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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From ANON - abbicee on June 30, 2009
    Well I have to say you are hitting two of my kinks with this fic, mpreg and slave fic. LOL, you're hitting a big third with the fact it is Snape who is the slave and pregnant. Harry is being narrow minded in his thinking of Snape and you would think he'd start to rethink some of his prejudices in view of the fact that his friends are so against his plans. Well, hopefully time will mellow him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - YAOIGRIL712 on June 29, 2009
    hi, well what can i said but KILL THAT FUCKING BASTARD OF POTTER, damn sorry for the swering but agrrr i wanna let him in the care of Voldemort, Rastaban, Belatrix and Avery in their most Sadic Specter.

    And i love your story, bye
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  • From mrequecky on June 29, 2009
    OMG, I once started to knit a scarf and let me tell you, even with directions, the beginning I cannot do. The first line is so difficult. I had my step-mom do it for me and then I continued, but starting with nothing and no idea how to knit at all? That is an impossible task...
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  • From ANON - Fairner on June 29, 2009
    another heart wrenching fics =) I love your work despite it pulling at my heart strings T___T please update when you can.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 29, 2009
    Well at least someone still cares for Severus and Draco. I just hope Harry will change
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  • From llyoung on June 28, 2009
    I'm glad Kingsley got Draco. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 28, 2009
    Interesting story so far. I hope Kingsley will be able to turn Severus' situation around!
    Keep going!
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  • From mrequecky on June 27, 2009
    OMG; this story is brilliant! Love the emotions, the hurt. Both of them are so hurt...
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  • From Nikte on June 24, 2009
    OMG!!!!!!!!! Who could thought that Harry could be so cruel? But I just love your story, cause it makes so much sense, I mean, a boy who lost everything because of a crazy man and on top of that had the weight of salvation over his shoulders, it only makes sense that once everything was over he would just crack up and let all his pain out in the most easy way which will be an intense desire of revenge, and since the one directly responsable is dead, he would take it out on the next best one. Anyway, please so need next chapter. xoxoxo
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 24, 2009
    That was just wow, I didnt really expect Harry to be that cruel to him. Its great to see this other side of Harry though
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  • From Nikte on June 24, 2009
    Wow, I
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 22, 2009
    Wow that was just quite something else. Looking forward to more
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  • From mrequecky on June 21, 2009
    Wow, love this already! I wonder what other plans Harry has for Snape...
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  • From ANON - anna on June 21, 2009
    great opening chapter please update soon
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  • From ANON - atypicalsnowman on June 21, 2009
    Oooo, dark. This is only a two parter? Seems as though this would be your new novel-length. I actually reread your slave!Snape story the other day and found myself wondering when you were going to post your new one. Hope to hear from you again soon. If you have an update list, please add me. padme82@yahoo.com
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