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Reviews for Deserving (Final Chapter)

By : tana97
  • From Veracityrules on April 11, 2010
    Great chapter. I liked the scene about the centaurs actually. See you next chappie. ;)
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  • From Jan on April 10, 2010
    I absolutely love this story... at first I couldn't stand the way Harry kept treating Severus, but like most stories that start like that I was hoping that he would change, but I love the fact that even though it's been around 3 years Harry still can't admit or doesn't want to see what he feels for Severus to be love, you didn't just jump from him hating Sev to him just loving him in a blink of an eye. You always have me holding my breath because just when I think Harry can't do any more stupid thing, there he is, with a bloody potion that's meant to castrate Severus. What's next? I can't wait to find out :D

    Please update chapter 44 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2010
    Basically I started reading this story because I had read all the Snarry I wanted to read on this site, however my gosh you surprised me. I didn't really like this story - the first few chapters were wooden, the characters were very two dimensional and extremely out of character. Except the development which has taken place is incredible - I was reading this story at 4am because I just couldn't stop reading.

    I love how the character development is so realistic, and this is an amazing story. I hope you update soon.. please? Pleaaaassse? It really is a brilliant fic, probably one of my favourite Snarry fics of all time. Keep writing, the plot is amazing!
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  • From Kalendral9 on April 03, 2010
    Need more... can't wait...
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 31, 2010
    Wow!!! What a chapter!!! OMG!!!!
    I love the progression of their relationship!!!
    Cant wait for the next update!!!
    LOVE IT!!
    Btw never would guessed the Centaurs would be involved!!!:D
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  • From Veracityrules on March 27, 2010
    Thanks for the update. Serena is a great name for Potter baby #2.
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  • From Spiceholmes on March 27, 2010
    *does a happy dance* Yes, he had the baby and it's a girl AWWWW! But when that mean stupid, dog face Single man came into the house, I wanted to go and give him a piece of my mind. Now, I do hope that they get to became one and their magic connects soon as I feel they don't deserve what it's happening to then anymore, they both have suffer so much. BTW, love the part where he was so jealous because he was speaking with the centaur.

    Keep it up your doing great...no matter how much I have to wait for you're updates, I still think they are so worth it.
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  • From xAingealx on March 19, 2010
    DON'T YOU DARE KILL OFF THAT BABY!!!! I would legit cry if you did.
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  • From Spiceholmes on March 19, 2010
    omg! you left us in a cliff again. Another spectacular chapter the more I read the more I want. Your doing great don't stop. Now, my question: Who could have found Severus? Centaurs? anther creature? Hagrid? Oh, it's so good cannot wait.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 17, 2010
    What a chapter!!Love it!!
    Poor harry,his concern for snape,is so cute!!!
    Cant wait for the next one!!
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  • From Elvira on March 17, 2010
    What is wrong with Severus! How could he do that?

    Update soon!!!!
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  • From Veracityrules on March 17, 2010
    Excellent long awaited update. In this review, I really just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your work, instead of the usual review blurb etc... I look forward to every update and hope that you have a warren full of plot bunnies lurking in your imagination. ;)
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  • From mrequecky on March 16, 2010
    Oh, I just hope the centaurs took him in....
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  • From Kalendral9 on March 16, 2010
    Oh NO!!!! What's gonna happen!?!? K
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  • From Lunarsempai on March 13, 2010
    Draw out Snape's decision a little longer because it seems to me you are rushing a bit.
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