 2009
    Please forgive me for this because the story is well written and once I started I couldn't stop but Harry is SO out of charactor it's not funny. He is worse than Voldie and Hitler combined. Is this going to change at all during the story becuase I have to admit....I am having a hard time going on. Please forgive me I know I chose to read the story and it is well written and the OOC-ness of Harry and Sev in general draw you in but it's depressing and sad. Please keep writing because you do have talent. I'm sorry if this hurts you in anyway but I have no one to speak with about your story.
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  • From Duzziecatz on July 29, 2009
    WOw amazing I love the angst in the story. I wonder what will happen. I also wonder why harry is sudden;y acting all nice this is weird and from the whole story I don't get that he has a concious except for things that he may never had. He doesn't deny them that but maybe from story he has mental issues. I have no idea just guessing. Good luck on the story.
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  • From ANON - schabu on July 29, 2009
    When I started reading this I was shocked (and repulsed) by Harry's attitude and the way he treated Snape. I just wanted to close the story and go read something safer at Fanfiction.net, but I continued reading out of morbid curiosity. Now, whenever you post a new chapter I just keep naively clicking on the refresh button thinking that just maybe theres more LOL. Really, I visit AFF.net everyday to see if there is a new update, seeing a new chapter is like one of the best moments of the day!:D I love this story, and the way Harry is slowly starting to behave. Really, I hate those fics where the character goes from bad to good in a chapter (or in a paragraph!). Keep up the the awesome work. Lol, am I weird if I wanted Harry to try out Snape's milk? Lol I thought it would be funny, embarassing for them and incredibly hot! LOL
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  • From Veracityrules on July 29, 2009
    Excellent update. So, the plot thickens eh? Harry's attitude is changing, albeit slowly.
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on July 29, 2009
    Even though it is Snape who's suffering physical abuse... and slightly mentally as of lately, he still cares for Harry and excuses him when possible. I don't know if this is to not upset his "master" or because Snape has reached some understanding. Personally, this takes away from pitying just Snape. It's like Harry isn't entirely the one at fault and that's very interesting. I like it very much... if that's you intention. I'm also happy that Snape and Draco didn't get ridiculed during their marriage day. For Snape, it would probably be the only one he will ever go through. And for a while, I thought Harry was actually going to try some of Snape's milk. Hehehe.
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  • From mrequecky on July 29, 2009
    Oh, loved this chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - akahimena on July 29, 2009
    Hmmm what does Harry know that Sev doesn't and is his "kindness" going to continue? I hope so because it is getting to be hard to read. Harry is usually a sweet character so having him be basically sadistic to Sev is painful to read at times. Please update soon. i hope to be able to read this to the end. Lets find out shall we XD
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  • From kyuubifreak on July 28, 2009
    i hope that harry will slowly and surely fall in love with snape
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  • From Nikte on July 27, 2009
    OMG!!!! With whom does this threesome will be? Harry/Neville/Severus perhaps? Can
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  • From mrequecky on July 27, 2009
    Wow, I love this turn!!!
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on July 25, 2009
    Snape should have negotiated more with Harry. And to think Snape will have to go through everything again... god, that's horrible. But it keeps us reading. It would be really sad if the children could hear Harry beating Snape late at night. It will be sad once they learn how to discern things and see that their father is being beaten needlessly. I am curious to see how this is going to unfold. Good luck and keep up the great work.
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  • From starstruck86 on July 25, 2009
    Oh God. If I were him I would take the baby and run to any one of the offers on the table.

    And Harry doesn't get that he's the bad guy. *shakes head*
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  • From mrequecky on July 24, 2009
    I think I can feel a change - unconsciously - in Harry already. I love how you write him and Severus! I wonder if Hermione has her fingers in this marriage act...
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  • From ANON - Fairner on July 22, 2009
    *chuckles* Hermonie hermonie XD
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