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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From Ravenheart on July 13, 2009
    I feel like everyone's against Harry here, he does need some allies that, while not 'evil' see the whole slave thing the same way he does. I wonder... would Harry push Kingsley and Draco away if they intervene too much?
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  • From Nikte on July 12, 2009
    I feel so sorry for Harry, he is so blind to what is going on, that if he ever realizes the error of his ways, I bet guilty will eat him up, and knowing how emotional he is, I feel that his guilty will kill almost kill him and drive him to do really foolish thing in an attempt to earn forgivness. I really, really want a happy ending, but Harry keeps doing things that are difficult to forgive and forget. Well, I love your story, I think it
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  • From starstruck86 on July 12, 2009
    And there I thought Harry was getting a bit more bearable. :( I just want to kick him in the balls.

    Can't wait for the next chapter, moonofthesea! x
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 12, 2009
    Wow I didnt expect Neville to be doing something like that. All I thought was he just told Mrs. Weasly to help Severus out. OK I really thought that Harry was going to make Severus masturbate infront of him, ah what a dirty mind I have

    Cant wait for more
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 11, 2009
    Another great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Profound Yaoi on July 10, 2009
    This story is amazing!
    You've done a wonderful job.

    I have to say, I hate Harry in this (so far). I usually see him as some kind of weaker... 'being' than Severus in most Snarry fics and the reversal of their roles is wonderful. Even if Harry is a right git! ;)
    I hope Severus' friends can make Harry see the error of his ways. I was so hopeful when he let Severus sleep in his bed without touching him.
    But the pillowcase over Severus' head when Harry raped him again... that was so sad. I have always liked Severus and never thought of him as ugly... so I was a bit angry at Harry for calling him ugly all the time. But I know his constant degrading of Severus is all part of your master plan! (I hope... otherwise; poor Severus!)
    You've established a strong catharsis with your character's and I have enjoyed your story very much! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Nikte on July 08, 2009
    OMG!!!!!!! Glad to see Harry is cracking, even if it is little by little, it
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  • From ANON - Fairner on July 08, 2009
    0.0 that was a scary chapter, poor Gregory and the baby T_T
    That is one way for Sev to be with the baby, but he'll definitely become attached, AHHHH when is Harry going to get his head out of his arse! lol please update when you can!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 08, 2009
    That was a nice plot in getting Severus to stay longer with Harry and the baby. Lovely update
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on July 08, 2009
    Dearest, as the mother of 2 daughters who were born via c-section, I can relate to some of what you were saying. Being a mother is not the birth ritual; its more than feeding a child with your own body. I couldn't breast feed my second child ( I joked that she only wanted me as a friend.)but that did not make her any less precious to me than my first, who I nursed for over a year. I am very close to both of my daughters and the closeness only increases with age. I'm glad you realized that being a mother is more than giving birth. Paraphrasing a poem about adoption: "you din't grow under my heart, but in it." Getting to your story, I can't wait to see how it grows. Harry is slowly becoming less cold and the gradual turn is more realistic than a sudden turn. Keep it up and good luck P.W.
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  • From starstruck86 on July 08, 2009
    I can understand how that would have been hard for you to write, moonofthesea, a very raw issue for many people.

    I am positively jumping up and down here wanting to strangle Harry. I'm glad Dennis lost his illusions with Harry but I hope he can claw them back as, of course, I am hoping Harry will sort himself out.

    Looking forward to the next chapter. x
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  • From SailorSol on July 08, 2009
    This is getting wonderfully twisted.

    So, is this the real Harry, or is he suffering the aftereffects of a curse?


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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 07, 2009
    Wow. That was such an emotionally-intense chapter. The scene with Crabbe and Goyle really hit me.
    Keep going!
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  • From DeminiSSS on July 07, 2009
    I love it. I really do. One question though. Will Harry see the errors of his ways or am I going to be crying for Severus when he's turned out into the strret. Just tell me this is going to have a happy ending. :)
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  • From ANON - Fairner on July 06, 2009
    poor Kretcher i wonder where Harry banished his mistress's belongings.
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