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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From kattniptwo on April 02, 2011
    So harry just became what he hates he is worse then a DE..and I think Snape and the rest should go and hide and take the child Harry does not deserve to be a father!
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  • From mrequecky on March 29, 2011
    Oh my God... How can people be so stupid... Loved theupdates!
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  • From ANON - izzie-frutas @lj on March 29, 2011
    CLIFFIE! ANYTHING BUT A CLIFFIE!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 27, 2011
    OMG!!! What a chapter!! Fantastic!! The Drama!!!
    I hope you update soon!!
    AMAZING!!!
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  • From niceladysakura on March 26, 2011
    thank you for updating! :)

    I can't believe Single that evil evil man, atleast it made Harry come to his senses to give Severus back his power.. i just really hope that Harry will not be captured by Single and his men. There is still an advantage for Harry since Severus and Richard are invisible they can help Harry but that would be dangerous.
    I really hope that they will all come to safety.
    I really am anticipating for the next chapter.

    please update soon!
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  • From wyntermist70 on March 23, 2011
    WHere to begin I love how you wrote this story man you had me hating Harry I tell ya I was like how can you be this cruel to this man that hadn't done nothing to you. Ohhhhhh and the labor scene I tell you what nah you have got to give me some drugs to help me, but harry felt he need to suffer whooooo I was hoppin mad,but this fool wanted Sev to have TWO more Kids Like that I'm thinking he is slap out of his mind. Then Severus is so nice I love the side that he sooo sweet submissive though I feel he needs to be with Neville ( I know this is a Hary/Snape fic but hey a girl can dream can't see lol) Please Hurry up and give Sev his magic back cause harry need to get over himself he know he loves Sev so just deal with it. Now Draco and Kings Never saw that coming love that pairing they really are good together so since snape and Neville aren;t going to be together find him someone nice that will help him get over Sev. Well you keep on updating I'll keep on reading since I started this story I never knew If I was on my head or standing on my feet any way just keep on doing you and I'll be one of your many fans and I'll keep on reading.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 21, 2011
    AMAZING!!!
    I love how Harry is really starting to get protective over his WHOLE family and I can't wait for the next update!!
    Glad you didn't abandon the story!!!

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  • From purefaith91 on March 20, 2011
    Well that is just too aggravating for words. Hermione already told them that SS could still feed the baby and SS is not allowed to claim him anyway. And he is going to put up with torture from the little pig for his child. Does he not think that the kid will see the animousity? That it will not affect his child to see? I may have to wait until this is done and see how it ends as I cannot do with misery or the bad guys winning (for whatever reason). Your story is excellent, but I am just too soft for pure nastiness. p
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  • From purefaith91 on March 20, 2011
    Could HP be more of a dick? I hope this is not one of those stories where SS falls for his abuser. Of course, it does not help that SS has always felt guilty (and paid every day of his adult life) for what he did in his youth. For sure, it won't take long before word of HP's nastiness leaves him without friends and respect of those who know him. And he deserves it! p
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  • From niceladysakura on March 19, 2011
    thanks for updating!

    I've been waiting for this story to really update =)

    Serena is really a powerful witch when she grows up. So when will Severus be pregnant again?
    so many problems they must face, how will the ministry react when they know that Harry and Severus children are powerful, I do hope no one will support single and lang, i hate them both.

    Harry should start treating Severus will decency and Severus must be used to that kind of new treatment from his beloved husband.
    I really am looking forward to the day when Harry will finally realized that he is in madly and irrevocably in love with Severus Snape-Potter :)

    This chapter is wonderfully written. I like Harry's gift to Severus a bonding ring, he deserve to really have it.

    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ellie on March 19, 2011
    Huh, still not done? Well thanks so much for the unending revisions that keep circling the nail but never actually hit it, that keep inflating an already overinflated work, for pushing characters to the brink for no reason,* the being so sorry to your readers that after weeks of not sending me anything, i couldn't get back to you within 24 hours and then dropping me without telling me because I dared to voice that i thought something was unneeded. You certainly know how to treat your betas. Good luck to the person you work with next time.

    *Gentle readers, this is a conversation I've had to have more than once:

    Ellie: look, you've put snape through enough, you just keep rachetting it up but there's no character development. How have the characters changed from the last horrible thing to this one? Isn't this enough for Harry to say 'I love you'?

    MotS: No! But now I'm planning on castrating him, I mean, what's the word for the full remval of the genitals?

    Ellie: 0_o Why?

    MotS: Because.

    Ellie: But why? Will it finally show Harry how much he cares about Snape and get him to declare his love etc etc?

    MotS: No. But all the other characters will hate him and Snape will have to testify in court and Snape will say he loves Harry but Harry will never say it back.

    Ellie: I think you've already gone too far. Harry needs to do something.

    MotS: No I don't *think* Harry's ready for it.

    Ellie: Then instead of making him do increasingly horrible things why not create a situation where he has to feel differently?!

    MotS: Ahhhh Okay, you're uncomfortable with that. Maybe the castration potion fails but Snape gets really sick instead? Man this story's taking so long. I need to do a re-write...

    So whatever pros and cons of this story (and good for you those who like the story, and were faithful even at its middle section), trust me, it was much worst in rough draft. Be warned though: don't work with MotS. She's an ungrateful writer.
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  • From ANON - ladywolfinmt on November 28, 2010
    I have just spent two days reading your story from chapter 1 through chapter 49; and I must say at first I wasn't to sure if I liked it or not as Harry was actually so hatefull at first that I couldn't stand him. But then as I kept reading chapter by chapter I was drawn into the story and the almost painfully slow changes in both Harry and Severus and now I love the story. The one thing I really want to see is the Ministry bad guys get their comeuppence big time..lol. You have a lot a talent and I look forward to more stories by you. By the way I am one of your older readers at age 56, just thought you might like to know that not all your readers are younglings...lol. I am very much looking forward to the rest of this story and will check back often to see if you have updated.
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  • From ANON - Sofie on November 21, 2010
    GREAT story! I just spent my weekend reading all 49 chapters and now I really hope that you'll post the next chapter soon!

    I love your take on Harry and Severus' relationship - the ups and downs, the love, the *need*.

    Keep up the good work.

    ~Sofie
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  • From MalfoysBitch on November 16, 2010
    OMG!!!
    What a chapter!!
    I cant wait for the next one!
    Sev and Harry are developing amazingly as characters!
    I love it!!
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  • From helga1967 on November 09, 2010
    I love this chapter. The confrontation with the true of why Harry did like the idea to returned Snape's magic. It's good. It's a turning point in the tale. Thanks to continue up-date.
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