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By : ronsmistress
  • From kazfeist on June 25, 2009
    Hah! Great opening! :D
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  • From RynStar15 on June 25, 2009
    Haha! Tricky tricky...love it! Draco can be very persistant, that's what I love about him. That was great to bring back the notebook. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Robs on June 25, 2009
    Oh dear Hermione...why can't she just admit she has feelings for him and get on with it? Typical Hermione, making things difficult for herself. Ah well...by the sounds of it, Draco is going to find a way to get what he wants. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From starrynite45 on June 25, 2009
    I must say, even though I was warned, that the start is a bit too slow for my liking but I assume that you were trying to prove something out of Hermione. That is, well, she's having issue about commitment. While Draco is criminologist, it's a bit weird that he couldn't at least guess why she has been behaving that way, then he should have approached her in another way. Anyway, I don't want to point out much about that kind of thing since love is always complicate and this is romance fic, lol. And pardon me, it's just my nature to guess the possibility since I'm working in legal career.

    By the way, I rather like the conflict between them. It also makes Hermione sounds more like a real person that's not always perfect. I enjoy reading this story and I'm really looking for more :)
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  • From margaritama on June 25, 2009
    Okay, I'm so sorry but this Hermione is annoying. Not speaking to Draco? Avoiding the issue? Childish and petulance don't become her. What happened to the brave girl from Hogwarts who dealt with Draco when he found the notebook? Sorry! :-)
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  • From margaritama on June 25, 2009
    *pumps fist in air* Hermione doesn't realize he's a man, not a boy. And he is a Malfoy....who always get what they want. He's still in love with her and vice versa. I really don't understand her hesitation to speak with him. Pshaw to her Gryffindor courage damn it, she's a Hufflepuff right now.
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  • From dragongirl on June 25, 2009
    Ok I am intrigue, this is more intense than the first one.. There is no children, I think! But hey Hermione have everything she wanted, so why o why? I think I need to wait on you to see... Keep them coming this is good.
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  • From caseyjarryn on June 25, 2009
    Oh Hermione, would it really be so hard to have a relationship with him??

    great start!! Can't wait for more! :)
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  • From DracoLover69 on June 25, 2009
    I did cry and go mental... but, darling, how ever are you going to manage to do it?? I mean, I'm reading your story "A Little Polishing" and to write both at the same time is hard. Hmmm... you can do it!! Keep writing and I'll keep loving you for it.
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  • From margaritama on June 24, 2009
    Um, he's no boy darling...that right there is a MAN - yes he is!
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  • From ExperienceMyDreams on June 24, 2009
    Glad that you are writing a second part to this story!!! I'm very happy now!!!! Keep updating PLEASE!!!!
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  • From emmibubbles07 on June 24, 2009
    Oooo..nice first chapter! Can't wait to see how this folds out!!
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