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Reviews for Bloody Skies

By : TokiMirage
  • From keraizaki on May 14, 2010
    lol, Awesome ^^ I'm glad those two are friends again, and can't wait to see who Cyrus will hook up with next, lol ^w~ Write more soon please!! :3
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on May 13, 2010
    DAMMIT!!!!! These chapters always end to soon for my liking!!!!! Which I know sounds ridiculous because they are already amazingly long but still, I WANT MORE!!!!(sorry for the whining) I don't mind that Cyrus was accepting of Ash and the break up. I didn't particularly like Ash, but I didn't hate him. This chapter was freaking fabulous!!!! I am sooooooo happy that Cyrus and Yalmireth have made up. XD I also LOVE Cyrus' new Necromancy teacher!!!! He is so much fun!! A high Tara was incredibly funny!! "'Well look at that, she really can fly.'" I couldn't stop laughing. I anxiously await the next chapter update.
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  • From cedarrah19 on April 10, 2010
    Done. Yeah I read the note at the bottom there and I was like *points finger at computer screen* " I REMEMBER THAT NIGHT! I WAS THERE PEOPLE!!" the night I met Roos *happy face* and I can't remember did I help with this chappy too? Love you bunches hun!

    P.S. Last night was suuuuper fun. We should do it again sometime!*winks*
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  • From cedarrah19 on April 08, 2010
    BINDI? WTF? ROTFLMAO!!!! Oh god... that isn't who I think it is...is it? Did you really?
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  • From ANON - tobe on April 04, 2010
    wow i cant beleive it! i got so excited when i saw after being away from the site for a while that there were a heap more chapters!!! i stayed up way too late reading them last night! hope u keep updating im way too curious!!
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  • From ANON - BloodyPanda on March 30, 2010
    I adore this fix! This is my second time through. I was so happy when I came back and had 6 new chapters to read. I really look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From mrequecky on March 30, 2010
    Loved :D Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on March 30, 2010
    I Truly enjoy this fic. The interaction between all the characters are beleivable even in this fantasy setting. It's also a very different concept than a "typical" fan fictioon, very origional and i LOVE reading something that doesn't bore me within the first 3-4 chapters (latley that seems like it happens more and more often) I hope you continue to update, even if it's slowly. As for constructive critisism or input...I am starting to feel like "Cyrus" aka Harry, is becoming a little static, though i can see that you are starting to give him the realization that something is kinda missing on the personal front (his detachment from his bed lover and feeling that something is not quite right or how it was ment to be) I feel a bit like he should start making some more mature decisions at this point... starting to "grow" a little more emotionaly and intellectualy,as well as take more of an interest in the politics he seems to become embroiled in so easily. However... with this New summer training you've mentioned it looks like he might start moving in that direction. PLease, Please continue to wright, even if you don't take my advice or are already planning in that direction to begin with.. I REALLY enjoy this story, and have seen WAY to many fictions abandoned by the way side. (I still have some bookmarked froma year or 2 ago hoping i'll see another chapter posted)

    -sincerely
    Nicole
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on March 29, 2010
    I was so happy to see your update that I almost cried, literally. Your intricate use of detail is astounding. *Bows down before your wisdom* GOD!!! I loved this chapter, like always. I can't wait to see what happens between Cyrus and Ashawyn!!!! Including how Cyrus survives through the rest of the year. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on March 27, 2010
    I just read your AN in chapter 23. I admit that I'm one of those who didn't review after the popping of Cyrus's cherry, as you put it. Reason was not the smut itself, but the fact that I really dislike (hate) Ashawyn, and he took all the fun out of it for me. Sorry, I can't get myself to like him even a little bit.
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  • From ANON - bunnicle on March 23, 2010
    I am currently on chapter 10 of your story and I am in love! This is a fabulous story and I cannot wait to get caught up to the end. But there is something that came to my attention. When Harry first put up the lights in his room to remove the shadows in his room you wrote that he had also put lights under his bed but in chapter 10 you state that the reason Tara was able to get into his room was by the shadows under his bed and that Harry needed to put lights under there. But there are lights because he put them there earlier in the story (couldn't tell you what chapter), so yeah. either there are lights and you should figure out a different way she's getting into Harry's room or you should go take the reference to the light + under bed out.
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  • From cedarrah19 on March 08, 2010
    Ok I'm re-reading after I handed over my other book to you ...have I ever told you, you are a cruel and evil minded person?
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  • From ANON - Katarina on March 05, 2010
    This story is amazing! And I hate that it isnt finished, I dont normaly read wips since I hate not beeing able to read the whole thing at once. But this one I just can't reseist. But I do try to stay away as long as possible to be able to read several chapters at a time.
    Do you write any original fiction?
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  • From EarlyDawn on February 27, 2010
    YES!! YES!! YES YES YES!!! YESYESYESYES!!!!!! I bow down to your in gratitude for posting another chapter. It was like I was thirsty and the only thing near me was a dried out well. So I am ecstatic to see that there is another chapter!!!!! Now onto the other part. OH GOD!! OH GOD !!! OH GOD!!! It is just one thing after another with Cyrus isn't it? And the way your write keeps me totally captivated (which I might add is sometimes a hard thing to do). It is like you have chained me down, wouldn't let me go until sadly it ended too soon, and I loved every minute of it. Are we going to see Yalmereith(incredibly sorry if I spelled it incorrectly)? I kinda miss him.And the plot *thickens*!!! Now Cyrus has a killer after him(not including Voldemort I mean)? I cannot wait to see what Cyrus' illness is(if it has a name), who the killer is, and anything else that happens to Cyrus!!!
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  • From stray523 on February 26, 2010
    I'm really loving the story, but I'd like to see more of Remus and Severus (when they're not in danger of dying) and I'd really like to see Cyrus and Yalmireth mend their friendship. Ashawyn and Cyrus dating no longer squicks me though. :) (this had nothing to do with it being slash, just something about Ash's personality felt slimy the first time I read this) Also, in the chapter in Shelley's Blood Bath, you said Amelia was Bast, but in the Trial you said she was Marinus. I was pleasantly surprised to see another chapter of this story, I thought you had just decided to give up on it or forgotten about. I'm glad it's still going.
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