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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From squeaker on July 17, 2009
    I am loving this story and I sure hope that either Harry comes to his senses or someone hexes his balls off.
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  • From starstruck86 on July 17, 2009
    Thank you so much for the early update!

    I am so, so pleased Severus seems to have survived but in my eyes now, Harry's not going to be able to redeem himself. I'm glad he feels god-awful.

    Even if he did know about Severus decorating the nursery. (Which was a lovely touch, by the way, I'm just so, so mad at Harry I can't attribute it to good character).

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  • From ANON - Fairner on July 17, 2009
    o.o oh boy...the poor children striped of their magic, and severus T_T I hope he'll be okay.
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  • From mrequecky on July 16, 2009
    OMG! Harry is sooo dumb! I hope the MOM will try to get his child so maybe Kingsley can become MOM and of course I hope Kreacher can bring Snape the pain potion :D
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  • From Elphaba on July 16, 2009
    Wow this is a great story and a great twist on the normal. I have read it all in the last day and it is excellent. Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - Profound Yaoi on July 16, 2009
    No! No, no, no! Stupid Harry!
    I thought things would get better for Severus! At least a tiny bit! -pout-
    I felt so sorry for him in the last chapter, too. I can't believe Harry made him bottle his semen.
    You've a brilliant mind for torture, Milady. Lol, I've been told the same thing. I guess it's only fun when you're the one writing it... :P

    Excellent work. I love your writing. Keep up the greatness!
    I just hope our poor Severus is saved, somehow...
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on July 15, 2009
    Wow.... dude, you won't let Severus die, right?
    I hope harry comes to his senses. I feel horrible for Severus, but all this maltreatment and such makes me want to read more. It's so much more satisfying than a story that is aaaaaall fluff. Though, will Harry every come to love Snape?
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  • From ANON - ginnyvere on July 15, 2009
    Wow, you're updating very fast :D

    OMG, I hope Harry will see reason soon! Poor Sev, he surely hasn't deserved that ):

    I'm really curios how it will go on :) It's nice to read a slave-fic with Harry that is still realistic. It's understandable why Harry still hates Snape so much (although I don't like how he handles his hatred) and it's just HARRY that he blames all and everything on Snape. *g*

    *bounces around* Thanks for writing this :)

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  • From arisblaze on July 15, 2009
    Harry's better off losing the child then- there are so many things that can go wrong during labor...
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  • From starstruck86 on July 15, 2009
    Postively snarling at the screen now. Harry is such a tool. Yep. Women might have been doing it for centuries but blokes, not so much.

    I'm very anxious for Severus now and even though I'd love the baby and him to be safe, i'm wondering if them not being is going to kick Harry into sense. Either that or someone else will throw him in a room and beat him up and do it for us, of course.

    Really loving this, moonofthesea, and cannot wait until your next update. xx
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 15, 2009
    Wow. When is Harry going to wake up?
    Good chapter!
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  • From Nikte on July 14, 2009
    HARRY IS A FUCKING ASSHOLE AND I HOPE HE DIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well no, if he dies his suffering will end, I want him to suffer really suffer, I mean, I know men kinda don
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  • From ANON - akaihimena on July 14, 2009
    OMG I cannot believe Harry he is a outright git in this chapter. I feel so bad for Sev. I hope that Poppy gets to him quick. Update soon please! Cliffhangers are mean! XD
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  • From chinohana on July 14, 2009
    I love this. I am in love with this. *hug* Sev needs a hug.
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  • From ANON - Fairner on July 14, 2009
    0.0 you post on hpfandom? i have an account wonder if i should post on there lol.
    anyway poor Sev he's like the middle man now >__< though harry is so cold...if Sev gets hurt more I'll kill Harry myself, hasn't he finished that book yet? *hmph* lol
    ps wonder how Nevile is watching Sev. great chapter, have you thoughts of baby names or am i getting a head of myself....
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