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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From mrequecky on May 02, 2010
    wow, loved!
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  • From Veracityrules on May 02, 2010
    Fantastic chapter. Do not doubt yourself or your abilities. You are a brilliant writer, very talented indeed and you have many fans of your work.

    Happy birthday btw.
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  • From Elvira on May 02, 2010
    AAAHHH! Why did you leave it there!!!!

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on May 02, 2010
    Happy Birthday!! My own is in two weeks, Ill be 50. Been reading this story since the beginning. Have enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sticking with it and keep up the good work. Good luck with your project and thanks again.
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  • From ANON - melitabel on May 01, 2010
    Great chapter! So Harry does know he needs to come to terms with what he did, even if Severus doesn't require it of him. Great depiction of the centaurs! I love Shan fishing in the dark. And Harry is getting much wiser, using the plug not only because he knew the idea appealed to Severus but as a measure of whether Severus would take care of himself. Happy birthday! Even if it takes you a while to update, I don't mind because your story is so engrossing and I know, based on your record, you won't abandon it. Real life comes first - it amazes me you were able to keep such a fast pace for so long. I imagine it's getting harder to write now, with so much to tie up. Like your other reviewers, I am in no hurry for you to be done; I like reading about them! And I am waiting for Serena to turn into the little terror you promised us.
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  • From ANON - vampyse on April 28, 2010
    salut je voudrai te dire que j'adore et je veux te poser une question compte tu pousser plus loin dans la domination et pourra tu mettre des sc
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2010
    As always this was insightful and so interesting! I am so glad Harry is being less of an arse... awww they are the cutest couple!
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  • From xmenfreak119 on April 25, 2010
    Okay. I've read all 44 chapters. This story is very sexy. At first I didn't think I'd like reading this story. In fact, to be quite frank, I thought I'd hate it simply because of how it started. But, as a writer myself, I know that you cannot judge an entire story just by the first page, let alone the first chapter. I must say that you have made great progress and I would like to say that you have really grown as an author. I would like to point out, however, just as a courtesy, that there are a few (and yes I do say few) spelling errors that made me cringe just a bit. But, as I understand English is not your native language, it really is difficult. I don't say it to be cruel...just to be honest. I really do love this story though and I do hope you have time to finish this lovely piece. I delight in the fact that Harry has grown in his role as guide and that Severus has finally found his place as sub. The only thing I would like to request is that you add a bit more interaction with Snape and the Centaurs. That was interesting and I would love to see that part progress. Maybe the sub he was speaking with could give Severus some tips on how to understand his feelings more. And perhaps the top could also give Harry guidance, as I'm sure Harry has a little bit of difficulty understanding his own role and Severus' emotions at the same time. All in all, it really is a lovely story and I would love to read more. If you could please give me notice when an update is ready I would love and appreciate it. Thank you.
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  • From countesszero on April 24, 2010
    i am very happy about your a/n in chapter 44 in which you tell us that you are going to continue this story :)
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  • From Spiceholmes on April 19, 2010
    Finally had time to sit and read...

    Oh my you said your going to be up to 50 by the time your done *jumps in joy* I am actually happy as I really don't want the boys to go. Congratulations on all the reviews it's good to hear that this story is doing great.

    As for the chapter, I actually liked the part where Severus is telling Harry about what happened in the cave with the Centaurs, I actually thought it was actually a very important puzzle piece for their relationship. I really don't know if I feel sorry for Severus to get spankings or it's hot. LOL! Overall this chapter was so insightful, your doing great and keep them coming. I cannot wait to see how far the story goes. Good Luck...
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  • From MalfoysBitch on April 17, 2010
    Finally got to read chapter 44!!
    Take your time in writing this one!! I am in no hurry for you to finish it, and i am sure, most of your other readers are to!!
    Keep up the amazing work!!
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  • From mrequecky on April 13, 2010
    I love how Harry really takes his time with coming up for a fitting punishment for Severus. Great chap!
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  • From Elvira on April 13, 2010
    I did like the way you put how Amador feels with his lover, and how Severus feels with Harry are about the same. Great job by the way!

    I can't wait for you to update soon!


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  • From PantherRain on April 12, 2010
    Having worked with submissives, I found this quite interesting. I mean, great story early on. I was reading fairly eagerly waiting for Harry to get his head out of his ass. As a note, a method of punishment I used, rather than denial of sex, was forced disappointment. A command that my pet could not follow/complete. Works well.
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  • From ANON - Callie on April 11, 2010
    I've been reading your story from the beginning and I absolutely LOVE IT! I love all the interplay between Harry and Severus as well as seeing how far they've come since the first chapter until this chapter (chapter 44). I've found that you've stayed in character for all of the characters very well and I think that Richard is a lovely blend of Severus's demeanor as well as Harry's. I thought that Shan and Amador's scene was important to the story and really enjoyed reading about. (A possible spin-off one-shot? :)). Thanks so much for writing this story and updating as much as you do. Can't wait to read more!!
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